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Below The Rain by igwe2006(m): 4:10pm On Mar 02, 2006
Below the rain

i knelt with the roses

i skipped my bones in the air

and through love of many causes

i rode the winged mare

below the pleasure , below the light

to drench my eyes by your sight


Below the sun

i spoke with the shine

i swam in the colors

and onto spring of many hours

i died the gloomy times

below the sorrow , below the cries

to tie my life by your skies


Below the heaven

i prayed with the angels

i was praised on their wings

and into paradise of many lords

i breathed the glee

below the joy , below the spree

to sigh my thirst by your sea


Below the miracles

i was melted with the candles

i lived and saw all the marvels

and next mirrors of many dreams

even below the flame

i sewed my skin by your name


Below the sips

i was burnt in your lips

and walked on the passion

below the breezy emotions

to be a shadow of your motions
Re: Below The Rain by eslynera(f): 12:50am On Nov 29, 2006
THAT was cute, but it's not a game, u should of kept it in the poems section, all in all cute. cheesy
Re: Below The Rain by Nobody: 1:08am On Nov 29, 2006
Hey Mr Oga this topic no match the category wey he suppose dey. Admin do smthing abt this spam.
Re: Below The Rain by harvey(m): 1:54pm On Nov 29, 2006
na babe u won use that one catch?no be only below the rain,na above the sun.here no be where u go post ur poem,find em go front.
Re: Below The Rain by 190: 4:20am On Dec 30, 2008
this is a carbon copy of a nigerian player
nor worry chicks here arent interested
fake man
Re: Below The Rain by kay9(m): 1:17am On Dec 31, 2008
@190: Doof-ball, if you can't appreciate literature, then do your mechanical brain a favor and SHUT DA Bleep-UP!! I could forgive all the other philistines that posted before you - that was back in '06 anyway when LIT section was still in the hands of barbarians. But to post such - such shit at this time, man, you sure give a new meaning to the M in slowpoke! angry angry angry

Mmmh, that was some rant; I feel much better now . . .


@igwe2006: Too bad u aint around anymore, dude; that was some fine poetry you wrote. Fine, very fine smiley
Re: Below The Rain by Epi: 3:31am On Apr 05, 2009
at poster

T'is nice

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