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StephenP (m)
I Take It In
« on: July 29, 2008, 09:22 PM »

I take it in
Like fresh air and a good cigar
Like sit back reflect cause every now and then its good to see life from a different perspective
I take it in like wet sand between my toes
Like watching the sunset and rise and marvel on the ingenuity of God to create such a divine definition of love
The world
I take it in
The pain
Like whips of a cane to the soul
Like war in the eyes of a child
Like blood on the hands of a widow
Like Lago’s words to Othello
Beware of the green eyed monster which doth mock the meat it feeds on
Losing their life because the other can’t get none
Sometimes this world doesn’t feel right but who am I to change its direction
I take it in
Like a fatal injection
Deadly serum of deception
Every nation at a point has been lied to
Truth has been sacrificed for the so-called common good
I take it in though
Inhale the spokes of burning buildings and marshmallow on a stick
While I’m roasting marshmallows, bodies roast across the world
Knowledge is power…but sometimes I close my ears and choose ignorance
Can’t have that marshmallow burn
I take it in
Like your warmth on my skin
Like love is everything
I take love in
Like holding hands all day, talk all night,
Start small fights just to end the night freaky right
Like love songs, and sonnets
Like me, you and a bottle of wine,
Chocolate, strawberries and no concept of time
Like those days you were mine
I take it in
LadyT (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #1 on: July 29, 2008, 11:21 PM »

Why you gotta write so well Angry

Kiss
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #2 on: July 30, 2008, 01:33 AM »

Quote from: LadyT on July 29, 2008, 11:21 PM
Why you gotta write so well Angry

 Kiss

Aww. . . sweetie. Thanks.
onyinye2 (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #3 on: July 30, 2008, 01:34 AM »

I loved the poem. Especially the last sonnet that focused on love. It was beautiful.
Joseph6 (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #4 on: July 30, 2008, 01:40 AM »

well its good its long and i read about the first and second line then three others in between and i'll say thumbs up but only if its original because u know it wont cost a dime 2 copy and paste someone else's work.i'm a literature guy i love art. . . . . .  i am art and this particular piece shldnt be on nl alone u shld do somethin about that. KUDOS
onyinye2 (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #5 on: July 30, 2008, 01:41 AM »

But just don't think you can out do you me when it comes to love Wink "The Confessions of a Love Slave" was just the tip of the ice berg of what i have in store. Wink
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #6 on: July 30, 2008, 01:51 AM »

Quote from: onyinye2 on July 30, 2008, 01:34 AM
I loved the poem. Especially the last sonnet that focused on love. It was beautiful.

Why thank you.

Quote from: Joseph6 on July 30, 2008, 01:40 AM
well its good its long and i read about the first and second line then three others in between and i'll say thumbs up but only if its original because u know it wont cost a dime 2 copy and paste someone else's work.i'm a literature guy i love art. . . . . .  i am art and this particular piece shldnt be on nl alone u shld do somethin about that. KUDOS

Thank you? By the way, if you doubt this poem's originality, you can check out my other poems on Nairaland.

Quote from: onyinye2 on July 30, 2008, 01:41 AM
But just don't think you can out do you me when it comes to love Wink "The Confessions of a Love Slave" was just the tip of the ice berg of what i have in store. Wink

You really want to have a verbal duel with me.
onyinye2 (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #7 on: July 30, 2008, 01:53 AM »

Quote from: StephenP on July 30, 2008, 01:51 AM
You really want to have a verbal duel with me.
Are you up for the challenge?
Joseph6 (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #8 on: July 30, 2008, 01:56 AM »

onyinye abeg cool blood small
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #9 on: July 30, 2008, 02:02 AM »

Quote from: onyinye2 on July 30, 2008, 01:53 AM
Are you up for the challenge?

I love challenges but I think I will pass.
onyinye2 (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #10 on: July 30, 2008, 02:02 AM »

Quote from: StephenP on July 30, 2008, 02:02 AM
I love challenges but I think I will pass.
Oh, you will be back. Trust me.
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #11 on: July 30, 2008, 02:21 AM »

LOL you think so?
onyinye2 (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #12 on: July 30, 2008, 03:01 AM »

I know so.
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #13 on: July 30, 2008, 03:08 AM »

We'll see about it.
onyinye2 (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #14 on: July 30, 2008, 03:32 AM »

Indeed we shall.
LadyT (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #15 on: July 31, 2008, 08:36 PM »

What is this Oyinye and Stephen P loff thread?  Angry
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #16 on: July 31, 2008, 08:53 PM »

lol
DaPhoenix (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #17 on: July 31, 2008, 08:59 PM »

Stephen, I love your poem. I feel the emotion in it, it's crazy. I know what else I take in. . . it rhymes with brick and I bet yours is 10 inches  Grin
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #18 on: July 31, 2008, 09:02 PM »

ROFL!! She is back.
DaPhoenix (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #19 on: July 31, 2008, 09:05 PM »

Quote from: StephenP on July 31, 2008, 09:02 PM
ROFL!! She is back.

You've got that right.
LadyT (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #20 on: July 31, 2008, 09:09 PM »

 I just knew someone would come up with the pee pee joke

ROTFLAMO  Wink
DaPhoenix (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #21 on: July 31, 2008, 09:15 PM »

Quote from: LadyT on July 31, 2008, 09:09 PM
I just knew someone would come up with the pee pee joke

ROTFLAMO  Wink

 Grin I couldn't hold myself
StephenP (m)
Re: I Take It In
« #22 on: July 31, 2008, 09:36 PM »

Quote from: DaPhoenix on July 31, 2008, 09:15 PM
Grin I couldn't hold myself

LOL
LadyT (f)
Re: I Take It In
« #23 on: July 31, 2008, 09:37 PM »

I'm sure you can hold him though.

Lips sealed
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