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akinso1
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DON'T PUSH ME AWAY
Don't push me away Make room for a soul in need Allow my courage to give way To that innate desire to procreate For i'm pregnant with words And i must sing them loud for the world
Don't condem me Though my way's repugnant to thee And you want to write me off The way prudent farmers write off Their flu infected poultries Take a deep look, you might think otherwise
Don't push me away,please! Let me show you i'm worthy That you needn't have your door close But open to me yours dearly Let me show you a priceless treasure In me that'll forever endure
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U1 (m)
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You tried bro keep it up!
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echelon (m)
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I would say not a bad try  . I'm not professionally qualified to criticize
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protocol (m)
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GUY You TRIED, BUT TRY TO CREAT FIGURES OF SPEECH IN IT. THAT WILL MAKE IT MORE INTERESTING. TRY OXYMORON,SIMILE, IRONY PERSONIFICATION AND You WONT REGRET IT. GUDLUK
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