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Jduck
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Lookin in ya eyes is deep pools of desire
I can't drop my gaze because my hearts on fire
Chills start slowly creepin up my spine
fireworks go off when ya lips touch mine
One touch of ya skin so tender
One hug from u make my soul shiver
I love you with all my heart mind and soul
My heart is broken only you can make it whole
please tell me if you like it or not by replying
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Z4M4eva (f)
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Wow!! 'I' like it. Really. Please keep it up  . It's a really nice poem. |
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reniks (f)
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Its good.It sounds lyrical.With a good tune and more lines,you got yourself a track.
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yatou (f)
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waa i like da poem, keep on writing more for me please  [size=8pt][/size]
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hola2ng (m)
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Rythmic , soulful.
Nice read. lovely words.
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