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StephenP (m)
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I take it in Like fresh air and a good cigar Like sit back reflect cause every now and then its good to see life from a different perspective I take it in like wet sand between my toes Like watching the sunset and rise and marvel on the ingenuity of God to create such a divine definition of love The world I take it in The pain Like whips of a cane to the soul Like war in the eyes of a child Like blood on the hands of a widow Like Lago’s words to Othello Beware of the green eyed monster which doth mock the meat it feeds on Losing their life because the other can’t get none Sometimes this world doesn’t feel right but who am I to change its direction I take it in Like a fatal injection Deadly serum of deception Every nation at a point has been lied to Truth has been sacrificed for the so-called common good I take it in though Inhale the spokes of burning buildings and marshmallow on a stick While I’m roasting marshmallows, bodies roast across the world Knowledge is power…but sometimes I close my ears and choose ignorance Can’t have that marshmallow burn I take it in Like your warmth on my skin Like love is everything I take love in Like holding hands all day, talk all night, Start small fights just to end the night freaky right Like love songs, and sonnets Like me, you and a bottle of wine, Chocolate, strawberries and no concept of time Like those days you were mine I take it in
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LadyT (f)
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Why you gotta write so well 
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StephenP (m)
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Why you gotta write so well  Aww. . . sweetie. Thanks.
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onyinye2 (f)
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I loved the poem. Especially the last sonnet that focused on love. It was beautiful.
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Joseph6 (m)
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well its good its long and i read about the first and second line then three others in between and i'll say thumbs up but only if its original because u know it wont cost a dime 2 copy and paste someone else's work.i'm a literature guy i love art. . . . . . i am art and this particular piece shldnt be on nl alone u shld do somethin about that. KUDOS
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onyinye2 (f)
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But just don't think you can out do you me when it comes to love "The Confessions of a Love Slave" was just the tip of the ice berg of what i have in store. 
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StephenP (m)
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I loved the poem. Especially the last sonnet that focused on love. It was beautiful.
Why thank you. well its good its long and i read about the first and second line then three others in between and i'll say thumbs up but only if its original because u know it wont cost a dime 2 copy and paste someone else's work.i'm a literature guy i love art. . . . . . i am art and this particular piece shldnt be on nl alone u shld do somethin about that. KUDOS
Thank you? By the way, if you doubt this poem's originality, you can check out my other poems on Nairaland. But just don't think you can out do you me when it comes to love "The Confessions of a Love Slave" was just the tip of the ice berg of what i have in store.  You really want to have a verbal duel with me.
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onyinye2 (f)
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You really want to have a verbal duel with me.
Are you up for the challenge?
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Joseph6 (m)
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onyinye abeg cool blood small
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StephenP (m)
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Are you up for the challenge?
I love challenges but I think I will pass.
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onyinye2 (f)
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I love challenges but I think I will pass.
Oh, you will be back. Trust me.
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StephenP (m)
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LOL you think so?
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StephenP (m)
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We'll see about it.
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onyinye2 (f)
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Indeed we shall.
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LadyT (f)
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What is this Oyinye and Stephen P loff thread? 
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DaPhoenix (f)
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Stephen, I love your poem. I feel the emotion in it, it's crazy. I know what else I take in. . . it rhymes with brick and I bet yours is 10 inches 
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StephenP (m)
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ROFL!! She is back.
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DaPhoenix (f)
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ROFL!! She is back.
You've got that right.
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LadyT (f)
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I just knew someone would come up with the pee pee joke ROTFLAMO 
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DaPhoenix (f)
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I just knew someone would come up with the pee pee joke ROTFLAMO   I couldn't hold myself
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StephenP (m)
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 I couldn't hold myself LOL
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LadyT (f)
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I'm sure you can hold him though. 
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