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Elixir Of A Broken Heart / THOUGH I AM BROKEN / The Broken Heart (2) (3) (4)
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| The Broken Car by Chocoman(m): 2:03pm On Feb 20, 2018 |
God! You allow me enter this car � I no believe, I dey inside this car since my mama and Papa born me Car wa nho get reverse! One way, we dey go... So so gallop, flat tyre, bad engine oil, pot hole wa be like pit hole... Hmmmm! How I go do? Make I just endure reach my destination My destination come be like Sahara desert I no dey see front, I no dey see back Even blind man see pass me for this � car The only time wa the car dey move na when them dey change driver Them dey change driver every four years! All the drivers wa them don change blind pass blindness Abeg, I no need driver again... I need mechanic to make this car work well Haba! I don tire!! How man go do? Make we dey go small small... Oh! E dey pain me The gallop don plenty pass The tyres don flat pass before The engine oil don black pass charcoal I wan shout! Abeg make somebody help me shout Imagine even cows don take front seat for this car What about snakes? Them get money pass graduates Even rats them dey take AC for good office... The monkey nko? that guy get joy dye Abeg, make I go animal farm go get joy Till I find 106m from those guys... Abeg! I no fit continue again Oga driver, park well Make we go call another mechanic BY: SUNDAY ERNEST OYINMIEBI 2 Likes |
| Re: The Broken Car by Nobody: 5:24pm On Feb 26, 2018 |
Chocoman: Wow, the idea of the car is captivating but using that language takes a lot out of the poem. No offence bro |
| Re: The Broken Car by Chocoman(m): 9:35pm On Feb 26, 2018 |
Noted sir. Your criticism will only make me to work harder. Thanks and I want more of it to help shape my activities I will try to get the English version |
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