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biife
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CLAUSES IN CATACOMBS
dream waves lash against my uninspired head gashes of bloody thoughts gush fantasies of flowery fountains floundering in my fickleness condiments of chaotic cadences cooking in my cauldron of collections am i a poet or a writer?
with written words writhing in wrong wreaths woven wishes in winsome words under wraps for world-weary women singing sing-song serenade for soul-searching spinsters and bachelors believing blooms blossom in blues am i a poet or a writer?
setting up silly alliterative sentiments who cares where when and what I wear is it the toga of triumph or that of trepidation? let me write and writhe and wriggle in wrong words am i a poet or a writer?
cooking condiments of chaotic concoction
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Suzanne84 (f)
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I like your poem. Good use of alliteration and oxymoron. Powerful imagery. Your ability to construct contrastive but profound sentences is very remarkable. The best part, the end - "cooking condiments of chaotic concoctions" - awesome! My verdict? UCan.Write.Period.
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biife
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thanks dear, i really appreciate your words.
may i ask: do you also cook[ing[ condiments of chaotic concoction?
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bakenda (m)
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you are a writer and a poet.
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biife
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am happy, but i know i still have a long way to go,
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Nne9ja
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, Cool. Are you published?
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biife
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no dear, but i long to be published. i have over a hundred poems begging for cold print,
can you be of help?
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