ogbeche77: So in summary... Runs pays right
Ladies should keep it up so one day they ll meet there own Tola

Meself, I wonder.

I enjoyed the first part but the last two rilli wasnt that interesting and not all too realistic.
Can the bankers in the house tell us if its possible to cancel a cheque dat has already been paid into an account?
And i know for a fact that no Nigerian policeman on this planet will let u go without dropping somefing for the boys.
Patricia is not just misguided jor, she is just a runs girl without opportunity to show herself.

All of that notwithsatnding tho, the writer has got commendable writting talent. Keep it up.

too long i beg

lovely, nice one ;Dlovely, nice one

Nice ending but girls shld be careful on d kind of friends dey keep and associate with.

part 2 kee? Wit dat long story,wel boda 2 read it all bt i got d idea passd across thru d summary.bt bros, dat was a brave step u tuk,keep it up.u our next lit. Writer.

Sugardiva: I enjoyed the first part but the last two rilli wasnt that interesting and not all too realistic.
Can the bankers in the house tell us if its possible to cancel a cheque dat has already been paid into an account?
And i know for a fact that no Nigerian policeman on this planet will let u go without dropping somefing for the boys.
Patricia is not just misguided jor, she is just a runs girl without opportunity to show herself.

All of that notwithsatnding tho, the writer has got commendable writting talent. Keep it up.

Yes u can actually return a cheque that have been paid into an account, As far as its still within the clearing days. But the writer did not specify the time the cheque was paid in. Time is important here.

This story especially the part2 shld serve as a lesson to other undergraduate ladies. I remember my days in Unilag, after returning from their illicit trade with spoils of war, these runs girls would behave as if other diligent girls and boys on campus are lesser beings, the way and manner they flaunt the ill-gotten wealth was so resentful and distracting that morally upright but gullible girls could easily be deceived into joining them. Thumbs up for the writer,you are doing a great job.

freshmoney:

OK madam. Then use that thing well well, make that destined man enjoy am well

Trust i will.

And they lived Happilly ever after.

Almost succeeded in making me 4get that d protagonist is an ashawo, portraying her as a saint. Well, what u succeeded in doing is presenting a 'St ashawo'. Its really a case of birds of dsame feathers flocking.

I think umar is a good script writer keep it up buddy.

entrancing story. Major thumbs up.

:DI enjoyed the fantasy. We should have more ficticious stories like this.
To just go into an imaginary world where everything happens the way you want.like
MIlls and Boon from back in d day!!

bla..bla...bla...Nigerian film

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**Yawns***

Interesting! Waiting for part5..

Omo, this story don dey dry small o!

Well,the story is shifting to extend. Still interesting.

Good story and interesting. Part 5 plssssss.

@ Seun. D way this story is going, it must be a Series!

INTERESTING!!! Cant wait to read the concluding part.

I just hope part 5 won't be long in coming.

Hmm,me likey

This writer is simply amazing kiss - kiss, everyone in my home now loves her write-ups and looks forward to more stories.
Wish we could pay for them as a means to encourage her.
Hey! have you thought of opening a fan-page, be rest assure you'll get much support.
God Bless you my sister and give you more inspiration to make the Internet & NL much more fun.

Cheers!!

Nice work you have there. I dey wait next episode ooooo.

I love dis story die! She shouldn't keep us waiting

and the saga continues... Loving this build-up. Bring on part 5 pls. Waiting...

'Cos we said what the significance of d story after 'Part 3'....
The author has decided to continue, he should av stopped after part 2...
Story av lost focus

Now, the story is getting dry.