Nikkybrainz:
Fantastic story. I can't wait to see where it leads. Just listen to the advice given by the grammarians and proofreaders in the house. I'm a babywriter myself. Really engaging story

Honoured to have you here beautiful sis. Babywriter?? Ironically.

patjane:
Keep it up dear"lovely story. still waiting 4 your update

Thanks dear. Update is here!!!!

timmykaydude:
nice story,thumbs up

Thanks dear!

Nice story keep it coming

hv bin glued 2 ma fone since I stumbled on dz....
Good story line by d way...
derez notyn new 2 point out dan wat odas hv said buh I tynk u re actually over exaggerating in some parts, plz work on dat......plz mention me in ur next update

I am anxious about how this story will turn out.......
Btw you described yourself fully....thought you were joking when you said have big eye balls......

Angelinastto:

Lol i smell cow.

Haba! Cow is too big nah

Angelinastto:

Lol,do u see competition here? Maybe i need my goggle cos ion see any.
Thanks bro.

i hav just given u an angle to explore, haahaa

Interesting read so far,work more on your punctuation. Thumbs up.

Angelinasto, copy me when u update ooo

CONTINUATION

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I woke up on Saturday morning early, i had so many thought on my mind, part of it was about Nelly's health condition. I got out of my night wear and went to my mom's room. I met her dressing up already, i greeted her and she hugged me before responding. She noticed my mood and she asked what was wrong with me. I told her how worried i was over Nelly's health, she then went ahead to explain that Nelly is a sickler because her dad is also a sickler but he is able to stay healthy because of his regular medical checkup and treatment. She also pointed out that the same treatment is been administered to Nelly and i have nothing to worry about. I hugged mom and felt relived, i also told her about our outing with Jordan and she was in support of it. I had breakfast with mom before she left for her super market.
Nelly called at 9:00am to inform me she was already on her way,i also called Jordan and he told me he was already at the gym. I got ready for the gym and informed kelvin of my departure. Nelly arrived by 9:30am and we both left for the gym in her car.
We got to the gym but i could not locate Jordan,i was about calling him when i heard somebody say "Looking for me?" behind me. I turned and saw Jordan sweating and drinking from a bottle of water. He was wearing a body hug shirt which revealed his well built muscle, i could hear Nelly murmuring 'Woah'. I do not blame her even myself at that particular moment was tripping for Jordan's body. I smilled and hugged jordan and i could tell he was suprised but he received the hug. I released myself from Jordan's arm and introduced Nelly to him. He expressed his suprise in words and joked about hoping to marry the two of us in future. We all laughed and i hit him playfully. After spending close to an hour at the gym, i suggested we call it a day because i was starving due to the exercise.Both jordan and nelly laughed at me before I left the gym with Nelly and she had fruit with me before leaving. After Nelly's departure the Saturday was boring and so was the early hours of sunday.
Mom got me a beautiful and sexy pink gown to grace Jordan's party with a beautiful set of diamond jewelry. She practically dressed me up for the party and my mom's fashion taste was awesome,even Kelvin could not hide his surprise when he saw me fully dressed for the party. He showered me with compliment before i left for the party.
I arrived at Jordan's residence at 7:00pm and he could not hide is suprise as he kept on saying "You look beautiful Nancy". Jordan's parent welcomed me warmly and he led me to the party. The party was more of a get together than a birthday party. People were sitted in groups as they chat and laugh loudly. Jordan introduced me to some of the guest, after which we settled down with them. The weather was getting cold and my short dress did close to nothing in protecting me from the cold, Jordan noticed i was feeling uncomfortable and he asked if i would love to go inside,i agreed and we excused ourself from the gathering.
Jordan opened the door to a room and he said "Welcome to my beautiful room". Indeed the room was beautiful but his self praise would not let me agree to it. Jordan excused himself to the rest room after we entered. I looked around his room and i was shocked to see a huge picture of myself and Jordan. I looked at the picture closely and i remembered it was the picture we took together at Vectoh's studio. I could not help but admire the picture, i touched the big frame and memories of that day came into my head. Judging from the picture we will make a perfect match.
" Why not touch the living me,instead of the lifeless picture?" Jordan said from the door.I turned and smilled. He came close to me and said "seriously touch me" i stood fixed to a point without a response. He took my hand and placed it on his chest. I looked away shyly and he said "can you feel my heart beat? Its beating for you Nancy. I don't know how but am falling uncontrollably for you every second. I know you feel something for me,please dont say no to Us" I did not know what or how to feel,i opened my mouth to utter a word but it was dry. My thought was interupted with Jordan's touch on my cheek,i could feel my body vibrate as he placed his lips on mine.
I wanted to stop but i ended up wrapping my hands around his neck as we kissed. It felt so real and beautiful,i was in paradise. Jordan brooke the kiss and lifted my head to meet his gaze before saying "Will you be mine Nancy?" I responded with a nod and he said he needed an answer. I said yes and he lifted me from the ground into his arms. It felt too good to be real but i felt love and comfort.
My phone started to ring and the caller I.D was my mom's,without been told i knew its time to leave.I told Jordan and we made for the door.I was about opening the door when he pulled me back and claimed my lips.

Flat battery. Goodnight people!

Angelinastto:

Thanks bro. About the next episode leading you to the title, its a No. The story still has a lonnnnggg way to go. God bless you for me for the corrections.

okay then, we dey behind you, madame.

Op, Like baba Zion, this is 9ice
I guess u re well familiar with ilorin city

Great job sis...#polydipsiaforyourstoryalready

nawtielizzie:
hv bin glued 2 ma fone since I stumbled on dz....
Good story line by d way...
derez notyn new 2 point out dan wat odas hv said buh I tynk u re actually over exaggerating in some parts, plz work on dat......plz mention me in ur next update

Thanks dear. Sorry for not mentioning last night.

coltaine:
I am anxious about how this story will turn out.......
Btw you described yourself fully....thought you were joking when you said have big eye balls......

Lol, seriously you got me laughing. So my eye balls are big abii?

DTOBS:
Angelinasto, copy me when u update ooo

Swidy sorry i was not able to mention. My battery died.

Missmossy:
Interesting read so far,work more on your punctuation. Thumbs up.

Am greatful for the correction Ma'am. God bless you for me.

chinedumo:

i hav just given u an angle to explore, haahaa

Lol. Am liking you already. Thanks dear.

xamster:
okay then, we dey behind you, madame.

Like hunch back right? It will be beautiful to have you here throughout the ride.

swaggzDawg:
Op, Like baba Zion, this is 9ice I guess u re well familiar with ilorin city

Thanks. Yes o. I was born and brought up there.

jehomed:
Great job sis...#polydipsiaforyourstoryalready

Lol, am flattered. Thanks bro.

Angelinastto:

Like hunch back right? It will be beautiful to have you here throughout the ride.

u welc

Chapter3 Episode1

THIS WAS THE BEGINNING OF A NEW CHAPTER OF MY LIFE AND THE BEGINNING OF NEW THINGS. MY LIFE DRASTICALLY TOOK A NEW TURN.

After ending the kiss with Jordan,i left for home. Throughout the ride home,i was feeling fly and my joy knew no bound. I rushed into mom's arms immediately i got home,she could tell i was happy but she thought i was been greatful for the dress. After hugging mom,i went to kelvin's room and i told him about Jordan,he was happy for me and he hugged me before i left. When i got to my room,i called khole and she kept on screaming 'yes!' into my ears. She promised to come over the following day to celebrate. Jordan also called before i slept, he made beautiful promises of love and i was overwhelmed. When joy know no bound,it brings about tears. I cried to bed feeling too happy and greatful to the lord. Most especially for having love around me.
The following morning,Jordan woke me up with a phone call,after which he sent a beautiful sms,love is beautiful. I greeted mom and prepared for school. Getting anxious at what Nelly's reaction would be when i tell her about Jordan. I went to school in a happy mood.
I had lunch with Nelly and i told her about Jordan.Actually she asked after Jordan first. I could sense that Nelly was not genuinely happy when i told her about my new relationship status with Jordan so i had to change the topic. The day ended on a boring note as Nelly started acting cold.
On my way home,i called Khole and she told me she was on her way already. I got home 3:00pm and mom was fully dressed for shop. I hugged her and she asked if i would love to come with her. I told her khole was coming over so i had to be home. Mom said she felt like driving herself and she left alone in her hilux without a driver. I had a change of cloth and informed Kelvin that Khole would be coming over.
Khole arrived at 4:00pm and i was super excited to see her. She did not wait to settle down before she started asking me about jordan. I told her everything that happened and she started teasing me. She brought up the happenings of the day we met Jordan and she had fun laughing alone. I made to pull Khole's hair but the ringing of my phone stopped me. The caller I.D was my mom's so i hurriedly pick the call and said "Hey momma" i was expecting my mom's laughter from the other end but all i heard was the voice of a complete stranger. "Please the owner of this phone was involved in an accidents and she has been rushed to general hospital,please be there on time" the stranger ended the call and i could feel sweat all over me, everywhere became dark and i was lost for a minute. Khole noticed my mood and asked me what happened, i stammered and said "My mom...accident...hospital..." khole quickly picked up my phone and called my mom back. The stranger picked up again and i heard khole asking questions from him.
I did not know how i got to the hospital cos i was so destabilized but i saw myself there with khole and kelvin. Immediately we got to the hospital i rushed to the reception,i asked the nurse on duty about an accident victim that was rushed in some minutes ago. She told us her ward and said the doctor was stil attending to her so we had to wait. Few minutes later a nurse came out of the ward and she asked for 'Nancy' she said the patient was requesting to see me. I rushed into the room and what my eyes saw shattered my world.
I could not believe my eyes, my mom was healthy some minutes ago and now in great pain. My mom had a deep cut on her head,and i could not even see her legs. Is it that her legs disappeared or Was it my eyes? I do not know. I moved closer to mom and held her hand, her hand was shaking but she managed to touch my cheek. She looked deep into my eyes and said "My baby....Nancy.....Be STRONG....". That was mom's last word before she started breathing heavily,i grabbed her hand tightly and kept on screaming "Mom!!!! Dont leave me,remember you are my world! My pillar! My everything!!. Mom without you....without you mom there is no me. Mom say something! Talk to me mom!! Why cant you be strong? For me mom, BE STRONG!". I started to cry as i screamed, mom continued to shake and a nurse forcefully took me out when the doctor said she would be rushed to the E.R (Emergency Room). I came out of the ward and went into khole's arm,she was also in tears as she asked me what happened. I was yet to answer Khole's question when my mom was wheeled out of the ward.
Mom what is life, if you are not here with me? theres no love without you mom,everywhere is dark! So dark that i cant see whats before me mom. Why did'nt I go with you when you asked me to come? Come back to me mom! Dont you ever think of going away!" i shouted without minding the people staring at me. Kelvin moved closer to me and said there was stil hope, doctors perform wonders in E.R and all we had to do is PRAY! I cried and prayed, hoping for a miracle.
T.B.C

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nelly,nancy & jordan,let d fight 4 love begin.

Hmm............ Wowww

I see Nancy going through a lot in the coming years
Jordan and Nelly hooking up
Kelvin standing strong for Nancy and the rest will be history as they do say

Angelinastto, well done dear

chinedumo:
Wow. Interesting. Enjoying the story o angelinastto.

Kelvin vs rude boy

who will win her heart?

Me

chinedumo:
Wow. Interesting. Enjoying the story o angelinastto.

Kelvin vs rude boy

who will win her heart?

Me

elskillful:
nelly,nancy & jordan,let d fight 4 love begin.

at this point of death this is what you are thinking?

Kelvin vs jordan
nancy vs nelly

mrklock:

Me
Me

no offense

i dont see anything faboulus about Nancy yet

This Story is superb, i sight u op!