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Labans (m)
It's Just How I Feel
« on: February 05, 2008, 12:06 AM »

It's just how i feel

 
passion, instant sweat beads fill me
cupids shot me
my heart beat's racing
tempt me,try me
feels so exciting
thought of highly
it's yours entirely
i'll be
more than a lover
more than a woman
more than you'll ever i'll be

midnight grindin
heart rates climbin
you go, i go
cause we share the pillow
taste me feed me
there's still no separating
mornin massages
with new bones in your closet
i'll be
more than a lover
more than a woman
more than you'll ever i'll be
more than a lover
more than a woman
more than enough for you
more than a lover
more than a woman
gettin more undercovers
more than a woman
more than enough for you

gettin more u
more than enough for you
i don't think you're ready
i don't think you're ready for this thang for this thang
i don't think you're ready for this thang you're not ready for it ye
no, no
i don't think you're ready for this thang for this thang this thang
i don't think you're ready for this thang
constant pleasures
no scale can measure
secret treasures
keeps on getting better yeah
do you want to roll with me
we can go to foreign lands
your hand in my hand
do you want to ride with me
we can be like bonnie and clyde
me by your side 
 
colors (f)
Re: It's Just How I Feel
« #1 on: February 11, 2008, 11:06 PM »

hey labans, isnt this Aaliyah's song more than a woman.
at least be original
how can you pass up someone else's song as your poem
thats lame
Trevelyan
Howdy!!!
« #2 on: February 21, 2008, 12:19 PM »

Truly its lame colors,he employed a choice of colloquial diction as it sounds more lyrical than poetical, this accentuated your unoriginality n height of plagiarism,so b real at it wit sumtin new,out!
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