H.J, u get the betta of me on the numerous resources thingy, Anyways im dropping mine this evening when i go to the cafe. Drtv is really an excuse 4 a tv station and Jfm is realy da ish, Peace

@dawhiz-kid . . .word bruv, DRTV dey fall hand . .  .thanks mayte . .chillin 4 urs this evening

chamotex:

Post your verse.
The reason DBR's verse activated the Spam bot thingy was cos[b] it was too long.[/b]

Use 16 bars max (30 lines) to be on the safe side.

@
Chamo[i]kazzie[/i]
I tot so too, but even when i broke it into 2 the isshhh didnt stay.
And i counted the linez after breakin it, wasnt as long as Ibime's(he had 32 linez)

So wat we talkin bout here? Can i try again, breakin it in 2
Holla.
oNe

Dropped Lasgidi State Of Mind~~on a sorta braggin note~~
now i'm droppin this usin ma sombre quill pen n ink .


(NigerDeltazone)- NDzone-The Villainous-Dark-Side-state of Mind

(1)

Yea it DBR baby ~~it's d return of me/
Been thinkin~~ wats up wit d 9ja economy/
Few crooks got d billions locked down in Autonomy/
Minority send mails on yahoo Efcc they turned on 'em/

politicians feedin fat on blood shed and oil spill/
stealin masses taxes~~no hope ~so boys steal/
amnesty is crap ~~Niger delta boil still/
honestly ~the gap gets bigger~~masses~ poor still/
amnesia cant erase the pain that they all feel/
the soil weeps/ the void creeps/ hear d voice speak/

vaguely~they losin the memory of d ground once where they lived/
daily~fightin for their land ~~they ready to kill ~~or get killed/
plainly~ becomin' less of a human ~~terror they embracin/
they could put a stop but govtn just being evasive/
real oil from their ground but classrooms are makeshift/
turnin good intention to puppet on some staged sh[i]![/i]t/

brace it ~~or refrain if~ u can not embrace it /
militancy versus bravery/ patroitism or slavery/
7point agenda ~~reality or daydream/

the dudes/ in ND are now Cruder [/i]than the [i]Oil/
mood/ Rudder than a boat's Steerin' coil/
shuddnt the gem be the jeweler's just cos they toil?/
we keep the Rules of the soil/ yet the Rulers get the spoil/
we the loser/ and they expect we to be Cooler/ tho we Boil?/
~~~~~~
oNe

DBR:

@
Chamo[i]kazzie[/i]
I tot so too, but even when i broke it into 2 the isshhh didnt stay.
And i counted the linez after breakin it, wasnt as long as Ibime's(he had 32 linez)

So wat we talkin bout here? Can i try again, breakin it in 2
Holla.
oNe

I think the spam bot cant just filter your verse cos basically u're posting the same thing if u know what I mean.
Another way u could try is to maybe switch your lines up . . . . dont put them in the same order and try cutting them into 3 different verses this time.

Change some things like the heading or a few words if u can and lets see how that goes.

This got to be the weakest Verse here, bt i just gotta rep where i'm from wiv dese,

Whizkid - WARRI STATE OF MIND

I be proper Warri boy, that na how my Flow Start/
we dey Composed n Unique n Classic~~ than Mozart/
At four, We dey watch Ajebutters dey Start School/
While we dey make Castle with Palm Fronds and Sharped Broom/
When we were 5, we upgrade go Mopol/
Trek frm Generator to Pessu Market Area go find Koto/
We go carve the Koto n Dig small Contour/
Game Starts wen i say kiti n next person say Kortor/
at six, wen nyt comes we listen to Folks Story/
After which na time for us to Play Otori/
~~ fast forward to ten year Later/
By then every men don dey hustle 2 hand sum paper/
Na we get Pidgin~~ Slangs many pass Water/
pass Scriptures wey pastor go quote, if you Chase him Daughter/
truly At times, we dey Evil like Man Deve/
If U wan raise a building, U must pay Land Deve/
Life dey hard here but we still dey Juggle/
We Lively n Humorous~~ U fit call us George of the Jungle/
But battle us and get Hyst-e-ria/
If u want 2 hail us~~ Holla 'Area'/
Na where get Talents pass Us?/
4 music we be first, 4 comedy na Us/
ABJ or na Jos?~~/
dem dey dread for our flows, little wonder anywhere we Show/
~~dem dey give us Round of Applause.

@whizkid

the verse aint wack to me
i kinda relate with a few lines there
you got good flows

@mykali,
Thanks brova, thanks.

Whiz kid, u d ish! Na two of us know how far. Lol.

@H.J,
I feel you bruv, U r d ishest. Lol, They got to grow up in Wafftown or b a KK(Korrect Kpako) to rel8 2 every word up there,

@DBR
I'm trying all I can to get your post opened, I've IMed them four times each.
The last time I raised the issue of giving moderators the power to unblock posts, Seun made it look like I stole his meat.

Now see what this is causing.

@da-whizkid
How did you manage to script that in pidgin??
WOW!!! That's was cool . . . you ND boys want to takeover NL

@eldee,
mind the words u use 0, Seun's ur boss 0, lol, I was six months old when i came to Warri n i've lived all mi life here, i shud be able to spit pidgin very well, Plus, i rap in real life, n i spit in pidgin 2.

eldee is u hating on me or u gat a problem wiv me cuz ma hunches tell me dat and u some many situations point towards dat direction but i aint bringin dat up 4 now, . . holla asap

H.J:

eldee is u hating on me or u gat a problem wiv me cuz ma hunches tell me dat and u some many situations point towards dat direction but i aint bringin dat up 4 now, . . holla asap

Hating on you?? You're one of the coolest guys I know on NL.
Why would I hate on you??

If it's an argument . . . just forget errfin, I just argue to win, even when it gets dirty.
But, seriously . . . I rate you.

eldee:

Hating on you?? You're one of the coolest guys I know on NL.
Why would I hate on you??

If it's an argument . . . just forget errfin, I just argue to win, even when it gets dirty.
But, seriously . . . I rate you.

Well some tots jus crossed me mind and had some funny ideas , . . hope i didnt push the button too hard wiv d question . . .no matter wut u stil on point bruv. .thanks .one!!

eldee:

Hating on you?? You're one of the coolest guys I know on NL.
Why would I hate on you??

If it's an argument . . . just forget errfin, I just argue to win, even when it gets dirty.
But, seriously . . . I rate you.

ha ode, eldee hates on everyone that is better than him . he is even trying to play on HJ's intelligence . see maga.

ofokaofoki:

ha ode, eldee hates on everyone that is better than him . he is even trying to play on HJ's intelligence . see maga.

hahahahaha

ofoka and eldee . . .settle your scores in a battle or do something about it

mykali:

ofoka and eldee . . .settle your scores in a battle or do something about it

Let em battle

Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!

mykali:

ofoka and eldee . . .settle your scores in a battle or do something about it

Ofoka is slow . . . that's a proven truth.

But at the end of the day, he's just having fun . . . I feel the guy man, he's comic relief.

lalaboi:

Let em battle

Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!Battle!!, . .battle!!. . . .Battle!!

Nah, I've got too many people on my list . . . I've got lines for Sauron, Streetwise, Wordsmith and Mailmalc

GIDI TO GARDEN CITY STATE OF MIND

check . . . / i was born in Lagos/ a city of hustlerz
were these hustlerz sell fake goods to they customers
lived at No.4 Alaka street/ Olodi Apapa . . . Lagos
in them ghettos were Daddy Showkey was most famous

used to save ''one naira notes'' cuz it made us feel richer
learnt so many lessons/ bcuz the street was our teacher
kept our 25kobo coins/ so we could buy kwuli kwuli 'n' dankwah
didn't see much money though/ . . .yet me dad was a banker

used to be happy if he came home wiv a fat paycheck
cuz he'll repair the black 'n white so i could watch M. Fashek
ajebutters played ''hide 'n seek''/ we played ''moju moju''
and if you had so much coins then . . .chics fit soji for you

back when ''gbomo gbomo'' were my childhood fear
my friends called me ''eleti nla'' cuz i had huge ears
my childhood peers greatly influenced my childood years
those were me best years. . . but now who cares?

used to be an ''ajepako''/ and i loved it with a passion
cuz we used to steal ''baba dudu'' and share it in rations
now i'm ''ajebutter'' . . . . bcuz i live in a mansion
but back then/ walkin ''barefoot'' was ''top fashion''

those years behind me now/ i'm a Harcourt City hustler
were we hustlerz sell cheap goods to rich customers
we livin' a fast life here . . .aint no need for ''okadas''
you wanna get paid? then you've gotta work harder

we all farmers here cuz we live in the Garden City
you gotta put in work or your whole life'z gon' be a pity
but if wanna show off/ kidnappers'll pay you a visit
and if you can cough up 50mil? your life . . .you wont lose it

@mykali
Long shot, but do you know Counsellor??
Tolu Hospital?? Boundary?? and the Ilaje guys??

eldee:

@mykali
Long shot, but do you know Counsellor??
Tolu Hospital?? Boundary?? and the Ilaje guys??

lol . . .i was a kid back then.
its been more than 15years man. . . really cant tell.

hey . . .but i think i remember Boundary
i used to spell it ''Bandry''

mykali:

lol . . .i was a kid back then.
its been more than 15years man. . . really cant tell.

hey . . .but i think i remember Boundary
i used to spell it ''Bandry''

I had my family there so we used to go there for holidays, this was about 15-17 years ago.
They lived on Market Street, I used to go to 'lesson' on your street

I used to call it Bandry too . . .

I should write a verse . . . I have sooo many 'roots'

eldee:

I had my family there so we used to go there for holidays, this was about 15-17 years ago.
They lived on Market Street, I used to go to 'lesson' on your street

I used to call it Bandry too . . . 

I should write a verse . . . I have sooo many 'roots'

been waiting for that for a long, long time .
its about fuckin time mayne . . .

@eldee[i]gy[/i]
@Lalaboi[i]zzle[/i]

u r both here havin fun when smone who tot u guyz hav got his back is
waitin and countin on both of u to help unban him

and no word or so, even tho he sent u personal messages??
U think he gon find that cool?
i think not
oNe

@DBR
you were banned?
how long is your verse mayne?
and i thot mine was too fuckin long.
just one trial and its there.

Lalaboi should be able to help.

Scriptin' this with ma Conscious sombre quill pen n ink .


- NDzone-The Villainous-state-of-Mind (1)

Yea it DBR baby ~~it's d return of me/
Been thinkin~~ wats up wit d 9ja economy/
Few crooks got d billions locked down in Autonomy/
Minority send mails on y.ahoo Efcc they turned on 'em/

politicians feedin fat on blood shed and oil spill/
stealin masses taxes~~no hope ~so boys steal/
amnesty/ is crap ~~Niger delta boil still/
honestly/ ~the gap gets bigger~~masses~ poor still/
amnesia cant erase the pain that they all feel/
the soil weeps/ the void creeps/ hear d voice speak/

vaguely/~they losin the memory of d ground once where they lived/
daily/~fightin for their land ~~they ready to kill ~~or get killed/
plainly/~ becomin' less of a human ~~terror they embracin/
they could put a stop but govtn just being evasive/
real [/i]oil from their ground but classrooms are [i]makeshift/
turnin good intention to puppet on some staged sh[i]![/i]t/

brace it ~~or refrain if~ u can not embrace it /
militancy versus bravery/ patroitism or slavery/
7point agenda ~~reality or daydream/

the dudes/ in ND are now Cruder than the Oil/
mood/ Rudder than a boat's Steerin' coil/
shuddnt the gem be the jeweler's just cos they toil?/
we keep the Rules of the soil/ yet the Rulers get the spoil/
we the loser/ and they expect we to be Cooler/ tho we Boil?/
~~~~~~
oNe

RBD:

@eldee[i]gy[/i]
@Lalaboi[i]zzle[/i]

u r both here havin fun when smone who tot u guyz hav got his back is
waitin and countin on both of u to help unban him

and no word or so, even tho he sent u personal messages??
U think he gon find that cool?
i think not
oNe

Come on man . . . I didn't get ur personal messages.
I didn't even know you were banned.

I'll try to get across to Muki and Seun, they seem to be on a different planet right now.

DBR is unbanned - let him try logging in.

@debosky
I see you've unblocked the verse, thanks man
Do you reckon it will get blocked if I post it again??

Didn't unblock it, I think Seun must have done it.

I'd advise against posting it again - the spam bot doesn't like that.