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angel_empy (f)
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in my heart i long for u yet i can't stand the presence of u
in my dreams, its u i see but i can't imagine by me
u fill my thoughts all day long even if i wont hear your song
i know it everyday that its u that keeps me awake at night but my ego wont let me come and seek the light now i can't go on for long with this fight because am gradually losing my might i can't stay ever so tight
because of you i can't think of anything else its u today u the next day and u any other day
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princesa (f)
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that is a very lovely poem that actually x-rays my acts to fall in love with a person and just can't tell the person devastating
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aslan333
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i watch her while she's sleeping, the twilight when she dreams the sound of her heart beating and the joy that it brings her look, her smile, our meeting, the silent 'i love you' such pleasure isnt fleeting, how can i not stay true and so the journey begins, two souls merge into one as we vow to still stay true, after all is said and done
the shouts, her tears, her heartache, the sadness in her eyes my lonely walk, my heartbreak, when two lovers sigh our pride, our tongues, our weakness when we're not at our best our love, our care, our meekness gets us through the mess
we laugh, we cry, we conquer, together we stand tall and when we fail or falter, we love inspite of it all friendship is a blessing, love the greatest gift there are so many lessons, it isnt always bliss but in the end we're grateful, that we never missed the chance to say "i love you" and seal it with a kiss
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BTT (m)
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SECRET ADMIRER
Solemn was the song That we sang for long When you and I Tossed ourselves high And expected that the moon Will rise by noon
But the moon went yew-yawning And left us to our silly groaning Untill we came to this side Where we can no longer hide But of course we may If we still find pleasure in going astray
Blind, is the song of the mind When we refuse to find A perfect rhythm of our kind Or when our kind Ignore the music in their mind Leave us behind and choose not to be kind
That is the song that we've solitarily sung Because we have refused to be hung To each other in the matter of the lung But I know it won't be long When my secret admirer will harken to my song
I long.
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cooljoe (m)
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Am loving this, please guys keep it up.
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lekana (m)
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well done everybody in da house
good JOB
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ACAN (m)
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DEAR MAMA
from childhood you stood by me when life was rough you always stayed turf with you i never had a reason to go hungry some times i grudged and do things just to make you get angry back then when i refused, you forced me to go to church but now i see the reasons why a man needs a couch even when you were ill, still you worried about me if am in the rain you will stand along side with me you wept when ever you see me sad you renounced your pride to take care of me and your cousin's lad 11 days when i was ill, weak and sleepless at the hospital you laid beside my bed praying for my revival out of hospital
i get scared any time you fall ill because without you i have no zeal you take life so simply, you have no time for enmity your care and love for all was never empty unconditional love you showed to your enemies a dime in your hand is worth more than rubies you are the reason i believe in angels because i have always treasure you as an angel my love for you forever will never due i will trade 2/3 of my heart to see you happy treasure you much more than diamond mothers like you are rear and never found common
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lekana (m)
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Dear Mother
Dear mama You mean so much to me Memories bring me much love You make life meaningful to me You will always be my African queen Because you are a queen of queens Each time I grumble You give me money, good message to merry around with The tender milk you gave me makes me to be man enough To mention, you gave me manners Which is the most valuable treasure It helps me when my morale is disturbed You’re marvelous and also a maneuvering tool Thanks ma'am
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justbones (m)
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is it a crime to try to rhyme all the time?
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cooljoe (m)
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Good job lekana, keep it up.
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ACAN (m)
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justbones
i don't think to rhyme all the time is a crime but an ability for one to suppress anytime it helps in squeezing out perfection in no time and polish ones skills in rhyming not like when reading for an exams and cramming so justbones we need to fill you flow something that will make us glow like your nice user name fit for a real course cause i know for real you are part of us
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lekana (m)
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@cooljoe
thanks, i look up to you guys
your encouragement will keep me writing. Thanks once more
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lekana (m)
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End of a drunkard I wonder why beer has fully changed the heart of some men That prefers to see people so dear to them In tears in need of money Running everyday like the deer With fear in their mind so as to meet up with what they want : What does it pay a man? Who sits on a chair at the bar saying cheers With his fellow peer eating pears, squander so much doe He can’t bear to give out to the needy He prefers to fall everyday Walk in a hap hazard manner, Sneered by the younger ones :: People stare at him; From the rear view of their stairs; Shaking heads because he’s moving close to six feet under the ground
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lekana (m)
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Easter is here again A day beyond decorations and vacation At relaxation centres A time beyond celebration alone but a time to think of the reason Behind his resurrection which He did for your salvation. He went through so many temptations And frustration for you and me, Likewise for nations. The sensation and emotions Of His love for us is so strong. I imagine His passion Over us "His congregation". He spent 33yrs on earth to spread The word of life to the world Likewise to create/establish the foundation and formation Of eternal life for you and me Because He has prepared a reservation For us if you can face every tribulation That comes your way here on earth. There will be no room for explanation From every generation of the world No matter your position. There will be no room For you to check the book of revelation On that day of His administration. Think about this And put an end to every procrastination And let your determination Take you to His destination.
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YOHANAN (m)
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I HAVE REALLY ENJOYED THIS THREAD PLUS ALL I HAVE READ TILL THE THOUGHT OF LEAVING ANYTHING UNREAD I AM BEGINNING TO DREAD
I`M NOT AN AUTHORITY ON RHYME BUT WHAT I`VE READ SO FAR IS SUBLIME AND YOU GUYS SOUND LIKE YOU ARE IN YOUR PRIME COS IN YOUR WRITING THERE IS NO GRIME
I WISH I COULD DO IT LIKE YOU GUYS DO AND WRITE VERSE SO FINE TOO BUT THIS I HAVE TO RUE COS WHEN I WRITE FOLKS SOMETIMES BOO
BUT I WON`T GIVE UP THE QUEST TO BE COUNTED AMONG THE BEST AND SO I`LL KEEP READING WITH ZEST, , BUT NOW I HAVE TO GET SOME REST
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opi-ororo (m)
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It'squite a long time that i joined you guys to ryhme. Sometimes you just need to go off air to tend to things that need much care like preparing for an examination that once hindered your getting admission. Though once a while i'll pop up  even if i'm not one of those on top I promise to keep in touch when i'm not busy reading in my porch. Kudos to any rhyming nairalander who keeps the thread moving further though where Colors is i still a wonder. Going through your pidgin ryhmes Acan you depict the story of a true African Moreso a typical Nigerian who is ever proud of his clan.  Just remember ''if you will you can''.
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olulu
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life is too short to be unsuccessfull, thus i plan to live life to the full, i don't want to play the fool, so i try to keep things cool, i got to make this money, not because of the honies, but to b da real man, not controlled by any woman, i can b what i want to be, and if u stand in my way, i will sting u like a bee, stay tuned, am going to d top, and i won't b a flop.
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princesa (f)
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hi guys i just got inspired
here it goes:
the young mother
could my hands hold him for one more time my baby, my heart, my beautiful one forbidden, you've come to blessly curse my world twas a careless course and you it cursely begot so a need to hate you, a need to hurt you fills my sense for all those moon i knew you had brought all ends to my young, growing and blooming tree but yet seeing you with this blue eyes, i wish we were tree you, daddy and i under the beautiful winds not young, not old but enough to have you with us free
now you must go, your new world awaits u i've got a tree and shattered heart to mend take him! take my boy!! take my life with you i will pass him oneday and he will but call me a freind my back is turned, my heart is hurt but i must go and face the worst. my baby, my heart my beautiful one
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cooljoe (m)
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@ colors I personally missed you and meexteriox.
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BTT (m)
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hi guys i just got inspired
here it goes:
the young mother
could my hands hold him for one more time my baby, my heart, my beautiful one forbidden, you've come to blessly curse my world twas a careless course and you it cursely begot so a need to hate you, a need to hurt you fills my sense for all those moon i knew you had brought all ends to my young, growing and blooming tree but yet seeing you with this blue eyes, i wish we were tree you, daddy and i under the beautiful winds not young, not old but enough to have you with us free
now you must go, your new world awaits u i've got a tree and shattered heart to mend take him! take my boy!! take my life with you i will pass him oneday and he will but call me a freind my back is turned, my heart is hurt but i must go and face the worst. my baby, my heart my beautiful one
I know. . . Don't ask me how Because baby, I know Wasn't it Emerson that said Poets can't keep secrets But if you must Princess, gladly do without regrets I bet, you kissed and told But it's good you are bold 'Young mother', I might be wrong Doesn't mean my point isn't strong But I know Princessa, that you kissed and told If not so Call me a toad Ciao
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cooljoe (m)
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SUCH IS LIFE. I knew this damsel called Faith, a pretty lady wit an absolute faith in fate, used 2 be part of her local crew, a crew that broke no rules, and thou we had it tough, we always had enough, we kept d spirit, and did no bullshit, we've all moved on wit our lives, living wit d/f vibes, gone are d days of when we play and tease, gone are d days of party and booze. I saw Faith recently at Nigeria university, she looked like a fresh kid out of elementary, she aws near perfection, i recalled Snopp's sexual seduction. I miss Faith and d local crew, wenever I go 2 a bar, 2 get a drink or two, well, such is life everything will be alright if you hold on it's a struggle everyday, you have to roll on, well, such is life,
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BTT (m)
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Where's everybody gone I op this is the same rhyme weavers' zone - Or have I jumped the gun! Let's get back to town And keep painting this thread red!
Please come.
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stillwater (f)
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I'm not a "rhymer" but I'ld love to tryAlways wanted to hide my face For no just reason than to have solace Wow, I've finally found my place where I feel I could score an ace mmmhh, this is much better than my-space 
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ACAN (m)
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rhyme zone will always be hot because we all at anytime can take a perfect shot though sometimes one has to pause to pursue other just course some of us had to go back to school study hard to get a good grade while still in school while some focuses or more important tool like working so as to be independent pocket full with doe, despite money already spent
though i might go off for a while either way i will still have my rhymes in my file every minute, everyday, i always think of something to write i wish we all can do the same by doing what is right that's keep rhyming so we can keep this forum tight as i said earlier i will not relent cause writing has always been a part of me it can never be abstracted from me but to keep me kindled so hot, but cool to handled keep it up guys for real cause it has already been seal that rhyme zone has the antidote to heal every soul as they visit our crib
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colors (f)
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hey guys, whats happening why is everyone backing out? no one writes no more, i wonder what the silence is about
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ACAN (m)
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SO MANY so many things to do so many unfufilled plan undo situations adding to the distractions sometimes we anticipate for the future but the atmosphere even our culture has denuded and deprive us like nature lots of youths hardly had good story to tell life in the city is like living in hell no physical flame but internal torment out of fear the poor dare not comment no light to keep the night warm mobility a serious task to overcome foods so expensive, no funds to justify ones purchasing power the government sit down and dictates what to offer i wonder how long the masses will still suffer and if Nigerians will one day live like brothers
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princesa (f)
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Everybody come back i miss the pack come make this thread shine as bright as a gold mine 
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ACAN (m)
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A FATAL EXPERIENCE
Jude was a good kid, finished secondary school with good grades got admitted to university hoping to be a lawyer when he graduates he one day got mixed up with a bad friend not knowing it will lead to his dead swift end he started drinking, smoking and had a scar putting on expensive cloths, rolex watch and cruising a car not aware of the implications that is attached cause been a cultist is like a cloth starched, it doesn't get off until it get watched
mama started noticing changes in his behaviour mom complains but son still lying that Jesus is still his lord and saviour initiated with men of the under world since then he never listern to any one's word stop attending lectures and staying out late mom with love still was serving him foods on a warm plate
one peaceful morning we were all in a relaxation centre sitting down watching man-u and arsenal match debating which team will go down five men with guns burst out and started shooting before any one could make a move jude was on the flour shouting blooding oozing, everyone running, i had to take cover it was when i saw people crying that i knew jude was dead and jane his lover
though the people who did this were later discovered but jude's life is gone and can not be recovered and mom sobbing thinking what she did wrong or was she singing to him a wrong song not knowing her son has been living such a life for so long we all knew, but after several warning, jude didn't yield, so we had to play along a gene, a beloved brother had missed heaven were he belong man has to be careful of who we call friends because he can only live a resourceful life when has goodl friends
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