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Testing The Mic... by Kookny(m): 7:12pm On Sep 05, 2016 |
more like a rap music, trynna save. For the baby ex-sniper, spitt'n fire, it's kookny on nL; |
Re: Testing The Mic... by Kookny(m): 6:45pm On Sep 06, 2016 |
hello guys, please I need reviews on this as this is my first attempt on writing these on NL... constructive criticisms are welcome |
Re: Testing The Mic... by imohchard(m): 8:02am On Sep 08, 2016 |
Its a rap... Poems are not sung.. So they don't have chorus. |
Re: Testing The Mic... by Kookny(m): 5:55am On Sep 10, 2016 |
imohchard: Oh dear! Really? My bad! Thanks for the input. I really appreciate. |
Re: Testing The Mic... by Kookny(m): 6:08am On Sep 10, 2016 |
New stuff: I dey vex yea... these people trynna do d dynasty; dem don't fvckin care 'bout d legacy; dem wine, swine on we bleedin pipy; whareva-cracy dey say, it's a tyranny; we begin to criticize we realized dem despised us in disguise; d vices, chop pies, close eyes and laugh cry, suicide people; I don't blame dem, ve been tied. no, I blame dem, for acceptin ds lies; how do we forfeit ds conflicts? complete; we call 911, dey pick, take to d court, dey judge, nawa o! dem promise fake promise and no promise's did; stupid people, class racism, crass we don't need; my people in agony, how can there be harmony? we still dey dance shoki, dem call us monkey, buh e no funny; we know dey re phoney, dem think we dummy, jus dey travel go Turkey; chai, wicked people, chop our honey, money, still dey find our body; this house we have built with our sweat, CAC; all dem know is to enjoy, kill, PPP, GDP; dey re same people, different brands, DAC, ZPZ; God give us grace to be happy, even in ds country; |
Re: Testing The Mic... by Kruzilano(m): 8:35am On Sep 11, 2016 |
take this to rap section |
Re: Testing The Mic... by Kookny(m): 4:35pm On Sep 13, 2016 |
Re: Testing The Mic... by Kruzilano(m): 7:43pm On Sep 13, 2016 |
Kookny:na em EPP u write am |
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