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Gamine (f)
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They were long and beautiful, i didnt feel envious
i was in awe.
It was dark and i could barely see his face but
i was enthralled.
He spoke and even though i had turned away from him,
i was taken.
i looked at him and saw the most beautiful thing,
i was falling.
Suddenly, i heard the bus conductor say "Mobil!"
i was saddened.
Goodbye, he said and i could only sigh
i was going to miss him.
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mekk (m)
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hmmmm , its kool but not that kool.  nice try though. |
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Gamine (f)
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its not meant to be "ok" anyways  |
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janami (f)
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u would miss d conductor eh  ? |
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Gamine (f)
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LOL no be conductor ooh!!!! |
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spikedcylinder (f)
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The driver?
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Gamine (f)
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Na only them two wey dey for hinsyd bus  ??  |
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Orikinla (m)
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You should have collected his number.
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Caliente (m)
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You for follow am go home.
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Gamine (f)
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LOL, follow indeed!
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Caliente (m)
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Yes na, instead of missing the action here on nairaland you for follow am home and get deeply satisfied
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Caliente (m)
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The elf knows it's the truth 
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stannesi (m)
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4 literature that is was Crap. . Crap. . . try to post this somewhere else, not here, i bet it will soon be moved. . See hw this girl just dey trip 4 inside bus. . . na wa ooooothat is weird. . . d guy get time dey scope chick 4 bus upon that a dark bus. . na mumu. . u sef dey trip. . thank God u did not listen. . . u shuld hav missed ur stop!!  I sure say all dose times wey i dey bus . . enough girls go don trip 4 me tire. . i would never notice. . because i'm always think of hw to to get d hell out. . . and collectin ma f**king change. . . |
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Nella (f)
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Geez, give her a break. Those kind of writing are normally written in like two seconds, no two thoughts, just ordinary drabble, I'm sure it wasn't meant to be a big deal. @ Gamine y u no jack am follow yourself? |
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stannesi (m)
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lost
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Gamine (f)
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@Nella, lol, leave the guy make him bust hin head over this 0.0001 sec drabble. Omo, i no fit jack the guy ooh, my weight no fit carry.  @Stannesi, may you just carry go e don do between, thanks for Danfo Love |
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mosun_ade (f)
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you would have opened your pussy for him to have a look before you got down from the bus - ,
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stannesi (m)
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@Gam & @Nel r u sayin that is just a fan fiction. . or what??? @mosun_ade I go like jam ur type 4 bus, |
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Gamine (f)
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@Mosun Just cause you would, dosnt mean everyother pesin would. @Stan, |
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stannesi (m)
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@Gam |
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stannesi (m)
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@Gam ,,,,,, ♫hehehe♪e (ө)(ө) \ / () \ _ \ '--' / _ { '-`"""`-' } `"/ \"` \ / _/ /\ \_ { / \ } `"` `"` hhmmmmmmmmmmmm, |
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spikedcylinder (f)
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4 literature that is was Crap. . Crap. . . try to post this somewhere else, not here, i bet it will soon be moved. . See hw this girl just dey trip 4 inside bus. . . na wa ooooothat is weird. . . d guy get time dey scope chick 4 bus upon that a dark bus. . na mumu. . u sef dey trip. . thank God u did not listen. . . u shuld hav missed your stop!! I sure say all dose times wey i dey bus . . enough girls go don trip 4 me tire. . i would never notice. . because i'm always think of hw to to get d hell out. . . and collectin ma f**king change. . . Oh shut up will you? |
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Seun (m)
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At least your poem has meaning. Good job jare.
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stannesi (m)
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@spikedcylinder awwwww. . . . . thanx sweetie . . . . i will because that is d best thin i read today, ( but its seems kind of strange. . . . why criticize ma own view of d poem. . . wats urs???) Confession: honestly i was kind of jealous, i never meet an admirer on da bus. . .  @Seun awwwww. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . sweet dude. . . . awwwww. . . . . . . |
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Gamine (f)
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Jealousy Ever so Green |
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StephenP (m)
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I like it. Simple, straightforward, all in the moment and best of all, realistic. I can imagine it happening to me. . . if it hasn't already happened before |
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Gamine (f)
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Oh i see I had another, on the bus moment today though but it was shattered by my skirt getting stuck on the door as i tried to get down |
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