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StephenP (m)
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Time
« on: June 17, 2008, 10:16 PM » |
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I’ve got no words strong enough to express This landslide of thoughts and emotions that carry me away from you I snatch time from the tick tocks to stop myself From seeing the locks placed on your heart But the clock refuses to move in reverse So I could rehearse the words that needed to be said Like I love you But time runs on a pace much faster than I And so I no longer stand by you And it seems futile to unlock these thick layers of misery that guard you Because you hold on to it as if there were treasures intertwined in the pain that bind you If I offered you freedom you would claim it to be disdained affection So all the same I couldn’t offer you love if it is what would save you from your afflictions All I can do is follow the current and let the waves wash me upon the shores of love’s delightful addictions Because the more I fight the sea for our love, he takes you farther away from me So no more questions and tearful goodbyes This will be unspoken Let’s just watch time fly Time never stops or rewinds But love will come twice in disguise With the long hand on you and the short hand on I And for a moment I will remember When we were In love Again
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NubianQ (f)
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Re: Time
« #1 on: June 17, 2008, 10:34 PM » |
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did u write that? good!
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tope2000 (f)
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Re: Time
« #2 on: June 17, 2008, 10:35 PM » |
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StephenP (m)
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Re: Time
« #3 on: June 17, 2008, 10:36 PM » |
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Aww. . .  thanks. did u write that? good!
Yeah I try to write poems in my spare time.
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tope2000 (f)
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Re: Time
« #4 on: June 17, 2008, 10:38 PM » |
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So no more questions and tearful goodbyes This will be unspoken Let’s just watch time fly Time never stops or rewinds But love will come twice in disguise With the long hand on you and the short hand on I And for a moment I will remember When we were In love AgainMy best part, Bravo!!!! You this boy just want me to change my mind about not dating a guy that i am older than ehn 
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NubianQ (f)
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Re: Time
« #5 on: June 17, 2008, 10:38 PM » |
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StephenP,
ur girl is lucky. poems re beautiful , all it takes are people to appreciate them
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4Her (f)
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Re: Time
« #6 on: June 17, 2008, 10:40 PM » |
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Wow!! I gotta give it to you hon, that was good!!!  But like I told you before stephen, our love can never be. , leave me. . go!! go!!! . . , .until we meet again 
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StephenP (m)
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Re: Time
« #7 on: June 17, 2008, 10:42 PM » |
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Tope, I'm happy you like it. StephenP,
your girl is lucky. poems re beautiful , all it takes are people to appreciate them
I know. . . Wow!! I gotta give it to you hon, that was good!!!  But like I told you before stephen, our love can never be. , leave me. . go!! go!!! . . , .until we meet again  LOL!! Don't worry I know it'll come back in disguise.
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Sisikill
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Re: Time
« #8 on: June 18, 2008, 02:44 AM » |
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This is so sweet and so sad.
Brilliant!!!
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Sisikill
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Re: Time
« #9 on: June 18, 2008, 02:46 AM » |
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So no more questions and tearful goodbyes This will be unspoken Let’s just watch time fly Time never stops or rewinds But love will come twice in disguise With the long hand on you and the short hand on I And for a moment I will remember When we were In love Again
My best part, Bravo!!!!
Me too.
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stillwater (f)
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Re: Time
« #10 on: June 18, 2008, 03:46 AM » |
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Bless your soul Stephen. I really mean it. Time never stops or rewinds But love will come twice in disguise
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StephenP (m)
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Re: Time
« #11 on: June 18, 2008, 09:59 PM » |
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Thanks for the love people.
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DaPhoenix (f)
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Re: Time
« #12 on: June 20, 2008, 03:34 AM » |
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Nice! I hope you copyright all your stuff because they are that good.
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StephenP (m)
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Re: Time
« #13 on: June 28, 2008, 08:04 PM » |
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@daphoenix, thanks mami. By the way, where are you? I haven't seen you in a long ass time.
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