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Re: Wounded by Akinwale14(m): 9:18am On Aug 17, 2017
Eyinimofeoluwa:
No wahala
cool
Eyinimofeoluwa:
No wahala
Re: Wounded by Kimkardashain(f): 10:32am On Aug 17, 2017
Penshalom:

Lmao
Wait, did you actually wet your pants?
yes i did, i had to pray to God 4 4gvness b4 goin dwn there, it was wen the lights in d basement went off dat i screamed and wet my pants. and she was busy lafing

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 11:02am On Aug 17, 2017
Kimkardashain:

yes i did, i had to pray to God 4 4gvness b4 goin dwn there, it was wen the lights in d basement went off dat i screamed and wet my pants. and she was busy lafing
Oh Lord, lol
It must have been traumatic for you
Re: Wounded by Kimkardashain(f): 7:26pm On Aug 17, 2017
Penshalom:
Oh Lord, lol It must have been traumatic for you
lol. yea

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 8:37am On Aug 18, 2017
Happy birthday to all the August "visitors".
Age with grace.
If your birthday is in this month and it has not passed yet.. drop the date so we can all wish you a happy birthday.

Episode 7
I couldn't keep the smile off my face.
He pecked my lips as he dropped me off.
"See you tomorrow babe" He said with that heart stopping smile.
I just kept smiling.
"You are so cute" He pulled my nose in a playful way and left.
Immediately I entered the house Mel attacked me.
"Oh my God.. Did he just kiss you? Or was I seeing wrong?"
"Oh my God Mel.. You were watching us?"
"Of course.. Best friend duty. I have to keep tabs on you. That's by the way, did he actually kiss you?"
I sit down on the sofa.
"Yes" I say shyly.
"Okay.. What's up?" she sits beside me.
"Can you believe it Mel? He likes me too.. We both like each other..the feeling is mutual" I say, practically squealing.
"Wow.. That's great"
"Great? It's fantastic, awesome, wonderful, beautiful. I'm like so over the moon now Mel. Anyway we are dating now."
"Huh? Dating? Already?"
"Yes.. There's no wasting time, we both like each other so why not?"
"Oh"
"Mark got this for you" I give her the meat pie we got earlier.
She collected it and didn't even glance at it once.
"What? You don't look happy."
"I am happy. I am happy for you Rose"
"But.."
"But isn't this too soon? I mean you just met each other for like a month and you went out like twice and just like that you are dating. Do you even know this guy?"
"Well.. I feel like I've known him forever. That does not matter right now Mel, what matters is our feelings for each other. We will get to know each other gradually".
Mel sighs deeply.
"I don't know Rose. I think you are rushing into this."
"What? Rushing? You are the one who believes in the love at first sight thing." I say standing up.
"I do but that doesn't mean you don't use your brain too"
"What do you mean by that?" I say, slightly offended.
"I'm sorry, that came out wrong. I mean you have to know a guy deeply, don't let your feelings rule your thinking.. For all we know he could be a fraud or a..."
"Enough Mel. Enough"
"Rose..."
"I've heard enough of your talk alright? You are happy with your boyfriend, you don't how it feels to be alone, not having someone to talk to, I've found someone I love Melissa take it or leave it."
I storm off to my room and slam the door.
How dare she?
Penshalom

Question: Does love at first sight exist? If yes, what is love then? Physical qualities or one's personality?"


Hit the like option , that will mean so much to me.

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Re: Wounded by Blecool(f): 9:59am On Aug 18, 2017
Gone are those days where love at first sight made sense.bt in d world of today.its lust at first sight. Any1 wu wants to be real wit u ough to gv u time to sought out ur feeling. Nt jumping into a love affair wit u. Love takes time to grow. It doesnt come out of thin air like that.

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Re: Wounded by pweetymhi(f): 10:15am On Aug 18, 2017
Love is not by physical qualities it is by personality, who u are matters, in love there must have been a mutual agreement between the two hearts. Live can't b rushed into, if it z rushed into u run out d same way. Unless 2 hearts agree to b 1 dr z ntyn like love.
Love at first sight does not exist, it is called lust i mean u seeing a person 4 d first tym and lusting over him. I will drop my pen here, bh nt without saying op u are doing a nice job here

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Re: Wounded by Blecool(f): 10:34am On Aug 18, 2017
Hope u dnt mind if i call ur attention to some grammatical error. The places u used 'say' ought to attract d past tense instead which is 'said'. The lng and short of it is dat be mindful wen using ur tenses. Good job. More ideas

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 11:17am On Aug 18, 2017
Blecool:
Hope u dnt mind if i call ur attention to some grammatical error. The places u used 'say' ought to attract d past tense instead which is 'said'. The lng and short of it is dat be mindful wen using ur tenses. Good job. More ideas
Noted.
Thanks dear

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 11:52am On Aug 18, 2017
pweetymhi:
Love is not by physical qualities it is by personality, who u are matters, in love there must have been a mutual agreement between the two hearts. Live can't b rushed into, if it z rushed into u run out d same way. Unless 2 hearts agree to b 1 dr z ntyn like love.
Love at first sight does not exist, it is called lust i mean u seeing a person 4 d first tym and lusting over him. I will drop my pen here, bh nt without saying op u are doing a nice job here
Hmm, deep.
Thank you.
Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 11:53am On Aug 18, 2017
Blecool:
Gone are those days where love at first sight made sense.bt in d world of today.its lust at first sight. Any1 wu wants to be real wit u ough to gv u time to sought out ur feeling. Nt jumping into a love affair wit u. Love takes time to grow. It doesnt come out of thin air like that.

I wish everyone will know this.

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Re: Wounded by Kimkardashain(f): 11:55am On Aug 18, 2017
love at first sight? i dnt believe in dat crap no mre, i dnt even believe in love anymre

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Re: Wounded by Nobody: 12:37pm On Aug 18, 2017
Wow! Nice story

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 2:33pm On Aug 18, 2017
Kimkardashain:
love at first sight? i dnt believe in dat crap no mre,
i dnt even believe in love anymre
Whoa..don't give up on love dear.
Re: Wounded by Topmaike007(m): 7:36am On Aug 19, 2017
Kimkardashain:
love at first sight? i dnt believe in dat crap no mre,
i dnt even believe in love anymre
why you dont believe in love again
Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 9:10am On Aug 19, 2017
Episode 8
The happiness in me is radiating on my face.
Everyone who saw me noticed it.
Even my boss.
"You seem really happy this morning Rose. I noticed you've been happy all week"
"Oh. Thank you sir"
"Wanna share?"
"Oh.. You know, just happy about the dating thingy. Nothing big" I said casually but I'm freaking out inside.
"Dating? You are dating already? Wow, who is the lucky guy?"
Okay, that's weird.
"Didn't Mark tell you?" I asked, confused.
"Mark? No, he told me nothing. Oh my God you are dating Mark?"
"Yes" I said happily.
"But isn't that a little soon?"
I frown at that.
What's wrong with this people?
"No" I snapped at him.
"Whoa, sorry. I hope you know what you are doing. Good luck Rose, I'm happy for you."
That instantly made me happy.
"Thank you. I'm sorry for snapping at you."
"It's okay. Just remember I'm still your boss Rose" He warned me.
"Yes sir. I'm truly sorry about that" I mumbled.
*****************************************************
"You didn't tell Fred about us?"
"Huh.. No, why?"
"He is your friend so I just thought you'd tell him"
"I don't want to"
"Why?"
"I just don't want to."
"But why?"
"I just don't want to, drop it Rose" he shouted at me.
I just stand there shocked.
"I'm sorry" He said after a while.
"You are so bad tempered"
"Hmm. Sorry. "
"It's okay. Let's leave "
We left my office and he dropped me home.
I enter and see Mel eating.
I head for my room.
"Rose, why didn't you pick my calls?"
"Because I'm angry at you obviously"
"I'm sorry for interfering in your relationship. I don't like us fighting. I'm sorry"
I turn back to look at her.
"I don't like us fighting too"
"I won't interfere again I promise"
I nod my head.
We both hug each other.
"I missed you girl"
"Me too Mel"
We pull from the hug.
"Go get your food. I have so much to tell you"
"Let me guess, it's about Kate"
"You know me so well"
I smile.
"I finally fulfilled my promise"
"Jesus.. You beat her? " I said in shock.
"Uh uh"
"I can't wait to hear this"
I rush to the kitchen to get my food.
Mel is a crazy girl.
Penshalom

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 7:20am On Aug 20, 2017
Episode 9
Our relationship is now a month's old.
So, far it's been good, except for his bad temper.
But he's the best actually.
He's so perfect.
He spoils me, he buys me things just like now we are now at the mall we went the other time.
"Hi.. I'm here for the gown I ordered for. I want her to try it on" Mark told one of the attendants.
"What's your name sir?"
"Mark"
"Excuse me"
She left us for a while.
"Please. Follow me ma'am" She said when she came back.
I follow her to the dressing room and she brought a gown for me few minutes later.
It's so pretty.
But..
"Wait.. Are you sure this is what he ordered for?"
"Yes ma'am"
"This is so short"
"I guess that's your boyfriend's taste"
"Excuse me"
I go out.
"Mark.. What's this?"
I point the gown at him.
"Oh.. You like it?"
"What? No"
"Why? You will look sexy in this"
"No Mark, I will look like a slut in this"
"This is the perfect dress for where we are going?"
"Where?"
"A friend's club"
"What kind of friend is that? I'm sure it's not Fred"
"You will meet him tonight"
"No. I'm not going to a club with you"
"Stop this holier than thou attitude Rose. You are going"
"I'm not. I don't go to clubs, sure I have fun but not to that extent. I'm not going Mark. I'm returning this gown"
I move towards the dressing room but he stopped me by holding my hand, tight.
"You are wearing this gown, tonight"
"Stop it Mark you are hurting me" I said trying to wriggle my hands out.
He didn't leave me.
"Everything alright here?" a lady asked us.
"Oh of course, we are just arguing if the color suits her or not. Right honey?" Mark smiled at me and released my hand.
"Yes" I didn't want to create a scene.
"Do you want to change the color ma'am? "
"No it's perfect." I said with a fake smile and followed her to the dressing room not wanting to create a scene.
What the hell is wrong with Mark?
Penshalom

Hit the like option, alright?
Peace out.
By the way, Happy Sunday.

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Re: Wounded by Toyin223(f): 9:10am On Aug 20, 2017
DIS One Is'nt Love
Re: Wounded by Nobody: 10:57am On Aug 20, 2017
Chai This Mark sef
Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 8:57am On Aug 21, 2017
Episode 10
We entered his car after buying the dress.
"I'm sorry about what I did earlier"
I don't answer.
"Hey, babe, Rose"
I just keep looking ahead.
"I'm sorry alright? I just want to show you off to my friends."
"What? So I have to dress like that because you want to show me off? "
"It's what most of their girls will wear, I just don't want you to be out of place."
"It's still doesn't feel right..."
He cuts me off.
"Please just once Huh?, babe, please it's just this one time. We won't even stay long just for 30 minutes, greet and go" He pleaded.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes love. "
I think about it for some minutes.
Well it wouldn't hurt if it's once.
"Alright, but no repeat of this, OK?"
"Yes ma'am." He said with a mock salute.
"I'm sorry about that" He said pointing at my wrist.
I look at my wrist.
"Is that a bruise? I can't believe I did that. I'm so sorry Rose, so sorry."
"It's alright, at least you know what you did is wrong"
"Yeah, I promise it won't repeat itself again" he said looking sincerely sorry.
"It's okay" I hug him.
"Thank you Rose. You are really the one for me."
"You are the one for me too."
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"I know I promised I wouldn't interfere again but are you sure about this?"
"Not really but since it's just a day thing and we wouldn't even stay long, so why not?"
I tried pulling the gown up a bit, it's showing too much up here.
I pull it down again, it's showing too much down there.
"See, you are not even comfortable with the gown, you keep pulling it. Do you even want to do this?"
"No, I'm not happy about this but it's Mark" I replied sincerely.
"So what if it is Mark, you don't have to change who you are because of a guy"
"I know but it's just for today"
"Hmm. I hope so"
"I will be back soon I promise"
"Be safe". Mel said after sighing knowing she can't convince me.
Mark was already parked outside.
"Wow, damn baby you look hot"
"Hmm. Just so you know I'm still not happy about this."
Mark just rolls his eyes.
We got to the club 20 minutes later, and from the moment we stepped in I knew this is not the place for me.
"Mark, your chick is hot" A guy said, I think it's his new friend with the way the greeted each other.
"I know right" Mark replied with a smirk.
I look at the two of them disgustingly .
I keep pulling the gown up and down.
I started counting the minutes since we entered.
"Mark it's time"
"Time for what?"
"Time to go"
I make a move to stand up.
"Wait, chill, let's wait for another 30 minutes. Hmm?"
I sit back down.
"Aren't you drinking?" A girl asked me.
"No."
"Babe, drink something. Even if it's just one glass"
"No"
"C'mon Rose." He tried to force it in my mouth.
"I said no" I shouted at him.
"I've had enough of this." I stand up and leave with Mark hot on my heels.
"What the hell was all that drama inside?" Mark asked me angrily.
I just fold my arms angrily.
"Get back in there Rose" He demanded after taking a deep breath.
"And if I don't?"
"Do it while I'm being nice" He said angrily again.
"I'm not going back there Mark and you can't force me to"
I replied back angrily too.
"Get back in there"
"Never" I said screaming in his face.
"Get inside Rose"
I shake my head and turn to leave.
He pulled me back and started pulling me inside.
I manage to remove my hand from him.
"What the hell is wrong with you?"
I say hitting him with my purse.
"Are you nuts? Did you just hit me?" He looks at me angrily, he looks so scary right now.
"Yes" My voice shakes a little.
He moved closer to me.
I move back.
"You f***king hit me. You hit me you bitch"
He said angrily and suddenly I feel something hit my cheek.
He slapped me.
Penshalom.

I sincerely want to thank those that I've been liking and commenting, thanks for your support. Bless up.

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Re: Wounded by Nobody: 9:27am On Aug 21, 2017
Thanks for the update.. Rose you better run for your dear life

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Re: Wounded by Toyin223(f): 9:39am On Aug 21, 2017
princ007:
Thanks for the update.. Rose you better run for your dear life
hmmmmmm My Sister I Was Thinking Dxame Tin Nw

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Re: Wounded by pweetymhi(f): 9:49am On Aug 21, 2017
Rose run now b4 it too late o

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Re: Wounded by Nobody: 10:16am On Aug 21, 2017
pweetymhi:
Rose run now b4 it too late o
Make she dey there dey claim love. She better listen to Mel now b4 it's too late.

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Re: Wounded by Gabrendo(m): 12:06pm On Aug 21, 2017
Nice one. I am following o. #MarknRose

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Re: Wounded by Blecool(f): 7:32pm On Aug 21, 2017
Rose if your faith in that relationship cnt carry you.. Babe your leg should not disappoint. This is wat i tell myself n am advising u same. Run o

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Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 8:13pm On Aug 21, 2017
Blecool:
Rose if your faith in that relationship cnt carry you.. Babe your leg should not disappoint. This is wat i tell myself n am advising u same. Run o
� Lol
Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 8:14pm On Aug 21, 2017
Blecool:
Rose if your faith in that relationship cnt carry you.. Babe your leg should not disappoint. This is wat i tell myself n am advising u same. Run o
� Lol cheesy
Blecool:
Rose if your faith in that relationship cnt carry you.. Babe your leg should not disappoint. This is wat i tell myself n am advising u same. Run o
� Lol
Re: Wounded by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 10:15pm On Aug 21, 2017
hmmmmm Rosa u better ran nw way u still get chance
Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 7:39am On Aug 22, 2017
Episode 11
I stand there not able to move.
It felt like a dream.
But it's not.
I can still feel the pain in my cheek.
He slapped me.
Tears started falling from my eyes.
"M..Mark.. You slapped me?" I said with a shaky voice.
"Rose.. I.. "
I didn't wait for him to finish his sentence before I turned and leave.
"Rose wait"
I heard him calling my name but I didn't wait.
I start running and I heard my name fade behind me.
He slapped me.
He slapped me.
He slapped me.
That thought kept running through my head till I got home.
I knock on the door, as soon as Mel opened and saw my face she pulled me inside and hugged me.
I start crying hard.
"Shh, it's okay, it's okay. "
Mel kept saying rubbing my back.
******************************************************
#20 minutes later.#
I calmed down a little.
"Do you want to talk about it?
I nod my head.
"What happened?"
"He slapped me Mel. He slapped me"
"He did what? He slapped you?" Mel says angrily.
"He slapped you? He slapped you? "
I just sit there quietly.
"The guy's so dead the next time I see him. How dare he slap you? That asshole" Mel said pacing like a wounded. lion.
"I couldn't believe it Mel. It felt like a dream. How could Mark do such a thing?"
Mel sits with me and hold my hand.
"I love him Mel. I can't believe the man I love can do that."
"That's because he is not a man. Every man that hits a woman does not deserve to be called a man. He is a monster"
"God I can't believe it."
"I should have listened to you. I should have listened to you."
"It's OK, everyone makes mistakes and we learn from them. "
"Thank you so much. Thank you for staying with me."
"What are friends for? You need to rest. Let's go to bed"
We both slept in her room.
Penshalom

Questions: If you are opportune to go back in time and remake the choices you made, what would they be?

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Re: Wounded by Kimkardashain(f): 7:53am On Aug 22, 2017
i would have wantd 2 change my heart, with stone

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Re: Wounded by Pearl05(f): 10:29am On Aug 22, 2017
This is how domestic violence starts. There is always the red light but ladies most times are too carried away to use their brain in reasoning.

With all the signs and warning from Fred and Mel, I see Rose being bought over with more gifts and she blindly walks into destruction.


Great story .

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