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Kposh (m)
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You are my air The sun in my day The moon in my night The spring in my step You are my everything.
You are the stars in the sky The birds in the trees The shimmer, the sparkle, the shine.
Without the light you put into my life I would be nothing A single leaf on the ground in autumn, Lost, forgotten, alone.
Before i knew you, I was nothing. Now I am everything, With you at my side, I am invincible!
Feel the same my baby, You are loved so much, I love you now and forever You are my darling, my baby, my love You are my everything I love you so much.
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stillwater (f)
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She would love it if she is the romantic type. The tone and sincerity of your voice while delivering the lines would also help matters.
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doyin13 (m)
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So much Cheesiness. . . .it triggered my allergy.
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dominique (f)
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nice poem, but if she's the unromantic, poem hatin kind like moi, she'll probly only read it when u're around.
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stillwater (f)
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Lol 
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hilli666 (m)
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Dont worry i sent the poem to her. I ll let you know if she likes it or not. if she does, then you can send it to her again.
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Kposh (m)
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common guys aint u going to ever want to be so romantic, check out stillwater nd 10x dominique for speaking your mind. actually she read it and started laughin nd the next questin i had was i didnt knw u to be so westlyf nd back street boys, but she says she lyks it
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