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biife
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TEXTURES OF DARKNESS
glimpses of foggy feelings outlined in rough texture of darkness cataclysmic sadness enshrouded in sunken sockets of eerie eyes in broken skull
my fears are my self immortal thoughts bargaining an end adult eyes immobiled by painted devil dilating pupils picturing a final closure deathly sight of holes of hidden hearts
my fears are my self unshared soul divided by self self-shut self-hidden self-sold in dungeon of nothingness in cold blood of sudden cessation
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SMC (f)
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You are doing it again. Do you not like the Poems Section? 
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biife
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, it was a multi-accident from my system,
it wasn\'t me!
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dot2002 (f)
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dark and eerie, yes make it better
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SMC (f)
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it wasn\'t me!
You sound like Shaggy 
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iice (f)
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I like the theme but not feeling itexcept for the last part 
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blubadd (m)
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hello there. i've just finished dune by some herbert guy( the book's in tatters but the last page's intact!) are there any amateur writers out there? are you looking for a place to air your views? think the world would be a better place if we all listened to you? have a flair for writing and haven't been able to get your work out there to the public? then you should send a sample of your work to the editor, island news, Mr. Aaron Momoh at blubadd@gmail.com or call +2347030289970 to sign up to SEASIDE NEWS a lagos based free publication that's going to be revamped and relaunched in the first week of february. look forward to working with you
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anne-anu (f)
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well done all.
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