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| My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 3:25pm On Dec 28, 2006 |
THREE YEARS ON , Three years on and I still feel it, The words come back in a piece and bit, My heart’s still hollow and Deeps run shallow, All the way down to the marrow, Eternally, tis’ now like a vice, For thine memories still locks me in a vise … Rains have come, And storms long gone, Thought I’d seen it all, Standing strong and tall, Seein’ out the darkness of the nightfall, Heard the healing balm of Venus’ call, Above the dirge of your pall, But three years on and I still feel bit Like I’ve only just been hit … You still stop my heartbeat, Make my pulse rise and heat, Still sweep me off my feet … Three years on and you still fill my every thoughts’ And like t’was on that cold, cold night, I still feel the hurt … Always wish for you … The moon is here again, With that silvery glow of endless July, She washes every in her path, Lights casting mystic circles of radiance on lakes and seas, As blue as a dreams nested with specks of reflections, Waters sleeping under a hazy sky, Gray and blue all at once … On a distant hill loons cry, Sharp shrills breaking into the still air, Their voices like loss, Faintly I see the outlines, Venus in the darkening sky, Star light … star bright, Wish I may … wish I might, In these dreams, I always wish for you … Cry … You’re hurt and banking it all inside, Locking all the emotion in that lil' purple chest within, But someday, It'll explode, Crack open and spew forth its contents like volcanic cones, The banks will overflow and you’ll cry … Ooh … how you’ll cry! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by hola2ng(m): 4:41pm On Dec 28, 2006 |
Intense. Brilliant depth of imagination. |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by odada(m): 12:38pm On Jan 09, 2007 |
hmnn what can i say,its brilliant i like the idea, the way u constructed the headers and leading us into ur world, three years on!always wish for u !and cry!rock on bro,bigup  |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 3:11pm On Jun 01, 2007 |
always wish for you is my fav |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 3:58pm On Jun 14, 2007 |
& its dedicated to da IICiest !  |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 5:30am On Jun 15, 2007 |
Oh Ok! thanks o! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 11:38am On Jun 28, 2007 |
@ iicey, never figured you'd be into poetry! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 3:18am On Jun 29, 2007 |
Indeed  My favorite thou are those brimming with depression and sadness Not really into all that roses are red, violets are blue. . . .  |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 12:07pm On Jun 29, 2007 |
iice: Poetry ain't particularly the average-individual-on-the-street zone; i mean there are lots of other stuff people would rather put there heads into ! iice: I dig --- i k'inda like 'em too; much more realistic in a whole l'otta ways ! had a bad experience in the past with romance or something  nawtty, nosy, RuuDie don't see any poems of yours around --- do you write ? |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 2:15pm On Jun 29, 2007 |
RuuDie: True, i wasn't into it when i was younger. . .the love came slowly RuuDie: Yup, i agree with the realistic thing. . .just kind of fascinating the anger, pain, nostalgia, the sorrow Nah have never had a bad experience with romance lol, it just the depth range of the human emotions that i find captivating I write some but more like doodling Haven't had time to polish that art and usually it hits me at odd times, i just write something down and then put it somewhere. . .and eventually forget about where i put them. . . |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 2:40pm On Jun 29, 2007 |
still upset would love to see some of the stuff you've written bet they'd sound weird ! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 3:48pm On Jun 29, 2007 |
upset? Oh on the Romance Section?I guess you really are a poet. . .sensibilities and emotions You shouldn't be you know. . .or maybe you can use that emotion to pen up something for us Hah! weird is definitely part of it |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 5:06pm On Jun 29, 2007 |
iice: making fun of me getting my 2nd person upset ain't good for ur health oh  iice: so when are g'onna post one of 'em i w'anna see 4 myself ! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 3:43am On Jul 01, 2007 |
Ah ah lol! 2nd person huh? Am intrigued Ehh iice does not post things like that |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by nuggard(m): 3:54am On Jul 01, 2007 |
sounds like the draft of "my life as a shit head" |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 4:46pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
iice: got different persona for the different scenerios or so i'm made to believe iice: I'll try my darnest to make u - okay howz 'bout u send 1 of 'em 2 me ! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 4:50pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Do tell Ahahahaha try oh. . .do try! Bumped into a brick wall lately? |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 5:14pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
iice: always suffer from these crazy-ass bouts of mood-swings that you'd almost think you was dealing with different peeps and i really do feel different when this happens like i'm me but yet someone else - like being on the outside and looking in at yourself ! iice: i'm pretty used to being brick-walled c'os i'm k'inda like a master of the art me'self but i just w'anna see what you've written and i get this feeling i won't be brick-walled here ! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 5:22pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
RuuDie: Very interesting. . .i have bouts of mood swings too. . .my ex used to say 'Your brain don dey torch again eh' RuuDie: Ahhhhhh. . .that feeling eh. . .do re-evaluate it My writings are pretty much for me There was this one time, i was in a 'zone'- lets say Wrote like pages of stuffs. . .my ex collected it. . .still with him i guessThe other stuffs i wrote, they are somewhere in my room. . .but nahhhh they are just random thoughts |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 5:28pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
iice: know the feeling oh . . . my own, everybody go jus leave me waka or me myself go lock myself out ! it's really embarassing when i'm in a jolly bunch and all of a sudden, i just switch off - so embarassing c'os i can't explain myself. a lot of people have labelled me "snob" c'os of this ! iice: but you do get the urge to show 'em to some1 once in a while, don't you ? |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 5:32pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Hah! My friends know i can be torching @ any moment They are usually sweet and irritating. . .sweet as in trying to understand whats up and trying to draw me out. . .irritating that they wont bloody leave me to enjoy the mood No i don't get that urge. . .like i don't get the urge to reveal stuffs |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 5:41pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
iice: now you're sounding like a martian - everybody's got privates and every now and then they just let out a peek. besides, its not g'onna come back to haunt you in anyway . . . . for all we know beyond this forum, there ain't g'onna be any form of contact! i'm just being the poet here not a pirate! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 5:49pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Oh you never knew i was from Pluto by way of Saturn? Yes o, i don't get the urge to reveal stuffs. . .you wouldn't even believe how much i reveal to most people Eyah, i applaud you for trying, really i do. . .but like i said - brick wall if the heavenly bodies align, and i am in one of those yielding moods, i might send you something, not a promise! but those flights of fancy rarely occur |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 6:05pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
i'm sure you're joking about not revealing stuff c'os you have revealed a lot more than you might think. so what if we do set up shop for a poetry anthology like someone proposed and we said "IICEY, give one or two of your bling-blingy writes" would you oblige ? |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 6:15pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Ahhh but you see that's the beauty of the human brain Sometimes, i work an angle. . Those secret organizations should have contacted me, i would have been a wonderful addition to their organization You have a general idea of the person i am but that's just a small part of me You cannot even imagine the maze up in there Sorry, even if Oprah asked, it will not be forthcoming. |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 8:45pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Nobody ever has total knwledge of anyone else. . . Its all basically generals, very l'il specifics! |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 8:55pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Ok, i'll lay off since i can't get thru d frost. . . But i'll be holdin on 2 d hope dat ur rare bout of yieldin mood comes 'rnd soonest! Lol |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 9:34pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
I'ma just sit & wait. . . . |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 6:03am On Jul 12, 2007 |
RuuDie. . .nah not talking total knowledge but a very big understanding of the person. Soon? Don't hold your breath Not feeling it. . .maybe when the rains come or when the land is covered in colors |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 10:24am On Jul 12, 2007 |
iice: RuuD's a very patient kid ! what's with u 'n 3/4/5 am browsing |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 11:58am On Jul 12, 2007 |
Good good. . .patience has its virtues they say RuuDie: That means? |
| Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 1:02pm On Jul 13, 2007 |
means - the timing of some of your posts . . . they tells me you is usually online 'round 3, 4, 5 A.M Nigerian time. just wondering - however, you're under no obligation whatsoever to respond, you can just ignore the question ! |
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