@ poster,
Have u in any way been to a programme or seminar where you where been thought on how to write? if not then this is very interesting, for heaven sake i thought i could write!!!! but this one is what i could not imagine although peoples thought truly differs, guy!! you have brains, u are well loaded keep it up .

flexystar:

@ poster,
Have u in any way been to a programme or seminar where you where been thought on how to write? if not then this is very interesting, for heaven sake i thought i could write!!!! but this one is what i could not imagine although peoples thought truly differs, guy!! you have brains, u are well loaded keep it up .

dat is it!

adebayo201:

dat is it!

hi adebayo, i didnt hear from u again. did u get the tenth generation? what do u think?

@flexter thanks, trust me, i still have a long way to go. especially with my writing skill, i know my small head is full of good stories, but i dont trust my writing skilllls at all. i am working on it though. thanks anyway

Frank, waa oh! . What a novel.Certainly you can write and very stupendous at that.How can i read your other works especially tenth generation. My only criticism will be on the issue of cain,if you can come up with something closer to reality than cyber ghost,

@izukwu, thanks. i would have loved to let u have tenth generation but, i am working very hard on editing the two books for now. I will also do a lot of work on cyber lover. a lot of thinkgs will be changed. thanks anyway

cool story. i real like it. however u need to watch some things in ur writing. say for example, stories r written in past tense because d story as happened and d narrator is now tellin it. So 'is' becomes 'was', 'tell' becomes told and so on.
but all d same, gud story. keep it moving n i hope u plan 2 publish.

Also @frank3.16
if u hv a couple version of ur story either in pdf or word document, i would love 2 read and give u more feedbacks.
Am also a writer and am writing a new book. i could send some chapters 2 u 4 feedback if u dont mind.
my email is meshark2004@yahoo.com hala @ me.

frank3.16:

hi adebayo, i didnt hear from u again. did u get the tenth generation? what do u think?

im very sorry na skul palava. so ao va?!

Wow,wat a book,wat a story. Frank u re good. Great story line.

I came across your write-up few days ago, I must say this is very nice.
I couldn't comment till I got to the end, was just following it up.
Keep it up guy.

maedan: Sorry guys, I didn't mean Jane, I meant that Brenda is annoying. It's not ur fault, frank 3.16; some will pity her but I think she needs a serious whipping!

Although i'm nt d commenting type, i just want to say when i saw dis, i didn't agree with u. Jane isn't annonying at all. But u're entitled to ur opinion.

@Frank... Frankly speaking,u're too much.
Though i'm yet to read to d end, i enjoy evry bit of what i've read. Weldone!

This is splendid. I'll like to read more of ur stories like 'The Tenth Generation'. And if they're are published, let one know where to get them.
More power to ur elbow.

Woooooow! Atlast i finished,@ OP u r rilli a gr8 writter n i lve u 4 ds. Thumps up...

Dis s 1daful,kip it up. D sky s ur limit

@all who have recently commented on my novel, thanks.

its nice seeing your comments, unfortunately i have not yet published any of my novels. my editor is still working on "cyber lover" although i have not completed his fees due to a little hitch in my financial life. i must comment that he is really doing a great job especially in the area of CAIN. we did a little change in calling him a cyber ghost.

right now i am working on a new family story titled "lost key" which is all about how the loss of the exit door key led to the discovery by a strict and workaholic father that his children had over grown and are learning things about life from the wrong people. even though the key caused him to miss a very important meeting and other work engagements, he discovered there was much about his family he had neglected.
it is an action packed story that started and ended in one torubled home.

now how do i get u all to read tenth generation, perhaps i should post just the first part on nairaland.

once again, thanks

really enjoyed reading through ur love and gory story just like Dean koontz book. More ink to your pen. I hd to wait for the complete story before readng them. Thanks a lot. Wont mind u sending ur other stories to my inbox @ pjthatcher2002@yahoo.com
N.B; their were lots of typos error so just try to watch it and i tink u gave too much details which kind of decreased d suspense and dint make me rack my brain about the likely end to the story. In all it was gud

pepperless: really enjoyed reading through ur love and gory story just like Dean koontz book. More ink to your pen. I hd to wait for the complete story before readng them. Thanks a lot. Wont mind u sending ur other stories to my inbox @ pjthatcher2002@yahoo.com
N.B; their were lots of typos error so just try to watch it and i tink u gave too much details which kind of decreased d suspense and dint make me rack my brain about the likely end to the story. In all it was gud

thanks, i am working on the detail angle with my editor. he said the same thing and made some suggestion. trust me the edited version is is great. why dont you follow me up in my other thread where i am uploading The tenth Generation and tell me what u think also. thanks

M very glad i read dis story. It only took me 3 days to read it. I hate thread wen reading a story, that was why i never commented until the end. Frank, more grease to your elbow. Keep it up. U have a bright future ahead of u. BRAAAAAVVOO

nt fair! Me I cldnt finish ur story cos I can't seem 2 find. D end on dis thread pls pls nd pls I enjoyd every bit of it nd I must say u r one hell of a writer, erm....is dere anyway I can knw wat happened @ d end nd read more of ur stories 2? Pleasee!!!

Ms_ShaQ: nt fair! Me I cldnt finish ur story cos I can't seem 2 find. D end on dis thread pls pls nd pls I enjoyd every bit of it nd I must say u r one hell of a writer, erm....is dere anyway I can knw wat happened @ d end nd read more of ur stories 2? Pleasee!!!

i am really sorry, i had to take out the last part of the story when i found out that is was being copied and pasted on facebook and another person taking credit for my work.
have u read tenth generation? i will post the link, ot u browse tenth generation oon google. when u read it let me know i will see how i can make u get the complete story. thanks

Ok am on it, wl get bac 2 u soonest nd may ur pen neva run dry.

frank3.16:


i am really sorry, i had to take out the last part of the story when i found out that is was being copied and pasted on facebook and another person taking credit for my work.
have u read tenth generation? i will post the link, ot u browse tenth generation oon google. when u read it let me know i will see how i can make u get the complete story. thanks

I googled on tenth generation bt I can't find it so pls herez my email add, b kind enuf 2 send me d link. Thank you mordijuliet@gmail.com

Hello frank,I enjoyed everybit of ur write up,more grease to ur elbow,buh its painful I couldn't get d concludin part,how do I get it plssssss

I bet this write up must published,its a must read,kudos to u Frank,I didn't get d concluding part of tenth generation too,how do I gt it I'm waiting

^^^^^^
dont worry i am working on some copyright issues, i will upload it by next weekend.

Can u plz repost d remaining story. I couldn't also get to the concluding part of tenth generation

*Brings in my seat*

Hello Frank,u promised to update d concluding part this weekend,still expecting it!

ok, guys, i have uploaded the remaininh part of the story. pls read and drop your comments. NB: will b publishing the edited copy next month, a lot of work and modification have been done you might not recognize the story, so pls watchout.