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mzdiverse (f)
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My Poem
« on: May 02, 2008, 06:42 PM » |
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what does anybody think about my poem? please and thanks.
Love Does love not make sense Does love make you tense Does love cost few pence WHAT IS LOVE? Does love build you up Does love feel you up could love make you whole WHAT IS THE SHAPE OF LOVE? Is love "I'm sorry" Is love "I care about you" Is love "I cherish you" Would you agree? WHAT WOULD YOU SAY? I argue I agree I disagree I burst into tears Rivers of tears Would you still call it love? Could love still be like doves? L.O.V.E L.O.V.E L.O.V.E WHAT DOES LOVE MEAN TO YOU? Would you agree? WOULD YOU
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