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CaringSoul (f)
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u say u turned it off to hide your heart upon a shelf scared of what it might cost to take it down for somebody else cause loving her u lost to much of your self can't u see that she's not me at all.
and i need u to know that u can fall into me that my arms are wide open and always will be right here waiting staying strong come and fall into me don't compare her to me believe in love.
i'll follow any road anywhere to get to you i'll open my soul if thats what u need me to do now honey its all your move all u got to do is believe in love and us i need u to know that u can fall into me that my arms are wide open and always will be right here waiting staying strong come and fall into me.
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Lovelace
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This reads like a love song especially liked this part of it, i'll follow any road anywhere to get to you i'll open my soul if thats what u need me to. Also thought it to be raw,vivid and unedited feelings straight from the heart.
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CaringSoul (f)
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Lovelace : Thanks, I'm glad u enjoy my poems. Have a blessed and blissful day.
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stillwater (f)
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I've to agree with lovelace. It sounds like a song. All the same it's interesting. I like poems/songs broken into bits and not jampacked, making it look like an essay. It's easier to understand when it's written this way. u say u turned it off to hide your heart upon a shelf
scared of what it might cost to take it down for somebody else
cause loving her, u lost too much of your self
can't u see that she's not me at all.
and i need u to know that u can fall into me
that my arms are wide open and always will be right here waiting, staying strong.
come and fall into me
don't compare her to me
believe in love.
i'll follow any road, anywhere to get to you
i'll open my soul if thats what u need me to do
now honey its all your move
all u got to do is believe in love and us
i need u to know that u can fall into me
that my arms are wide open and always will be right here waiting, staying strong
come and fall into me. |
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Lovelace
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CaringSoul you write with great depth,so i do enjoy reading!
Like i said earlier it's vivid and unedited, but Stillwater's done a good job to make for an easier read.
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CaringSoul (f)
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Thank u both for ur replies. Great job stillwater.It seems much easier the way u have written it.
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onyinye2 (f)
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ohh how romantic!! i love it!! man your poem brings major competition to mines  |
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StephenP (m)
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I'm sorry isn't this Emerson Drive's Fall Into Me . . . just the feminine version of it? Try to be original next time and quit plagiarizing.
The lyrics to the real "Fall Into Me"
You say you've turned it off
Hid your heart up on a shelf
Scared of what it might cost
To take it off for someone else
'Cause lovin him you lost
Too much of yourself
Baby can't you see that he's not me and,
I need you to know you can fall into me
That my arms are wide open
And will always be
Right here waiting, staying strong
Come and fall into me
I'll follow any road anywhere to get to you
I'll open up my soul
If that's what you need me to do
But now baby it's your move
All you've got to do
Is believe in love, just believe in us now,
I need you to know you can fall into me
That my arms are wide open
And will always be
Right here waiting, staying strong
Come and fall into me
Just believe in love
Just believe in us
Baby,
I need you to know you can fall into me
That my arms are wide open
And will always be
Right here waiting, staying strong
Come and fall into me
Come and fall into me
Baby fall into me
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Lovelace
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Okay i thought it sounded like a song,nowi know it is one.
CaringSoul there's no harm in acknowledging the artist or whosoever's work you want to use next time.
Don't let that stop you from writing though,you can do it and i'D still be on the lookout for more from you.
Stephen P,it is Emerson drive's 'fall into me' from their self titled album,good job of noticing. Great lyrics though.
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CaringSoul (f)
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Lovelace: thank you are u from ghana also, maybe we can meet and be friends
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StephenP (m)
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Okay i thought it sounded like a song,nowi know it is one.
CaringSoul there's no harm in acknowledging the artist or whosoever's work you want to use next time.
Don't let that stop you from writing though,you can do it and i'D still be on the lookout for more from you.
Stephen P,it is Emerson drive's 'fall into me' from their self titled album,good job of noticing. Great lyrics though.
Frankly, I'm disappointed in her. |
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CH3COO (m)
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caringsoul you're such a lamer. how dare you assume credit for a work that's not even yours.
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CaringSoul (f)
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StephenP: CH3COO : kiss my ghana ass ok  |
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StephenP (m)
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StephenP: CH3COO : kiss my ghana ass ok @StealingSoul, Just write your own fucking poems and stop being bitchy cause I busted you out. |
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micklplus (m)
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StephenP: CH3COO : kiss my ghana ass ok Caring soul, I think u are messing up now ! CaringSoul there's no harm in acknowledging the artist or whosoever's work you want to use next time.
Don't let that stop you from writing though,you can do it and i'D still be on the lookout for more from you.
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Lovelace had ur back here but, wetin dey do u??? Try to be original next time and don't take glory for whats not yours. Best of luck. Cheers |
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Lovelace
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Back in a short space of time,and my oh my.
Everyone,good looking out.
CaringSoul,no need to be on the offensive as this forum here's all about love. You know the next thing to do right? Yes,apologize.
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CaringSoul (f)
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my boyfriend gave me this account i don't like the screen name how can i change it. will the girl know we stole the account.
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