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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:14pm On Apr 09, 2018
Oluwason:
Wow, this is indeed beautiful! Kudos to guys.

thanks
Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:14pm On Apr 09, 2018
Tadeknkeepcalm:
And here I thought poetry never made frontpage
so I thought
Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:14pm On Apr 09, 2018
QTEST007:
Amazing guys
thanks
Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:20pm On Apr 09, 2018
TheSociopath:
Hey, howdy. Just tried to read up on your diary and it's hidden. How's that?
Probably network or something.. You can try now cool
Re: I'm Me by Oluwason(m): 7:13pm On Apr 09, 2018
Pranaya:
thanks
U welcome
Re: I'm Me by TheSociopath(m): 8:07pm On Apr 09, 2018
Pranaya:
Probably network or something.. You can try now cool

Thanks dear

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Re: I'm Me by Nobody: 11:06pm On Apr 09, 2018
Pranaya:
Wow.. Nice one.. Me likey smiley smiley

Thanks

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Re: I'm Me by Nobody: 9:13am On Jun 24, 2019
Pranaya:
Wow! I love this kiss


Hi pranaya, im working on a poem, i would love if we could share ideas on it, work together.

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:01am On Jun 27, 2019
Drabeey:



Hi pranaya, im working on a poem, i would love if we could share ideas on it, work together.
Hello. When you're ready, i'm in
Re: I'm Me by Nobody: 3:38pm On Jun 27, 2019
Pranaya:
Hello. When you're ready, i'm in

I sent a pm
Re: I'm Me by Angelina996(f): 9:41am On Aug 31, 2019
Wow!! This poem inspires me a lot. Me!!!

And this prompts me to submit this here too, for correction or otherwise. Thanks.

Me
Hard to see through
Difficult to fathom
Strong in my frailty
Beauty redefined
Passionately loving all
The sister you beg to have
Obediently cleaving and following
The daughter you pray to have
Heart, pure as gold
Truthful to all and sundry
Answering their call of desperation
Ever ready, filling all to fullness
Heartily crying out to another.
22/8
Ninmayo


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Re: I'm Me by Britboy(m): 12:34pm On Nov 15, 2019
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Re: I'm Me by maynation(f): 1:45pm On Nov 15, 2019
Britboy:
Kindly reach out, ok?
I promise, I don't bark, let alone bite. wink
Cheers!
WhatsApp: 07056267413



maynation



You need to stop disturbing my mentions as it's getting annoying.


Goodday.
Re: I'm Me by Britboy(m): 2:05pm On Nov 15, 2019
maynation:



You need to stop disturbing my mentions as it's getting annoying.


Goodday.
My apologies.
Cheers!
sad
Re: I'm Me by Kingsteve(m): 9:59am On Dec 04, 2019
You good?
It's been a while.
Just reaching out...
Miss you loads.
Take care!







maynation
kiss

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Re: I'm Me by maynation(f): 10:20am On Dec 04, 2019
Kingsteve:
You good?
It's been a while.
Just reaching out...
Miss you loads.
Take care!







maynation
kiss

Thanks for reaching out my sweetest.
Miss you much more.
kiss kiss

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Re: I'm Me by Kingsteve(m): 10:31am On Dec 04, 2019
maynation:


Thanks for reaching out my sweetest.
Miss you much more.
kiss kiss
Gracias!
I appreciate.
kiss

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Re: I'm Me by Kingsteve(m): 7:15am On Dec 05, 2019
Good morning.

I felt I should get this off my mind.
I can't remember meeting a lady that isn't afraid of expressing herself emotionally in writing, just like you do.

For that alone, you're already special to me.
Your beauty is exotic
You're romantic
It makes me wonder
Is your zodiac sign Cancer?
No one loves better than cancerians.
I'm one!

Thinking out loud...
'If only we could make our convos more private...'
Have a good day and get well soon.

Much love!


maynation

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Re: I'm Me by adonisechi: 7:01am On Dec 14, 2019
Let me type something.
I wish you enjoy the read sha




I'M ME


I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the son of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand




You judge me by my flaws
You strive to see my imperfections
You look me through the prism of judgement
You wish I lack what makes me ME
And then you wish my imperfections are more





I'm me because He made me so
He made you so, so you could be you
Be you at all times and never a waste of you
A waste of you you are if you choose to be her
For to be her is to complete the script of this crazy world.






Things that I do I do with ease
And that's because that's just me
I do not struggle to be me
It'll take more nuclear power to shatter me;
More than that which will bring Russia to her knees.






Truly, I'm me the world should understand
Every step that I take I must bear the brunt
Right or wrong you must understand
I'm me whether ME likes it or not
Your loathings and judgment I care not.

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Re: I'm Me by AndyAustin(m): 4:03pm On Dec 29, 2019
shocked shocked cool

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Re: I'm Me by iezeiyida(m): 12:40am On Jan 31, 2020
Wow!��

This poem is so so beautiful! I love it so much because it reflects so many things to my mind! Thank you dear Pranaya! You are great!� God bless

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Re: I'm Me by iezeiyida(m): 1:05am On Jan 31, 2020
Pranaya:
Awwweww. Andyaustin this is beautiful all the way. A very nice version I must say. Otherroom where art thou?

AndyAustin The other room really made it superb!� I'm loving it all mehn! ��

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 2:22am On Jan 31, 2020
iezeiyida:
Wow!��

This poem is so so beautiful! I love it so much because it reflects so many things to my mind! Thank you dear Pranaya! You are great!� God bless
Awwwww. I should rather say a big thank you for the kind words. It's good to know much as the poem is old, you still consider it good. Thank you! And may we get more reflections from the things we read and see. Thank you again and sleep well

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 2:28am On Jan 31, 2020
Kingsteve:
Good morning.

I felt I should get this off my mind.
I can't remember meeting a lady that isn't afraid of expressing herself emotionally in writing, just like you do.

For that alone, you're already special to me.
Your beauty is exotic
You're romantic
It makes me wonder
Is your zodiac sign Cancer?
No one loves better than cancerians.
I'm one!

Thinking out loud...
'If only we could make our convos more private...'
Have a good day and get well soon.

Much love!


maynation


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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 2:31am On Jan 31, 2020
adonisechi:
Let me type something.
I wish you enjoy the read sha




I'M ME


I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the son of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand




You judge me by my flaws
You strive to see my imperfections
You look me through the prism of judgement
You wish I lack what makes me ME
And then you wish my imperfections are more





I'm me because He made me so
He made you so, so you could be you
Be you at all times and never a waste of you
A waste of you you are if you choose to be her
For to be her is to complete the script of this crazy world.






Things that I do I do with ease
And that's because that's just me
I do not struggle to be me
It'll take more nuclear power to shatter me;
More than that which will bring Russia to her knees.






Truly, I'm me the world should understand
Every step that I take I must bear the brunt
Right or wrong you must understand
I'm me whether ME likes it or not
Your loathings and judgment I care not.
Well done Adonisechi! Well written.
Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 2:35am On Jan 31, 2020
Angelina996:
Wow!! This poem inspires me a lot. Me!!!

And this prompts me to submit this here too, for correction or otherwise. Thanks.

Me
Hard to see through
Difficult to fathom
Strong in my frailty
Beauty redefined
Passionately loving all
The sister you beg to have
Obediently cleaving and following
The daughter you pray to have
Heart, pure as gold
Truthful to all and sundry
Answering their call of desperation
Ever ready, filling all to fullness
Heartily crying out to another.
22/8
Ninmayo


Tags: Pranaya, OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules,
okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi,
Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz,
firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho,
maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol,
mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver.

Heiy Angelina996, well done! It's brilliant for everyone to be coming up with a version of this. Well done once again.

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Re: I'm Me by Kingsteve(m): 9:06am On Jan 31, 2020
Pranaya:
Sincerely, I'm just seeing this. Honestly short of words. That poem was written on my birthday that year and it truly came from a place of reflection.

My zodiac sign is not cancer. I think zodiac is mixed up for me. Sometimes I'm called libra and at other times, I'm called scorpio. I fall on a cusp, that is libra-scorpio cusp. Probably the reason I have a touch of the emotions, lol smiley Would have love to go more private with you but unless on extremely exceptional grounds, I do not accept PMs. Pardon me for that smiley Truly grateful for the kind words and thank you for baring you mind wink

Goodmorning poet.
Sorry for the mixup!
Re: I'm Me by bukolaademi001(f): 3:35pm On Jul 18, 2022
Hi good afternoon. I'm sorry I came under a old post to say this. But I really enjoyed reading your diary. I could relate to some parts and turns out you went to the same uni I'm in. How I found out? The beginning part of your diary you mentioned "Town" "Midas". How you took bike from town to your hostel for the first time and the ride was very cool. I'm sure I'm probably not really making sense but I really enjoyed your diary!! It was Soo interesting to read.

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 12:53pm On Jul 20, 2022
bukolaademi001:
Hi good afternoon. I'm sorry I came under a old post to say this. But I really enjoyed reading your diary. I could relate to some parts and turns out you went to the same uni I'm in. How I found out? The beginning part of your diary you mentioned "Town" "Midas". How you took bike from town to your hostel for the first time and the ride was very cool. I'm sure I'm probably not really making sense but I really enjoyed your diary!! It was Soo interesting to read.

Hello Bukola, thank you so much for this. I perfectly understood all you said, and you made perfect sense. Glad you found it interesting.

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