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Jduck
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Da killa clique syk yea that is a fact got all da money and da honeys chillin in da back ridin up lookin fresh caddy on 24s what dese girls really like is da laboghini daws so surprised i see it in ya eyes you aint never seen a whiteboy lookin so fly.
Just felt like m.cen gettin kind of bord tell me what u think of my rymes ill show u the rest if you do
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reniks (f)
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Its good,and like some of your other poems,its more of a rap than a poem.It would make a good rap.
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micklplus (m)
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Nice rhymes but i believe you'll be better as a rapper than a poet nice works with all your posts. Cheers  |
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eveseh (f)
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it's cool i love rap poems
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