Cv Assessment Results

AMUSA HAKEEM OLATUNJI
I received your CV forwarded for free assessment.please note the follwing.

  1.Your personal information should always come first.CV is all about 
      you
  2. Why not choose either ,academic qualification or education as your
     heading instead of the two. Avoid tautology
3. Use active verb to describe your experience e.g
      PERFORMED ANALYTICAL EXPERIMENTS ON DRUGS.
      CONFIGURED AND INSTALLED COMPUTER SYSTEM
The format is OK but always  alter the CV to suit the requirements in a particular advertisement. GOOD LUCK


             AKINFOSILE OLUWASEYI
The layout is good ,but note the following
  1. The objective statement focused managerial position. Seyi you are
      a young graduate. Why not re-construct it to reflect an entry   
       position e.g To secure an entry position in an organisation where
     my education and skills could be applied to add value in a record time
2.  Remove hyphen in team player

3.  Reconsruct this sentence.Ready acceptance of delegated responsibilities
4. The sub heading "PERSONAL INFORMATION" shold not be at the end of your CV .Remember CV is all about you
5.Seyi did not hide his strength in the CV . Under education he states 2.1
   even in O\L results he wrote 2 distinctions ,4 credits.Always stress your strength in CV

             OKE ALIU BAMIDELE
I got your CV sent to my email for assessment.Find below my observations
   1.You included personal data in the body of your CV .please it is all about .
      Let it come first.
   2. Some words are wrongly spelt e.g safety

   3 .You have adequate experience but always use active verb to describe your experience .e.g Monitored, ' Introduced to, "Performed, etc. This shows that you have actually accomplished the task. please ignore the sub heading "Activities done included"
You are advised to type your CV under mirosoft word so that wrong spellings or sentence can be checked.The lay out is ok.please change the sub heading PROFILE to CAREER OBJECTIVE
              TO BE CONTINUED
      .

 
  Thanks for ur assessment. It was very helpful . From Seyi

I sent u my cv but i am yet to see the Assessment Result.
Hope there is no problem.
ADEBOYE OLATUNBOSUN

 Dear readers,
                 I have assessed more than twenty CVs that i promised.The fact was that , i sent the results directly to the e mail addresses of the affected people.Many of them can testify. I may not be able to go ahead for now.My plan is to release very soon 25 MISTAKES  that are common to all CV writers,

Please watch out
                                            FUNSOO

hi
i really liked ur comments on the c.vs.how can i send mine because i feel its not up to par and could do with the help.
thanks
mariam shaibu