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StephenP (m)
Amazing
« on: July 02, 2008, 07:08 AM »

Can I call you amazing?
Does that word put into perspective the effect you have on me?
Does it capture the nurture you provide for my soul?
I breathe in everything encompassing you because you intrigue me
And if curiosity kills this cat,
Don’t be worried, I’ve got nine lives.
Death never sounded so sweet
And
Love calls upon the need for defeat.
So,
You have won, and now I’m yours to keep.
You give me endless smiles and nocturnal behaviors,
And sleepless nights when you're in my arms.
I fight the lullabies of time,
Refusing to give away these moments with you to the night,
Cause there’s no way to rewind.
And I admit you’ve captivated me with your character,
In you, I see the masterpiece of a woman,
Remarkable, wonderful, magnificent,
True.
Can I call you amazing?
It is a rare finding of a woman like you.
Who gives not to be given.
Loves not to be loved,
A woman of good nature,
A woman of good heart,
Amazing.
Mesmerize (f)
Re: Amazing
« #1 on: July 02, 2008, 09:08 PM »

Ohhhhhh Ohhh, that was. . oh gosh, it was more than Amazing

Quote from: StephenP on July 02, 2008, 07:08 AM
Can I call you amazing?.


Quote from: StephenP on July 02, 2008, 07:08 AM
And if curiosity kills this cat,
Don’t be worried, I’ve got nine lives.
Death never sounded so sweet
awww, I loved this line. . so so . .
And I guess you're a big lion aka Cougar?  Tongue


Stephen, seriously, I loved this one. . lawwwwd!!
"Thou shall not lead me into temptation"

Call me   Grin joking o
StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #2 on: July 02, 2008, 09:22 PM »

Thanks love. You sweetie are amazing.
Mesmerize (f)
Re: Amazing
« #3 on: July 02, 2008, 09:35 PM »

Quote from: StephenP on July 02, 2008, 09:22 PM
Thanks love. You sweetie are amazing.
I know, I know. . No need to deny it. . lol jk Grin Grin
StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #4 on: July 02, 2008, 09:56 PM »

LMAO! I'll let that slide.
Mesmerize (f)
Re: Amazing
« #5 on: July 03, 2008, 02:24 AM »

Quote from: StephenP on July 02, 2008, 09:56 PM
LMAO! I'll let that slide.
If you dnt let it slide nko?
We both know the true jare. .  Tongue
onyinye2 (f)
Re: Amazing
« #6 on: July 03, 2008, 02:52 AM »

that was really romantic Stephen. i was moved.
StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #7 on: July 03, 2008, 03:48 AM »

Quote from: onyinye2 on July 03, 2008, 02:52 AM
that was really romantic Stephen. i was moved.

Thanks Miss.
syren
Re: Amazing
« #8 on: July 05, 2008, 09:03 PM »

OMG!! That was NICE. I like.  Grin  Please, could we have some more Stephen  Grin
onyinye2 (f)
Re: Amazing
« #9 on: July 05, 2008, 10:10 PM »

Quote from: syren on July 05, 2008, 09:03 PM
OMG!! That was NICE. I like.  Grin  Please, could we have some more Stephen  Grin

his are okay but mine are even better Wink
syren
Re: Amazing
« #10 on: July 05, 2008, 10:20 PM »

mmmhhh   now i'm curious  Cool
StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #11 on: July 05, 2008, 10:34 PM »

Quote from: syren on July 05, 2008, 09:03 PM
OMG!! That was NICE. I like.  Grin  Please, could we have some more Stephen  Grin

Thanks.

If you want to read more, check out my previous poems

http://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-145952.0.html

http://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-143258.0.html

http://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-144486.0.html

I don't know when I'll put new ones up but trust me I'm writing.
tope2000 (f)
Re: Amazing
« #12 on: July 06, 2008, 03:29 PM »

Can I call you amazing? Anyday babe

Does that word put into perspective the effect you have on me?Hell yes

Does it capture the nurture you provide for my soul?F**k yes Grin

I breathe in everything encompassing you because you intrigue me
And if curiosity kills this cat, Kiss KissCheesy

Don’t be worried, I’ve got nine lives.i aint, i have 9 too

Love calls upon the need for defeat.yes it does  Cry

You have won, and now I’m yours to keep. Cry Kiss, did u hear that memse??

You give me endless smiles and nocturnal behaviors,aww thanks, so do you  Grin Grin

And sleepless nights when you're in my arms. Cry Kiss

Refusing to give away these moments with you to the night,
Cause there’s no way to rewind.
And I admit you’ve captivated me with your character,
In you, I see the masterpiece of a woman,
Remarkable, wonderful, magnificent,
True.Very true baby  Grin Wink

Can I call you amazing?Any effing time again

It is a rare finding of a woman like you.don't i know it  Grin Grin

Who gives not to be given.
Loves not to be loved,
A woman of good nature,
A woman of good heart,
Amazing. Kiss Kiss Cry Kiss


Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
onyinye2 (f)
Re: Amazing
« #13 on: July 06, 2008, 04:07 PM »

@tope2000

TRULY HILARIOUS!!! yeah this was a nice poem. but i like mines better Wink no offense intended Stephen Wink
StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #14 on: July 06, 2008, 09:34 PM »

Tope, LOL thanks. Your replies were funny but nice.
stillwater (f)
Re: Amazing
« #15 on: July 06, 2008, 09:51 PM »

@tope
That was hilarious.

@ stephen
I prefer your other poems. This particular one lacked something, I just can't place it yet Smiley

tope2000 (f)
Re: Amazing
« #16 on: July 06, 2008, 09:56 PM »

Quote from: onyinye2 on July 06, 2008, 04:07 PM
@tope2000

TRULY HILARIOUS!!! yeah this was a nice poem. but i like mines better Wink no offense intended Stephen Wink

funny me2 Grin Grin Grin

Quote from: StephenP on July 06, 2008, 09:34 PM
Tope, LOL thanks. Your replies were funny but nice.

u welcome darl Grin, but seriously are u just 21 i pray not Grin

Quote from: stillwater on July 06, 2008, 09:51 PM
@tope
That was hilarious.


 Grin Grin Grin me n steve as got something something going but shhhhhh don't tell memse Wink



StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #17 on: July 06, 2008, 10:01 PM »

Quote from: tope2000 on July 06, 2008, 09:56 PM

u welcome darl Grin, but seriously are u just 21 i pray not Grin


I'm turning 22 in 2 months.

Quote from: stillwater on July 06, 2008, 09:51 PM

@ stephen
I prefer your other poems. This particular one lacked something, I just can't place it yet Smiley

You couldn't find deep words?
stillwater (f)
Re: Amazing
« #18 on: July 06, 2008, 10:05 PM »

Right on point. I couldn't find anything that took me aback. Smiley
tope2000 (f)
Re: Amazing
« #19 on: July 06, 2008, 10:10 PM »

Quote from: StephenP on July 06, 2008, 10:01 PM
I'm turning 22 in 2 months.

You couldn't find deep words?

ok, i have found the solution. i will change my date of birth, that should do the trick Wink Grin
StephenP (m)
Re: Amazing
« #20 on: July 06, 2008, 10:18 PM »

Quote from: stillwater on July 06, 2008, 10:05 PM
Right on point. I couldn't find anything that took me aback. Smiley

I'll try to work on that on my next poem.

Quote from: tope2000 on July 06, 2008, 10:10 PM
ok, i have found the solution. i will change my date of birth, that should do the trick Wink Grin

LMAO!!
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