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Re: Mr Right by Hadampson(m): 9:42am On Jul 23
skillful01:
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Your reason(s)...

1) She is amebo master
2) she talks too much
3) She is in love with mecheesy kimberlywest can testify to that
Re: Mr Right by skillful01: 10:10am On Jul 23
Hadampson:

1) She is amebo master 2) she talks too much 3) She is in love with mecheesy kimberlywest can testify to that
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She's in love with you/you love her...I trust hormobolanle na.

lets not derail this nice thread gringrin
Re: Mr Right by Hadampson(m): 11:05am On Jul 23
skillful01:
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She's in love with you/you love her...I trust hormobolanle na.


lets not derail this nice thread gringrin
Lol
Okay brogrin
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 12:37pm On Jul 23
******Episode 3******
"Where will we talk, in my room or the terrace", Jason said his eyes glued to her ass.

"It's not polite to stare you know and why would I want to discuss with you in your room".

"You tend to stare at beautiful things don't you".

"Gosh!!,you are such an animal", she said pushing the door leading to the terrace open".

"Hey!...okay I'm sorry for the other day"

"You and I know that you're not"

"I am seriously...so do you forgive me"

She smiled, "hell..."

"Thank you".

"No!!"

"You know that we can't do a business successfully with any bad blood between us".

"Okay fine".

"Thank you Sooo much".

"You are welcome".

The next one hour passed very fast with them discussing business and Amanda making few calls and beating price.After an hour a help came to call Amanda as her parents were ready to leave,Amanda and Jason exchanged numbers,as Jason promised to stop by at her office the next day.

TBC.
Re: Mr Right by hormobolanle: 10:04pm On Jul 24
I will just b here observing people that love claiming Wat is not derz Skillful01 oko MI I love u from d yansh of my heart, ekuro is alabaku ewawink

hope dis story will make sense o, sweetheart Mayreeyam coman join me
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 8:32am On Jul 25
**********Continued***********
Amanda stayed by the side of the road pacing,her car
had chosen a very bad to stop.Just as she decided to call her father, a car pulled up close to her,she looked inside and saw Jason and two other guys.

"Hello beautiful",he said showing off his perfect dentition.

"Hello", she said with a small smile dancing on her lips.

"What are you doing here".

"My car stopped, I was about calling Daddy".

"You want to call your daddy,daddy's girl".

"No denying it", she said with a slight chuckle.

"Lemme call my father's mechanic his workplace is close".

" oh...thanks"

They had completed their deal about three weeks back, Amanda had noticed his slight passes at her but had decided to ignore him,he had even taken her out for lunch and dinner.

"He said you should drop the key at the top of the car,I've sent him your address, so he'll bring the car over in the morning".

"Ohk... lemme call a cab then".

"Noo... Lemme drop you off".

"I thought you guys were heading out".

"Yeah...but there's still time".

"Okay...thanks".

"You are welcome",he said opening the front door for her to enter." So what will you do when you get home".

"Eat and sleep".

"Let's go to a club today is Friday so no excuse of work tomorrow".

"I've never been to a club before".

"You are kidding me right", he said surprised.

"I'm serious".

"Babe I'm not taking no for an answer then",he said driving to the club despite her protest.

TBC.
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 7:53am On Jul 27
I'm guessing I should quit the story right

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Re: Mr Right by Dextinate(m): 9:11am On Jul 27
123456dr:
I'm guessing I should quit the story right
ermmm if I hear am I go find you.. And ....... I no want talk..
Oya drop update make we take chill
Re: Mr Right by Chummypinky(f): 9:44am On Jul 27
why will you expect comment when you don't update regularly ad if you even update it always short......you can stop it o......the update I read is interesting
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 9:54am On Jul 27
Chummypinky:
why will you expect comment when you don't update regularly ad if you even update it always short......you can stop it o......the update I read is interesting
,excuse me last time I checked I was doing this for fun,i have a life outside NL,I didn't update yesterday because I was very busy.It will do you a whole lot of good to be polite,there are many polite ways to say I'm not meeting up to expectations. No offense.

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Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 9:55am On Jul 27
Dextinate:
ermmm if I hear am I go find you.. And ....... I no want talk..
Oya drop update make we take chill
.At your service ma'm
Re: Mr Right by Dextinate(m): 11:35am On Jul 27
123456dr:
.At your service ma'm
I be guy oh... No do trans for me oh.. Don't give up.. We dey follow
Re: Mr Right by Ehi07(f): 11:54am On Jul 27
No please don't. Loving it.
123456dr:
I'm guessing I should quit the story right
Re: Mr Right by EvaJael(f): 1:26pm On Jul 27
123456dr I'm sorry I didn't see your mention because you spelt my moniker wrongly. Please don't stop. I'm enjoying it.
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 3:56pm On Jul 27
******Episode 4******
Jason half dragged, half carried Amanda into her apartment,he dropped her on her bed when he got into her room, he noted the clean state of her room and nodded his head in approval, while Amanda was still muttering rubbish, he looked at her and smiled.

"Amanda I'm going", he said, he wanted to get away from her as fast as possible, she was unknowingly turning him on.

"Don't go", she cooed softly.

"Why shouldn't I",he said amusingly.

"Don't just go", she said pouting her lips.

"You look really kissable right now".

"Kiss me".

He chuckled," you don't know what you are saying it's the alcohol I'm sure".

"I want you to kiss me"

"Don't hate me for this", he said before taking her lips in he's.

Five minutes later the kiss was more intense,Amanda tugged at his belt,trying to take it off.

"Are you sure that you want this".

"Yes"

"Okay",he said pushing her into a lying position.

Jason was feeling on top of the world until he entered her.He found out that she was still a virgin until then, he didn't even last long,he emptied his load in her,covered her properly and left,with guilt tugging at his soul.
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Amanda woke up the following morning with a pounding headache, she made to get up from the bed,when she felt a stabbing pain in between her legs, the memories of the previous night came rushing in.
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The ringing of Amanda's phone forced her to raise her head from her knees, she had been in this position for two hours crying, she couldn't believe that the virginity she had been to protect for twenty years was gone all thanks to her foolishness. She checked the callers I.D it was Jason, she tossed the phone faraway from herself as her tears intensified.The phone continued ringing for about ten minutes but she still refused to pick it,soon he sent a message, she picked up the phone to read it,it said, "please pick my calls,stop making me feel worse than I already do".She hissed, switched off her phone, wiped her tears and got up from the bed. She was done crying over spilled milk.

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Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 3:59pm On Jul 27
EvaJael:
123456dr I'm sorry I didn't see your mention because you spelt my moniker wrongly. Please don't stop. I'm enjoying it.
.Ahh,sorry for the misspelt moniker. I'm not backing down on this one.
Re: Mr Right by waliyarh01(f): 9:48pm On Jul 27
Don't stop pls and try to make the update lengthy. Weldone ma!
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 5:22am On Jul 28
*********Episode 5********
Three weeks later Amanda was sitted in her office, with a couple, newly wedded, they wanted a new house because the woman was already expecting

"So a three bedroom flat in Ikoyi".

"A duplex would be better, no neighbors,with a big playing space for the children".

"Oh...okay give me two days,or I have some pictures here if available duplexes", she said giving them a folder.

As the folder was safely in the man's hand,she had the sudden urge to throw up,she ran as quickly as she could into her toilet, throwing up her breakfast. She had successfully avoided Jason for two weeks now even when he came to her office, she refused to see him,he sent her flowers and chocolates every day,flooded her phone with apology messages, she knew that he'll soon run out of options,well till then.

Amanda walked back into the office and met the couple staring at the pictures in the folder, they quickly turned to look at her when she walked in.

"Are you okay", she said her voice,had a tinge of concern.

"Yeah...I'm good", she said even though she knew she was weak.

"Is this going to be your first baby", she asked sweetly.

"Uh...what!!...no I'm not pregnant and I've not had a baby before".

"You look it, and I have a feeling you are, let's say our babies are communicating, congrats in advance", she picked up her bag and they left.

Amanda shook her head to clear the fog that had formed in it,if she hadn't had sex,she would have totally ignored the woman,but she had.She picked up her bag arranged her things and left.
On her way home,she bought six packs of pregnancy test strips, she prayed in her mind that they turn out negative, if she was,how would she tell her family,how would his parents see her,it'll mean his permanent entry into her life.All these thoughts ran through her head as she parked her car in her packing space at home.

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Re: Mr Right by Ehi07(f): 1:33pm On Jul 28
Ghen! Ghen! I can't wait for the next update.

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Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 4:29pm On Jul 28
*******Continuation*******
Jason sat in the bar in his mansion, thoughts of Amanda filled his head,he took a big gulp from the glass cup that contained Hennessey,memories of her Unclad body filled his head,the fact that he hadn't talked to her for two weeks annoyed him,'well damn he thought he needed to let off some steam, he picked up his phone and made to dial Sandra's number, but then he felt like he was cheating on Amanda, he got up and slammed the poor wine glass on the wall and watched it shatter, he turned and saw his cook standing a little bit far away from him.

"You know what to do", that said he stormed off to his room.

********************************************************
Amanda laid on her bed,the duvet laid carelessly on the foot of the bed, she had been crying nonstop since all six strips proved positive, she needed no soothsayer to tell her she was done for,she was confused, how would she face her parents, Jason, her staffs, the governor, her elder brothers, her cousins, her friends, the media, everybody!!.

After crying for over two hours,she wiped her tears,as she made a resolution not to tell her family until she was showing and also not tell Jason until she had the baby,she hoped her parents would understand, until then, she was going to avoid everybody. First things first, she was going to map out a timetable, she would make sure she had enough rest to make sure that her child would be safe and healthy.

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Re: Mr Right by Dextinate(m): 10:18pm On Jul 28
Following.. Making sense
Re: Mr Right by 123456dr(f): 3:13pm On Jul 29
********Episode 6********

**********One Month Later**********
Belina Williams, was sitted in the plush sitting room of her husband's mansion,her eyes fixed on the television in front of her, but her mind wasn't there,she hadn't seen her daughter in over a month, she had been avoiding home for reasons best known to her her,but today she must see her,with her mind made up,she went to prepare, since she knew get daughters' schedule by heart,she knew that Relentless would still be at the office.
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Amanda sat in her office with a big plate of ice cream, she was scooping it into her mouth, since it was what her baby craved for,a message entered her phone it was Jason. This guy never gives up does he,she said to herself, as she dropped her phone, her door swung open, it was her mum,she stilled.

"And she has suddenly forgotten how to greet abi", she said her voice dripping with sarcasm.

"Good Afternoon mum", she said with a small smile.

"Come give mummy a hug,she has missed you like kilode", she said with her hands opened and ready for a hug.

"Mummy i'm not still your little girl oo,I'm now a big girl and I don't do hugs", she said trying to sound convincing, she knew that her baby bump was not very visible but knew her mother would easily notice.

"Which day did that one na start ,common come and hug me"

Amanda reluctantly got up and went to her mother, who blinked her eyes rapidly as her eyes looked Amanda over properly.

"Amanda, who is responsible".

"Responsible for what", she said slightly shaken.

"See,don't just sit down and play dumb with me, who's responsible for that pregnancy".

She chuckled uneasily,"mummy what makes you think that,I am pregnant".

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Re: Mr Right by EvaJael(f): 3:39pm On Jul 29
Mothers and sharp eye..chai

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Re: Mr Right by queenitee(f): 4:23pm On Jul 29
EvaJael:
Mothers and sharp eye..chai
This girl did not call me

I have a new friend sis, eyinimofeoluwa
Re: Mr Right by queenitee(f): 4:26pm On Jul 29
KimberlyWest:


Thanks for the invitation sis,

Following like kilode,

Great story you've got, but please work on the spacing.

Evajael, Kimkardashian, Queenitee, Mhizgap, Yungeez, come and look for your Mr and Mrs right expecially Hadampson.
I did not even get your mention sis
Re: Mr Right by queenitee(f): 4:32pm On Jul 29
Mothers!!! They know everything
Re: Mr Right by EvaJael(f): 5:41pm On Jul 29
queenitee:

This girl did not call me

I have a new friend sis, eyinimofeoluwa
Sorry sis. Ohhh new friend,tell her to come and meet the big family na only if stephengee12 won't disgrace himself
Re: Mr Right by Kimkardashain(f): 6:07pm On Jul 29
wow. mothers and their sharp eyes eh
Re: Mr Right by stephenGee12(m): 7:35pm On Jul 29
EvaJael:

Sorry sis. Ohhh new friend,tell her to come and meet the big family na only if stephengee12 won't disgrace himself


See wu is talking sef
Re: Mr Right by queenitee(f): 7:40pm On Jul 29
EvaJael:

Sorry sis. Ohhh new friend,tell her to come and meet the big family na only if stephengee12 won't disgrace himself
Oya eyinimofeoluwa come and meet my family kimkadashain and her twin kimberlywest, Evajael, mhizgap, Jane1234f, Hadampson, Yungeez, stephengee12, Emperor380 and EmpressT. And there''s grandma Hormobolanle. They would introduce themselves to you
Re: Mr Right by stephenGee12(m): 8:18pm On Jul 29
queenitee:

Oya eyinimofeoluwa come and meet my family kimkadashain and her twin kimberlywest, Evajael, mhizgap, Jane1234f, Hadampson, Yungeez, stephengee12, Emperor380 and EmpressT. And there''s grandma Hormobolanle. They would introduce themselves to you

Hmmmmm.......
Eyinimofeoluwa welcome jare.
I am the head of the family ooooo.
Re: Mr Right by EvaJael(f): 8:20pm On Jul 29
stephenGee12:



See wu is talking sef
Ehen him don come. You get luck sey ur wife na quiet person sha

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