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StephenP (m)
Time
« on: June 17, 2008, 10:16 PM »

I’ve got no words strong enough to express
This landslide of thoughts and emotions that carry me away from you
I snatch time from the tick tocks to stop myself
From seeing the locks placed on your heart
But the clock refuses to move in reverse
So I could rehearse the words that needed to be said
Like I love you
But time runs on a pace much faster than I
And so I no longer stand by you
And it seems futile to unlock these thick layers of misery that guard you
Because you hold on to it as if there were treasures intertwined in the pain that bind you
If I offered you freedom you would claim it to be disdained affection
So all the same I couldn’t offer you love if it is what would save you from your afflictions
All I can do is follow the current and let the waves wash me upon the shores of love’s delightful addictions
Because the more I fight the sea for our love, he takes you farther away from me
So no more questions and tearful goodbyes
This will be unspoken
Let’s just watch time fly
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
With the long hand on you and the short hand on I
And for a moment
I will remember
When we were
In love
Again
NubianQ (f)
Re: Time
« #1 on: June 17, 2008, 10:34 PM »

did u write that? good!
tope2000 (f)
Re: Time
« #2 on: June 17, 2008, 10:35 PM »

please don't beg me to stop crying Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry beautiful!!!!!!!
StephenP (m)
Re: Time
« #3 on: June 17, 2008, 10:36 PM »

Quote from: tope2000 on June 17, 2008, 10:35 PM
Please don't beg me to stop crying Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry beautiful!!!!!!!

Aww. . . Kiss thanks.
Quote from: NubianQ on June 17, 2008, 10:34 PM
did u write that? good!

Yeah I try to write poems in my spare time.
tope2000 (f)
Re: Time
« #4 on: June 17, 2008, 10:38 PM »

So no more questions and tearful goodbyes
This will be unspoken
Let’s just watch time fly
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
With the long hand on you and the short hand on I
And for a moment
I will remember
When we were
In love
Again


My best part, Bravo!!!!
You this boy just want me to change my mind about not dating a guy that i am older than ehn  Grin Grin
NubianQ (f)
Re: Time
« #5 on: June 17, 2008, 10:38 PM »

StephenP,

ur girl is lucky. poems re beautiful , all it takes are people to appreciate them
4Her (f)
Re: Time
« #6 on: June 17, 2008, 10:40 PM »

Wow!! I gotta give it to you hon, that was good!!!  Kiss

But like I told you before stephen, our love can never be. ,  leave me. . go!! go!!! . . ,  .until we meet again  Grin Grin
StephenP (m)
Re: Time
« #7 on: June 17, 2008, 10:42 PM »

Tope, I'm happy you like it.

Quote from: NubianQ on June 17, 2008, 10:38 PM
StephenP,

your girl is lucky. poems re beautiful , all it takes are people to appreciate them

I know. . .

Quote from: 4Her on June 17, 2008, 10:40 PM
Wow!! I gotta give it to you hon, that was good!!! Kiss

But like I told you before stephen, our love can never be. , leave me. . go!! go!!! . . , .until we meet again Grin Grin

LOL!! Don't worry I know it'll come back in disguise.
Sisikill
Re: Time
« #8 on: June 18, 2008, 02:44 AM »

This is so sweet and so sad.

Brilliant!!!
Sisikill
Re: Time
« #9 on: June 18, 2008, 02:46 AM »

Quote from: tope2000 on June 17, 2008, 10:38 PM
So no more questions and tearful goodbyes
This will be unspoken
Let’s just watch time fly
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
With the long hand on you and the short hand on I
And for a moment
I will remember
When we were
In love
Again


My best part, Bravo!!!!

Me too.
stillwater (f)
Re: Time
« #10 on: June 18, 2008, 03:46 AM »

Bless your soul Stephen. I really mean it.

Quote
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
StephenP (m)
Re: Time
« #11 on: June 18, 2008, 09:59 PM »

Thanks for the love people.
DaPhoenix (f)
Re: Time
« #12 on: June 20, 2008, 03:34 AM »

Nice! I hope you copyright all your stuff because they are that good.
StephenP (m)
Re: Time
« #13 on: June 28, 2008, 08:04 PM »

@daphoenix, thanks mami. By the way, where are you? I haven't seen you in a long ass time.
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