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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by emmyN(m): 9:35am On Jun 22
I don't really have the perfect adjective to describe this work. It's indeed a great masterpiece with unparalleled finesse. I look forward to seeing this work in screen. You didn't disappoint. Good bless you
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Maryclaire1(f): 11:52am On Jun 22
Silensa:
Souloho19: Silensa where have u been?

Me: went to relax pending when u will execute our plan

Souloho19: which plan again?

Me: u mean to tell me that u forgot? Let me remind u, although it seems late. The plan to annihilate Rex through any means possible.

Souloho19: my bro, it wasn't possible then but there is hope in the sequel coming up later.

Me: Oga am disappointed in u. What did maryclaire1, rachealfst, queenitee, n co give u? So u can't even help a brother in love, or are u eye my sweet Olivia with one eye? Since y refused helping, I am going to do it by myself. And who told u that I will get tired of pushing her up n down? That is what love is a about. Hmmmm my blood is boiling. Am off, so so angry.

Souloho19: am so so sorry my bro, I didn't know that u love her like this. OK, I will make amends by doing the needful in the sequel..I promise.
For ur information, Claire, Racheal n Queen gave me (.......)

Me: I am going to hold u on ur promise, I will be waiting.....plz if what they gave u remain, don't fail to share abeg, God loves a cheerful giver n sharer.
tongue tongue tongue it pains them grin.. no let souloho19 deceive u ooo u can't have her anymore she's Rex wifey now cheesy unless soul pity u create another beautiful damsel for u making u the lead character smiley..better luck next time wink

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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Countrygirl(f): 3:27pm On Jun 22
It was a great and interesting read all through, thanks soul for the master piece
Please protect your sstory
Expecting another master piece from you.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 4:33am On Jun 23
Meneski: Ladies and gentlemen, you all are welcome the WORLD NOBEL AWARD(applause from the seated guest) thank you thank you. As you can see after going thru all the novel in the world, you will agree with me that nigeria just beat the whole world to this(PMB seated on one of the high seat is seen shining his teeth ) Please clap,shout ,dance ,laugh, cry if you like as i call on this year's world NOBEL AWARD recipient. He is no other person than our very own son,brother,friend(agberos ,touts and thugs were now shouting "soul soul soul" continuesly the president stood up walked to the tout n thug section. He joined in the shouting soul soul soul) his name is souloho19 (hell brokeloose... Come see clapping...the whole stadium was standing n clapping as souloho19 walks to meneski to recieve his award) souloho19 what do you have to say to your fans?











No mind me oh... At least i don do my part... So what have you gato say to ur fans about dis ur illusional award?cheesy

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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Flakkydagirl: 9:31am On Jun 23
Wonderful! Wonderful!! Wonderful!!!
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Silensa(m): 11:47am On Jun 23
Maryclaire1:
tongue tongue tongue it pains them grin.. no let souloho19 deceive u ooo u can't have her anymore she's Rex wifey now cheesy unless soul pity u create another beautiful damsel for u making u the lead character smiley..better luck next time wink

i am sure that you didn't read where oga souloho19 was begging (nah joke oo) me. He promised to make it all right soonest. Sorry for you because olivia and I are meant for each other, the sooner you understand that, the best for you

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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by nawtielizzie(f): 9:29pm On Jun 24
Wawu!!!!
I swear you are a genius..
I'm crushing already..
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 12:42pm On Jun 26
nawtielizzie:
Wawu!!!!
I swear you are a genius..
I'm crushing already..
....i will like it if u crush me realbab grin
nawtielizzie:
Wawu!!!!
I swear you are a genius..
I'm crushing already..
....i will like it if u crush me realbab
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by dview001(m): 12:51pm On Jun 26
Maryclaire1:
cheesy Oya sing song and if it's soul lifting wink u deserve it too...lala na romance section him for b senate ooo...Happy Sunday.
I don finish your song o title is "Mary Cee" u know like vitamin Cee

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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Oyindawealth(f): 6:01pm On Jun 26
Souloho! Souloho! Souloho!! How many times did I call u? U made me glued 2 my phone..and i don't know d right word 2 use.. Infanct I'm speechless right now... I'm just wowwwd!! Luv dis movie,oh!! Sorry story lyk kilode?? Oya chop kiss.... Muuuuuuuuah!!! I'm ur no 1 fan.. Waiting eagerly 4 more stories 4rm u.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by forzarush(f): 8:12pm On Jun 26
Souloho,you're just too much! Please edit and publish this story. I'm sure my baby will get the 1st autographed copy.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by boffinjay(m): 10:26am On Jun 30
well.after i read finish,i had to comment nd d only tin dat came to my mind is to give u a thumbs up.bro with wat i've jst read nd u as d writer.u'll go places
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by donteanz(m): 11:23pm On Jul 01
This piece is highly magnificient. The OP has done a great job down here. May God bless and enrich you with more knowledge from up above to perform more outstanding wonders with you PEN.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by donteanz(m): 11:23pm On Jul 01
This piece is highly magnificient. The OP has done a great job down here. May God bless and enrich you with more knowledge from up above to perform more outstanding wonders with your PEN.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by souloho19(m): 12:51am On Jul 04
God bless you all for your comments and support... appreciate it.
would definitely mention you all in the next piece (advantage of not being a ghost reader cheesy)

coming soon...The Devil Wears Okrika

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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by donteanz(m): 11:17am On Jul 04
souloho19:
God bless you all for your comments and support... appreciate it.
would definitely mention you all in the next piece (advantage of not being a ghost reader cheesy)

coming soon...The Devil Wears Okrika
No time to waste time broda hit the nail on the the head. Mention me as soon as it begins.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Bleeze2: 1:58pm On Jul 04
Wat a wonderful story, u can't predict what will happen next until the end
Kudos bro
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 2:17pm On Jul 04
donteanz:

No time to waste time broda hit the nail on the the head. Mention me as soon as it begins.
abeg remember...na table for two u go kip for me oh... Meneski
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 10:07pm On Jul 07
i got a proposal for you souloho19.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by souloho19(m): 10:13pm On Jul 07
meneski:
i got a proposal for you souloho19.

I'm listening bro...
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 10:37pm On Jul 07
souloho19:


I'm listening bro...
... How about you start a write along in the rap section... A rap inclined story... @least dia gats to be some rappers that can write over dia... The plot whatsoever is left to you to sort out... How about dat?... You know rap wella so dat wan no go be wahala to much.... Just remembered high school musical.
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by souloho19(m): 10:45pm On Jul 07
meneski:
... How about you start a write along in the rap section... A rap inclined story... @least dia gats to be some rappers that can write over dia... The plot whatsoever is left to you to sort out... How about dat?... You know rap wella so dat wan no go be wahala to much.... Just remembered high school musical.

hmmm.....nice idea the only problem is the rap section is more like a ghost town now adays...i myt end up being the only one ''writing along''
i think i'd give it a shot tho...nice one
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 10:52pm On Jul 07
souloho19:


hmmm.....nice idea the only problem is the rap section is more like a ghost town now adays...i myt end up being the only one ''writing along''
i think i'd give it a shot tho...nice one
... Invite me when diaris an update oooo. Looking forward to it... By the way we made front page oh... I want to bliv u hvnt left us entirly ba?
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by souloho19(m): 11:35pm On Jul 07
meneski:
... Invite me when diaris an update oooo. Looking forward to it... By the way we made front page oh... I want to bliv u hvnt left us entirly ba?

never bro...i've been following and loving it more..fp was about time...the writers are on point!
no probs about the mention
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by meneski: 11:53pm On Jul 07
souloho19:


never bro...i've been following and loving it more..fp was about time...the writers are on point!
no probs about the mention
gud of u... I wish to write like u someday... Are you on fb? If ya wats da name over dia?
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by souloho19(m): 8:50am On Jul 08
meneski:
gud of u... I wish to write like u someday... Are you on fb? If ya wats da name over dia?

Its Kingsley efughi bro
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by vakjay08(m): 10:17am On Jul 08
Souloho dont joke with me ooo make sure u mention me when u begin. U doing a 9c job(pronouce as jab).B-)
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by johnspurgeon014(m): 5:02pm On Jul 08
souloho19:
She slowed down the car and trafficated to a popular eatery..I was trying to maintain a cool front but I was observing left and right closely. "Are you really that hungry?" I asked as she killed the ignition.
"Rex I don't joke with food oh..I can eat ehn!"
I smiled and got down from the car first..I looked around the parking lot carefully, it was deserted save for a family of four taking pictures before they got into their car..I relaxed when I saw she highlighted from the car without her purse but held her ATM card.
"Pos?" I asked
"yes I don't like carrying cash around"
"I don't expect you to pay for anything"
She rolled her eyes "Rex your magazine is taking me to the next level.I can't ever pay you back"
It seems I came to my senses..here we were standing outside..inviting the 'gala seller' a potential attacker instead of hurrying to safety.
"I'm actually very hungry suddenly" she held out her hand (a habit she was fond of and I took it)
When we stepped through the sliding doors, i let out a sigh of relief..and i foolishly thought i had escaped strange eyes. I made up my mind to give him a stern warning all this mind games had to stop..for a professional, he was fond of amateur games. I found out i didnt really need to force myself to eat..although i ate lightly..you know beans is a musical food..and i wasnt ready to perform in front of her kind of company. Our conversation ranged from her school life, to social..to family..i noted she avoided talking about her father and i wasnt prepared to ask, honestly I was quite fed up with the chief and was finding his beautiful daughter as a welcome distraction. She asked me questions about my family and career..
"It must really be fun..managing magazines and such...I guess you sleep with a lot of models" she said slyly..staring at me as she sipped her drink..letting the straw play on her tongue with the ring glinting.
I almost choked on my drink..I forced it down..smiled at her then decided to play it wild also "you know something" i lowered my voice and whispered "thats the best part"
She laughed.."something about your honesty is refreshing"
She looked at me in a way that got me hot and I gave myself a mental shake..what was going on? I had to put things in balance..this girl was the definition of seduction.
"Ada look..I'm here for professional purposes only..I don't want-"
"Rex you need to calm down and learn to have fun..its so easy to mess with you" she seemed sincere and I was both relieved and disappointed..I signaled for the bill. "We should be heading back..we need to round up the plans..and draw out a suitable plan" what was I saying??..I felt bad when she stood up..she looked at me and I couldn't read her expression.."you are right..I'm soo excited" but she didn't sound so anymore.
I paid the bill and we left in silence..with me kicking myself mentally. She was several steps ahead of me and I actually fvcked up by not paying attention. I was replaying our exchange in my mind..wondering what I should have done right..her voice carried to my ears from outside.."please..I said I don't want gala..can't you hear!"
My brain jump started and I ran outside in just few steps..I saw a tall man..really young and very black just as he snatched her necklace from her throat. and took off..he threw his carton of gala which he had been pretending to sell and pushed her roughly..I was already in motion and broke her fall with my outstretched hand but couldn't stop her from landing on the floor..'strange eyes you idiot' I muttered to myself as I caught up with the 'criminal' who was very slow for someone who just stole..I made up my mind to fvck him up and not give him any chance to touch me. I jumped on him..sending us both to the floor we struggled for seconds..a I couldn't seem to get a hold on him..a part of my brain..was registering shouts from the few people in the parking lot and I wondered about the security positioned at the door..where was he? I felt the gala thief slacken and I found myself on top and smashed my fist into his face..the pain was blinding but my fury didn't allow me hold my knuckles and shout the way my previous self would have done. I rained a couple more punches on him and grabbed the necklace from his hand which I noticed was gold.."You don't steal from my lady..you hear!!" I was high on adrenaline and I punched his throat once more thinking I had knocked him out..I leaned to whisper in his ear "tell strange eyes..or John whatever his name is that I'd mess him up too"
I realized my mistake a second too late, the gala thief opened his eyes grabbed me by the collar..and in a flash I was in the air..for like three seconds..I landed on my face..and the pain was blinding..I tried to stand up but either my brain wasn't sending the command or my legs wasn't receiving it..I felt hands shaking me and feared for what will come next..but it was Ada "you got my necklace..oh my God Rex..i cant believe what you did..are you alright.." I rolled over and tried to sit up..by this time several customers were approaching including the security guard who had been no where to be found. "You're bleeding..I need to get you to the hospital.." I staggered to my feet as peolple helped steady me..I was feeling like a pussy..a furious cat..I looked around
but like I expected the gala thief was long gone. "Where the hell where you?!!!" I shouted at the fast food gaurd..
"I go toilet oga"
I could bet my left arm that toilet had strange eyes written all over it..he was so full of sh!t and I wished I could beat him up(our first and only physical encounter was too fresh in my mind)
Ada was already on the phone.she turned to me.."my mum said we should go straight to the house..our doctor is on his way..does it hurt?'
"Its just a scratch now..haba" I turned to the nearest car and my reflection was a pitiful one..I had scratches on my forehead, nose and chin and the blood was almost unstoppable..I looked down and saw my shirt was stained with blood..the sight was worse than the feeling..although the pain was bad..the majority was just headache"
The manager of the eatery had come outside and I could see him questioning the halogen guard furiously while glancing nervously in our direction..I followed Ada to the car..and my embarrassment was beginning to be replaced by something close to martyrdom. "You're really..strong" she said as she held my arm and we walked slowly as if my feet were damaged.."if I lost this necklace..I wouldn't know what to do..my favourite aunt gave it to me and she's late now...thank you" she kissed my chick.
I grunted in reply..just soo pissed at strange eyes..who did he think he is..playing games with lives..my life
We got to the car and Ada opened the car via the remote..."you know what touched me the most...it was when you called me your girl" she looked at me..and I almost panicked.. That was love in her eyes..I had seen the reflection in mine too many times when I stared at the mirror and thought about Fome..
I squeezed my face as if I was in pain..she hurried around the car..as I got in "our house isn't really far don't worry..and Dr.Essien is one of a kind" she started the car and I marveled at the smoothness of the engine..I thought to myself.."just a few scratches..no broken bones this wasn't soo bad.." I looked out the window where a small group of costumers were converged together..talking about the incident and watching us..Somehow I wasn't surprised when I saw strange eyes in the midst of them watching us. He showed a discreet thumbs up and mouthed the words: 'well done.'
In reply I mouthed 'fvck you' but I couldn't help it..I smiled.

she looked at me..and I almost panicked.. That was love in her eyes... Hahahahahaha. Can totally relate. Divepen1 put this on some list and it's totally worth it.

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Re: Delayed Diagnosis by damynj: 11:56pm On Jul 15
Hmmm! Mr Soul, I Must Confess You're Dopinly Wonderful! Nyc One My Brother!
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by khennykhay(m): 5:44pm On Jul 16
This is one of the best story i've ever read on nairaland.i can see you going places, more ink to ur pen, when should we expet anoda mind-blowing piece oe urz again
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Nobody: 9:08pm On Jul 21
Wow!
Re: Delayed Diagnosis by Oyindawealth(f): 10:27pm On Jul 21
souloho19:
God bless you all for your comments and support... appreciate it.
would definitely mention you all in the next piece (advantage of not being a ghost reader cheesy)

coming soon...The Devil Wears Okrika
awwwn my crush...(no let supizino hear oo he's my e-hubby) lol... You're highly welcome!! And concerning d Next story, I can't wait!!

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