It started with a kiss,
and ended with a heartbreak.
-The Amaka
(c)2009

Review: "It started with a kiss and ended with a heartbreak" by The Amaka is sensational, page-flipping romantic comedy at its best, although some parts of the story may be a pain in the ass if you do not understand subtle satire. Overall, its a must-read! 

ladijacobs:



It started with a kiss,
and ended with a heartbreak.
-The Amaka
(c)2009

Review: "It started with a kiss and ended with a heartbreak" by The Amaka is sensational, page-flipping romantic comedy at its best, although some parts of the story may be a pain in the ass if you do not understand subtle satire. Overall, its a must-read!

lmao!!! lolol

LOL @ladijacobs.

Amaka, like I said, you know better but can't you see he's sprung? I've dealt with internet retards like this in the past so I know. Don't lead them on.

@Ogidiboy, now what were you saying again about my Celtics? Yea, I thought as much!!

chiogo:

LOL @ladijacobs.

Amaka, like I said, you know better but can't you see he's sprung? I've dealt with internet retards like this in the past so I know. Don't lead them on.

@Ogidiboy, now what were you saying again about my Celtics? Yea, I thought as much!!

Whatever sis, it's just the first game, it was a good game though

chiogo:

LOL @ladijacobs.

Amaka, like I said, you know better but can't you see he's sprung? I've dealt with internet retards like this in the past so I know. Don't lead them on.

@Ogidiboy, now what were you saying again about my Celtics? Yea, I thought as much!!

yeah yeah i know!
im not dumb.

THE AMAKA:

yeah yeah i know!
im not dumb.

Who said you're dumb? you keep repeating "I'm not dumb", I'm sure you're not or are you?

Chei, I'm still dying @ "your father is pedophilia". pheww!!! Nairaland

chiogo:

Who said you're dumb? you keep repeating "I'm not dumb", I'm sure you're not or are you?

Chei, I'm still dying @ "your father is pedophilia". pheww!!! Nairaland

okay
whatevs.

:-x

PAININASS:

Stop kidding pls tell me your age

u really need to stick to your white girl as u are totally clueless about nigerian girls.  how many nigerian girls u know will tell u their true age on a public forum? 

OgidiBoy:

The celtics are goin to have their ass handed to them tonight j/k

men those mavs are getting on my nerves!

na2day?:

u really need to stick to your white girl as u are totally clueless about nigerian girls.  how many nigerian girls u know will tell u their true age on a public forum? 



men those mavs are getting on my nerves!

WAIT, HE IS WITH WHITE A GIRL?
i thought he said he was in germany with white friends, i didnt think he said his gf was white.
lololol
LMFAO!!
_yuck!

THE AMAKA:

WAIT, HE IS WITH WHITE A GIRL?

_yuck!

Racist alert

Uche2nna:


Racist alert

lmaoooo
i was jk-ing
but i dont think he said his GF was white, just that his friends were white.
or did i miss something?

i dont care anyway.
toodles!

now back to my story. lol



PART 2 IS COMING SOON!!!!!!
*hopefully*

THE AMAKA:

now back to my story. lol

PART 2 IS COMING SOON!!!!!!
*hopefully*

Part 2 will end with a heart transplant, when the former ones have broken so badly that they cant be patched together again, like humpty dumpty. What a pain in the heart,

Uche2nna:


Racist alert

no bi small thing

your writing is ok, but it was a bit on the average side. You used the first person narrative a lot, which is an easy style of writing- because you get more leeway in your ability to control the story as well as draw people into the plot.

I would like to see more third person writing especially in nigerian novels. The problem is that writers like Adichie and Achebe, use the first person story style a lot- probably it is very close to the way African's tell their story- you can see the patterns of igbo style story telling in both their works. however, I am not a big fan of the first-person style, though i think Nigerians, are exceptional at it.

By the way Amaka, do you want to cowrite aa novel with me- you can write the erotica part since you have such a vivid imagination and I could just write the non-shagging part?

thanks Mr. Teacher
as i said, i didnt put a lot of thought into it.
i wrote it in the span of 30minutes
i didnt intend for it to be all "blah gljgoiwg rngew " or whatever else you were saying.
no need to go all Mr. Teacher on me.

and who said this was a nigerian novel? its just a story.


nah i cant co-write with you.
you already told me, MY WRITING SUCKS!! 

i didnt say it sucked, i said i didnt like the style- two very different things. I wanted you to convert to my style in case you wanted to be a writer. Obviously not. so you just wanted praise and no criticism?

no but im just saying.
man whatevs.

midterms, er ?

goodbye!

lol, i was just asking because i see u posting randomly how much work you have, and since u are prolly in the US- from what i have read-, and this is midterm periods, i am asking.

anyways i do have better things to do myself.

au revoir

its called multi-tasking. 
leave me alone jo!

I wish
, but this is not FACEBOOK

.

Now, you know what am talking about They wanna roll. . . And there's a fire burning in her heart. She has the eyes of a phoenix, a girl of action. Dull things get her bored. But she likes having fun. And money always comes to her easily. Yeah, we have peeped through mirrors, over the fence, through windows and key holes. My precious. We know all about her. Catch!!!

I just love erotica romance

y ar u guys beefing her just appreciate a gud stuff wen u see 1 am glad the story is gud enof 2 cause troubles well done amaka somtimes u nid 2 kip ur works wen u kn they gona be treated wit contempt am a prety gud writer 2 do send me a mail or cal nd lets xchange works nd share views on subsequent works i will send u sth 4rm my finished book dont let anyone discourage u u are gud lordfigo4chizzo@yahoo.com 07039412238

And it ended with beefing, disagreement and an argument.

aaaaaaahhhhh