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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 11:11pm On Sep 13
And one of our bad girls undecided

ERIKA

shocked shocked shocked


( this is probably some well known model, but hey, she fits the role )

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 11:14pm On Sep 13
That's a wrap folks wink
Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 12:02am On Sep 14
purples25:
That's a wrap folks wink



herh!
Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 12:02am On Sep 14
purples25:
And one of our bad girls undecided

ERIKA

shocked shocked shocked


( this is probably some well known model, but hey, she fits the role )


lol...is this the update? grin
Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 12:04am On Sep 14
nawtielizzie:
Don't I just love happy endings�


I'm glad i found one person who loves happy endings like me

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 12:26am On Sep 14
cbella:



lol...is this the update? grin


Cbella! grin I'm sure you've seen the main last update, you're teasing tongue Hope you liked it though!
Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 12:27am On Sep 14
cbella:




herh!


I know you'd have liked me to add a few more twists grin lemme not turn d story until it becomes AMALA cheesy
Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 12:30am On Sep 14
purples25:



Cbella! grin I'm sure you've seen the main last update, you're teasing tongue Hope you liked it though!


I will answer this properly when i finish mine! long over due , its time i wrap up

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Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 12:32am On Sep 14
purples25:



I know you'd have liked me to add a few more twists grin lemme not turn d story until it becomes AMALA cheesy



Lol!!!.... I liked a lot of stuffs about this story. will give you feedback after a year grin

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 12:38am On Sep 14
cbella:




Lol!!!.... I liked a lot of stuffs about this story. will give you feedback after a year grin

A year ! shocked
Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 12:40am On Sep 14
cbella:



I will answer this properly when i finish mine! long over due , its time i wrap up

Awwww still enjoying your story. You know how to keep us hooked. Will be eagerly awaiting your response in due time though wink
Re: Love And Snakes by Pearl05(f): 3:43am On Sep 14
Beautiful story. No multiple twists . Weldon ma'ma.

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 9:24am On Sep 14
Pearl05:
Beautiful story. No multiple twists . Weldon ma'ma.

Thanks dear smiley
Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 1:49am On Sep 16
purples25:


A year ! shocked


Yeah!!! I'm using goggles remember....

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Re: Love And Snakes by Deeejah(f): 8:52pm On Sep 17
A Beautiful and emotional ending.
It's hard to stay mad at some1 u love. Purple25 if dia is aso-ebi for d wedding, I will buy o.
Lol
Thanks for d good story, more stories pls. grin

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Re: Love And Snakes by GRACEGLORY: 4:23am On Sep 18
[quote author=purples25 post=60431414] REUNION




It has been a month and some weeks since the incident.



Red, yellow, blue, green, pink and purple balloons and party streamers hang from the ceiling in Laura's large pink and white house. Damilola, skipping around in a birthday gown, seems to have forgotten the incident completely. Well , she's only three , her third birthday being marked today, so why would she ? Laura however, is full of some new wariness as she follows her daughter's happy movements around the large parlour, Barney's music turned up at an averagely tolerable level while the little girl imitates the images on the screen. " Mummy , mummy " The little girl tries to climb a chair to get unto a large glass table in the middle of the room and gets a warning glance from her mother. She blushes and sits abruptly on the floor the way kids sometimes do when they walk and lose their balance. She's got Laura smiling again.


Laura had not found it funny when she discovered that her woes had risen from one of Dare's supposed flings, or the only one, as he had tried to explain, subtly begging behind this lengthy explanation. She had refused to see him for the whole month after she and her daughter had gotten home, and he had to take a flight back to Abuja the very next day after arriving in Lagos , when in her own just rage she had threatened to call the police if he stayed outside her door, still pleading as he had from early afternoon until late evening. Explanation? What explanation ? He did not deserve his love and his daughter if he could put them through this kind of danger over another woman he had carelessly dealt with. She had to overlook the incident however, when she realized he was still the only man she loved and the only person who really understood her, had always been there for her in the past. It had taken all her energy to forgive him enough to let him see his daughter again, as he is going to , on her birthday today.


The bell rings and her heart skips a beat. Would it be wise to let him in after all this ? It rings again. She gathers up her courage and strides to the door. He is there, gift boxes and flowers in his arms, obviously he's having a hard time holding them all. He looks at her with a wary expression and his eyes are watery with this joy at seeing her and his smile is wide despite the regret and realization on the situation she sees behind his smile. " Laura. I'm .. " She doesn't allow him to complete his sentence. She hugs him suddenly and all the boxes fall to the floor. The cat, which has been standing outside by the door for a while, is startled and jumps away to sulk in the garden.
They smile at each other. And Dare realizes, that if he loses her, the only woman that makes him happy, his heart will be in shambles forever.

" I'm sorry, I'm so sorry" They start to pick the gift boxes from the floor together . "Mommy! " Both are startled as the little girl , attracted by the noise, skips suddenly into their view. She holds her mothers leg and looks up at the man before her , trying to understand what's happening. Tears cloud Laura's eyes as she gently bends down and holds her little girl, looks into her eyes. " Don't worry Dammy. Its daddy.....remember I told......" Before her sentence is over the little girl leaps into her fathers waiting arms happily and hugs him tight " Daddy, been waiting for daddy" She tries to form the little sentence with difficulty in her baby voice and words. The man is more than grateful. The way he holds his daughter tightly, tears streaming down his eyes, speaks volumes. They go inside.



" Daddy, daddy, wedding.......we going to have a weddiggg...." Damilola tries to convey her message. Laura and Dare smile at her and Dare looks up at Laura, eyes sparkling. " Well of course darling, " he replies " Why in the world wouldn't there be "






Now, this is what I call fiction. I see no single fault in this, except for one thing, you can do better if you always take your time with them, reading over and over again.

This is marvelous

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 8:11am On Sep 18
GRACEGLORY post=60568368

Thanks sir smiley
Re: Love And Snakes by bejeria101(m): 8:45am On Sep 18
Awesomely super! Keep it up,more ink to your pen.

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 8:48am On Sep 18
Deeejah:
A Beautiful and emotional ending.
It's hard to stay mad at some1 u love. Purple25 if dia is aso-ebi for d wedding, I will buy o.
Lol
Thanks for d good story, more stories pls. grin

You're welcome, I'll come up with more wink

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 8:50am On Sep 18
bejeria101:
Awesomely super! Keep it up

,more ink to your pen.

Thanks , I'll keep working on myself.

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Re: Love And Snakes by bejeria101(m): 9:00am On Sep 18
*lines up to buy book* yep hehehe

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Re: Love And Snakes by DonBobes(m): 9:15am On Sep 18
Abeg Wetin do Lalasticlala and anything snake? because pesin put snake for him thread now na FP straight.

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 10:10am On Sep 18
DonBobes:
Abeg Wetin do Lalasticlala and anything snake? because pesin put snake for him thread now na FP straight.


Lol
Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 10:10am On Sep 18
DonBobes:
Abeg Wetin do Lalasticlala and anything snake? because pesin put snake for him thread now na FP straight.


Lol cheesy
Re: Love And Snakes by Milonis(m): 12:39pm On Sep 18
Ever present cool

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 3:30pm On Sep 18
Milonis:
Ever present cool

Hey, glad you read it, thanks for the support.
Re: Love And Snakes by MightyFortress: 3:40pm On Sep 18
90/100... Fine writing.

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Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 4:00pm On Sep 18
MightyFortress:
90/100... Fine writing.


Thanks............i will continue to write and improve.
Re: Love And Snakes by purples25(f): 2:00pm On Sep 22
This is a great sketch by a fan of the story, a great artist, writer and poet . Thanks Firestar, this means a lot, a whole LOT.

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Re: Love And Snakes by cbella(f): 7:10am On Sep 25
Next update

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