SunFlow:


Chai! bros, you flawlessly good. your choice of wordings are effortlessly beautiful. keep it up bro.

Thanks bro

Do u want to be unfortunate in life?

I pray adaobi will not die ooooo!!!! Dat useless father got what he deserves...... Loving dis story.

nice writeup bro

Chipappii:


Joshuaa

oga chipappii y are u calling my name by 1am u no dey sleep? Nd no dey shine ur teeth gimme cnt i luv sumbody again?

godwil114:
Big fat lie.....you are feeding dem with lies

if e easy,cum feed us with ur own lie abeg

Chipappii:


Joshuaa

chipappiiiii no go kill urself becos of ada o

dis story reminds me of the saying "NOT ALL THAT GLITTERS IS GOLD" who would hv thought such a beautiful gal has gotten through this much

this story meant be fiction but sh*t like this happens in our society today

Peterkeys6:
if e easy,cum feed us with ur own lie abeg

this story na copy and paste.......and the story is not true.....if someone tried to rape you and you burst his head or stab him, you're going to prison.

joshuamoses101:
nd m truely nd genuinely inluv with u

but quincy no let luv make u do watin go cause u nd ur family more harm dan gud o

Are u rich nd handsome??

godwil114:
this story na copy and paste.......and the story is not true.....if someone tried to rape you and you burst his head or stab him, you're going to prison.

Hv u ever heard abt self defence?

joshuamoses101:
chipappiiiii no go kill urself becos of ada o

dis story reminds me of the saying "NOT ALL THAT GLITTERS IS GOLD" who would hv thought such a beautiful gal has gotten through this much

this story meant be fiction but sh*t like this happens in our society today

shit like this don't happen in our society... Only in Nigeria movie...how will a guy in this 21st century want to kill himself because of a village girl. You dey talk as if them be romeo and Juliet..... In this 21st century people don't care about love they care about money.....even dangote loves money than love......

gtin:

Hv u ever heard abt self defence?

Americans law is different from Nigerians law....if you stab person in Nigeria police will arrest you..they don't care if it's self defence or not.

godwil114:
shit like this don't happen in our society... Only in Nigeria movie...how will a guy in this 21st century want to kill himself because of a village girl. You dey talk as if them be romeo and Juliet..... In this 21st century people don't care about love they care about money.....even dangote loves money than love......

wasnt talking abt d luv m talking abt wat d gal has bin through

Chipappii:
A short story of love and Romance and Adventure. .... .. .

Pure Fiction

All rights reserved.


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godwil114:
shit like this don't happen in our society... Only in Nigeria movie...how will a guy in this 21st century want to kill himself because of a village girl. You dey talk as if them be romeo and Juliet..... In this 21st century people don't care about love they care about money.....even dangote loves money than love......

Did you even read the bolded at all?

godwil114:
shit like this don't happen in our society... Only in Nigeria movie...how will a guy in this 21st century want to kill himself because of a village girl. You dey talk as if them be romeo and Juliet..... In this 21st century people don't care about love they care about money.....even dangote loves money than love......

Bro, if you don't like the story.....leave us to enjoy it abeg. In movies and/or fiction, society rules "sometimes" don't matter, better yet, there are times where proper law procedure isn't followed...Good thing you're Nigerian, so you know what I mean.

Nothing kills good argument as disrespect. You can't just be rubbishing someone's work, even if its not to your taste.

Good tidings

reading in 12D *continew*

joshuamoses101:
wasnt talking abt d luv m talking abt wat d gal has bin through

oga na fake story the guy they tell.....

THE END

Ada held my hand as we walked through the field, everywhere was so green, the atmosphere so serene and Romance seemed to be in the air, everywhere seemed to have been prepared for us and it was perfect.
Ada looked exceptionally beautiful and happy. Each time i looked at her, i wished i was grown enough to marry.
"Do you remember how we met?" she asked me
"I could forget where i was born but not that"
She smiled and squeezed my hand.
"Meeting you was the second best thing to ever happen to me Quinn"
"What was the first? "
"You loving me, that was the first and best"
"i'm blushing"
"You are dark, you can't blush"
We both laughed, for some reasons, i couldn't say much to her, she did all the talking and i didn't know why.
"Quinn, i will always love you, i hope you know that and i want you to know that you can live without me, you can move on, you have a life to live ahead of you" we were facing each other by this time and holding our two hands.
"You gave me life a meaning, my heart isn't in my chest anymore, its you that's there".
I held her face in my hands and wiped the tears that had appeared there. She held my hand up to her face
"I hate to see you sad whenever you think of me, just remember the good memories we made, the lovely times we had and keep that to your heart, you are the one beating inside my chest and i love you. Quincy live for the two of us, its so cold out here without you but i will survive ".
The tears came to my eyes as she talked, i closed my eyes and kissed her, her lips tasted salty, the tears were in them but i didn't care. I opened my eyes and only the empty air was there and i was alone, the tears still in my eyes.




I didn't even know how i was able to get through that phase, i should have died from shock and pain but i didn't, i can't deny that i once out of many times contemplated suicide, that also wasn't easy, i had been selfish enough and i needed to think of other people for once, to think of my family who loved me and had stood by me each time and never for once complained of my excesses.
Life moved on, slowly, my family as usual was very supportive, princess was always there to snap me out of my misery, my two sisters were sweethearts and my father, through all those moments never for once complained, he knew i was young, naive and in love. My mom, well, she was just being my mom, it was her duty to care for me and she never lagged. One person that always seemed to be there whenever i needed someone didn't disappoint either, Janet, she stuck around for me, she was supposed to be gone but she stayed, yet the void was still in my heart but i did notice her.

My waec exam came and passed, i wasn't able to write it. My father thought i needed a change of environment, i needed to get away from all that sorrowful setting. I was going to Join my uncle in the United States but I have to recover first.

Ada may be gone but she was always there with me, every night in my dreams....



THE END..

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Chipappii:



Did you even read the bolded at all?

I wouldn't hv care about the the story if it wasn't push to front page....

godwil114:
I wouldn't hv care about the the story if it wasn't push to front page....

Oh, ok.

Don't worry, i may soon write a fake story on a sadist called godwil114

godwil114:
oga na fake story the guy they tell.....

oga if u no like the story kindly gerrarofhere

Chipappii:



Did you even read the bolded at all?

Chipappii abeg leave that guy n continue ur love story jare..

I must confess, na man u b.. Nice write up, keep it up!!

godwil114:
This story is disgusting and fake

Bring your foreign standard story let's see. if you've got non remain silent

The great Nairaland writer. jah bless

Chipappii:



Oh, ok.

Don't worry, i may soon write a fake story on a sadist called godwil114

who your story epp. It didn't change the price of a bag of rice....niqqa go and sit down with your story....

@ godwil114 nt that yhu can even write a poem,that yhu now here critising chipapll over his story...@ writer lovely write up dia,Buh we all know that wat yhu wrote aup dia no fit happen fr naija..if the boy is madly in love,the parents wud beat the madness outta the boil...fr crying out loud he is still 17

godwil114:
you're a fool.....f**k your big stupid head...keep on supporting all this fake stories.......

and i can see u are mentally disordered