Help me make necessary corrections where needed.. Thanks!

I'm a learner.. pls! help.

why d "students" in Educational qualification..

I also studied geo and env.mgt abeg let me know if theres any opening in AbJ. thanks

Airoflaw:
why d "students" in Educational qualification..

I also studied geo and env.mgt abeg let me know if theres any opening in AbJ. thanks

OMG! many thanks, I didn't take note of that little error. Thanks once again.

yunglykmine:
Help me make necessary corrections where needed.. Thanks!

If you are desperate abt work..I think it is necessary you put your references..not (Available on request)..
-you can also include your hobbies..
-I think you educational qualification shd come first before work history

Airoflaw:

If you are desperate abt work..I think it is necessary you put your references..not (Available on request)..
you can also include your hobbies..

Noted sir. Thanks.

hope you are not going to use the black background.. its better you put it in white

Airoflaw:
hope you are not going to use the black background.. its better you put it in white

No, the black background is as a result of my browser.. it's not going to be black. Thanks

I need more corrections plsss..

Help please..

More corrections plsss...

yunglykmine:
Help me make necessary corrections where needed.. Thanks!

yunglykmine:
No, the black background is as a result of my browser.. it's not going to be black. Thanks

yunglykmine:
No, the black background is as a result of my browser.. it's not going to be black. Thanks

Airoflaw:

If you are desperate abt work..I think it is necessary you put your references..not (Available on request)..
-you can also include your hobbies..
-I think you educational qualification shd come first before work history

Airoflaw:
why d "students" in Educational qualification..

I also studied geo and env.mgt abeg let me know if theres any opening in AbJ. thanks

please guys as you review his own help me do justice to mine too, let all succeed together .God bless you

Follow these steps and re-post it for a second review. I compiled these from my CV and I always get shortlisted for interviews. I was even shortlisted for the world bank recruitment with this same CV steps. In a situation when I don’t get shortlisted, I feel I am over –qualified or the recruiter cannot not pay me.
1. On the header, your name, address, phone numbers, email address, and date of birth.
2. Change Mission to ‘career objective’ or career summary. ( too many big English there, try to make it simple and strength to the point…like what the recruiter can easily read)
3. Change personal attributes to ‘skills and competences’. Include technical skills as part of skills and competences. Try to use the word “excellent” always. For example
• Excellent knowledge of Microsoft Office – Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Outlook etc
• Ability to learn etc
• High analytical etc
• Effective team player etc
• Great capacity etc
4. Next, Education qualifications and Schools attended. Start with the most recent. For example, University, secondary school, and primary school
University of Abuja, Gwagwalada, Abuja. (2010 – 2014)
B.Sc Geography and Environmental Studies.
Second Class Upper Divison (CGPA – 3.56/4.00)
Why was your primary school not included? I went to a very famous primary and secondary school that won several awards in the past and that has always helped me during interviews.
5. Professional qualifications if any
6. Computer skills. For example
National Institute for Information Technology (NIIT) (3 months)
Base Certificate in Microsoft Office XP
(MS Word, MS Excel, Power Point)
Having a certificate from NIIT got me my present job.
7. Employment history. For example
Orire College – Ilorin, Kwara State.
Position: Head, Teacher - Geography (NYSC Programme)
Job Descriptions:
Go to google and check for the job the descriptions of a geography teacher.
List the job descriptions in bullet points.
Achievements:
• Lectured 47 students etc
• Assembled a personality etc
• Observed students performance etc
8. Voluntary Obligations – Start with the most recent
Provost, Etc (Remove the Elected). (2012 – 2013)
List your job descriptions. Like I said earlier go to google, check the job
Descriptions of a provost in a school
List out your achievement

Secretary General, Etc (Remove the Elected). (2011 - 2012)
List your job descriptions. Like I said earlier go to google, check the job
Descriptions of a secretary general in a school
List out your achievement
I didn’t see any award that you won in your CV, I only noticed you did volunteer jobs while you were in school. Awards are for example, Best graduating student in geography department and so on.
9. Referees – remove available on request and list them out, 3 referees Max.

sasquareT:




please guys as you review his own help me do justice to mine too, let all succeed together .God bless you

OK.
-but I think you should try and add the email of your references

whiiteroses:
Follow these steps and re-post it for a second review. I compiled these from my CV and I always get shortlisted for interviews. I was even shortlisted for the world bank recruitment with this same CV steps. In a situation when I don’t get shortlisted, I feel I am over –qualified or the recruiter cannot not pay me.
1. On the header, your name, address, phone numbers, email address, and date of birth.
2. Change Mission to ‘career objective’ or career summary. ( too many big English there, try to make it simple and strength to the point…like what the recruiter can easily read)
3. Change personal attributes to ‘skills and competences’. Include technical skills as part of skills and competences. Try to use the word “excellent” always. For example
• Excellent knowledge of Microsoft Office – Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Outlook etc
• Ability to learn etc
• High analytical etc
• Effective team player etc
• Great capacity etc
4. Next, Education qualifications and Schools attended. Start with the most recent. For example, University, secondary school, and primary school
University of Abuja, Gwagwalada, Abuja. (2010 – 2014)
B.Sc Geography and Environmental Studies.
Second Class Upper Divison (CGPA – 3.56/4.00)
Why was your primary school not included? I went to a very famous primary and secondary school that won several awards in the past and that has always helped me during interviews.
5. Professional qualifications if any
6. Computer skills. For example
National Institute for Information Technology (NIIT) (3 months)
Base Certificate in Microsoft Office XP
(MS Word, MS Excel, Power Point)
Having a certificate from NIIT got me my present job.
7. Employment history. For example
Orire College – Ilorin, Kwara State.
Position: Head, Teacher - Geography (NYSC Programme)
Job Descriptions:
Go to google and check for the job the descriptions of a geography teacher.
List the job descriptions in bullet points.
Achievements:
• Lectured 47 students etc
• Assembled a personality etc
• Observed students performance etc
8. Voluntary Obligations – Start with the most recent
Provost, Etc (Remove the Elected). (2012 – 2013)
List your job descriptions. Like I said earlier go to google, check the job
Descriptions of a provost in a school
List out your achievement

Secretary General, Etc (Remove the Elected). (2011 - 2012)
List your job descriptions. Like I said earlier go to google, check the job
Descriptions of a secretary general in a school
List out your achievement
I didn’t see any award that you won in your CV, I only noticed you did volunteer jobs while you were in school. Awards are for example, Best graduating student in geography department and so on.
9. Referees – remove available on request and list them out, 3 referees Max.

Thanks for this.. Noted!

I need more help, corrections and opinions plssss...