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Wordsmith
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@ eldee, we already dropped our 2nd rounds immediately after the ones you pasted. abi? @ Pataki, lol, long time it's been, how are ya?  |
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Shaz (f)
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Shit! I was gonn drop my vote now after thoroughly reading. . next round, then
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Hannibal
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@ Eldee, Where are the gradings. . . . People can't just say the winner is wordsmith. . . . .I want to see how he won. Delivery, wordplay, cheekiness, subject matter and the suspension of disbelief. Get all the judges back to mark how wordsmith won the 1st round and i need to see POINTS not just unanonymous decisions.  When i see that, i would smoke this bandwidth with more rounds. |
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Wordsmith
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. . . and not forgetting the 2nd verse we both spat after the callout and the 1st verse.
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eldee (m)
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@Wordsmith
I'm sorry but you'll both have to post verses now
You can copy and paste if you want but you'll have to post first
And remember to wait for directives after dropping your verse
@ALL VOTERS
As from now you'll have to analyze your votes
This is to minimize allegations from any parties
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Pataki
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@ Wordsmith, Yo' bruva is frying up his ass in here, but it ain't no shit/ I ma keep repzenting, filling my game tight just not to slit/ The age long composition of destroying all what Pataki is/ Been ere Been now, all that matterz is I still keep my diss/ In fact all I am trying to say is, I am doing well. |
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Wordsmith
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@ Pataki, not bad bro, not bad. @ eldee, Hola, umm, don't get u. Do we post new verses or copy n paste the old one? Either ways, will still drop one this night? |
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Wordsmith
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@ Hannibal,
THE EULOGY. . .
See, i stays grounded like roadblocks/
on toppa that, the show stops when i blow hot/
metas? Lol, only time u +Worked at a Punch+ is when u give blowjobs/
why rush for a bloodbath when ur guts i'm spilling it/
your rhymes are like coma patients, son, i ain't feeling it/
flip sick verses and watch the crowd cheer [chair] like tables/
trick, i'm the truth, u's nothing but a made up fable/
The Warcraft? Yeah, i know my role and your's is on em poles/
you see ho, u swing low, then finally dip low on a dildo/
similar to prank calls, i called your bluff off/
cremated u to sawdust//get used to a fuse when u get plugged off/
trick, this ain't some english-speaking contest/
more like a d!€k drillin, in ur chick seed spillin slugfest/
get a cue like an 8 ball, why resist when u done deceased?/
last but not the least. . . u're the last and much the least/
this fcuk's dismissedthat's what u get when u war wit 'Smith/
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Hannibal
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@ Wordsmith
Hannisis Chapter One. . . .
let me start this off by completely pulling off WordSmith's gruff
This ain't no bluff so stop jerking off about 1st round because enough is enough.
The satanic lyrics i spew, float with the buoyancy of a boat
With the potency of a black mamba's bite on your throat.
I am Nairaland's undisputed 1st class spitter
Painting graphic pictures with words for intelligent listeners.
Wordsmith's begging for a time-out because his life is being timed out
The side effects of battling Hannibal would make u gassed out.
Symptoms include pinkeye, nausea and drymouth
The antidote is concentrating on what ma poetry is really about.
This ain't no contest because i am getting your ass gashed
Practisin subliminal lyrical witchcraft on your ranting bitch-ass
Fucking with me, you'll catch a free plane trip to the morgue
Leave your fibres shunted like a malfunctioning cyborg.
Wordsmith, your rhymes are average, u need nordic track to boost your lyrical leverage
Vintage rhythmic high intensity of a Taliban bomb carnage makes me a fucking savage.
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eldee (m)
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WORDSMITH
THE EULOGY. . .
See, i stays grounded like roadblocks/
on toppa that, the show stops when i blow hot/
metas? Lol, only time u +Worked at a Punch+ is when u give blowjobs/
why rush for a bloodbath when your guts i'm spilling it/
your rhymes are like coma patients, son, i ain't feeling it/
flip sick verses and watch the crowd cheer [chair] like tables/
trick, i'm the truth, u's nothing but a made up fable/
The Warcraft? Yeah, i know my role and your's is on em poles/
you see ho, u swing low, then finally dip low on a dildo/
similar to prank calls, i called your bluff off/
cremated u to sawdust//get used to a fuse when u get plugged off/
trick, this ain't some english-speaking contest/
more like a d!€k drillin, in your chick seed spillin slugfest/
get a cue like an 8 ball, why resist when u done deceased?/
last but not the least. . . u're the last and much the least/
this fcuk's dismissedthat's what u get when u war wit 'Smith/
HANNIBAL
Hannisis Chapter One. . . .
let me start this off by completely pulling off WordSmith's gruff
This ain't no bluff so stop jerking off about 1st round because enough is enough.
The satanic lyrics i spew, float with the buoyancy of a boat
With the potency of a black mamba's bite on your throat.
I am Nairaland's undisputed 1st class spitter
Painting graphic pictures with words for intelligent listeners.
Wordsmith's begging for a time-out because his life is being timed out
The side effects of battling Hannibal would make u gassed out.
Symptoms include pinkeye, nausea and drymouth
The antidote is concentrating on what ma poetry is really about.
This ain't no contest because i am getting your ass gashed
Practisin subliminal lyrical witchcraft on your ranting bitch-ass
Fucking with me, you'll catch a free plane trip to the morgue
Leave your fibres shunted like a malfunctioning cyborg.
Wordsmith, your rhymes are average, u need nordic track to boost your lyrical leverage
Vintage rhythmic high intensity of a Taliban bomb carnage makes me a fucking savage.
These are the verses from both netcees
-All votes should be based on these lines
-You must analyze your vote for it to be counted
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Baxilexi
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now that de shit, this rappers are hotter than magma.
more power to you guys
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Shaz (f)
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WORDSMITHTHE EULOGY. . . See, i stays grounded like roadblocks/ on toppa that, the show stops when i blow hot/ Nice metaphors and rhymesmetas? Lol, only time u +Worked at a Punch+ is when u give blowjobs/ Nice punchline therewhy rush for a bloodbath when your guts i'm spilling it/ your rhymes are like coma patients, son, i ain't feeling it/ Meta-punchflip sick verses and watch the crowd cheer [chair] like tables/ trick, i'm the truth, u's nothing but a made up fable/ 'cheer like tables' was dope. . i wasnt feeling the second line, it could have hit harderThe Warcraft? Yeah, i know my role and your's is on em poles/ you see ho, u swing low, then finally dip low on a dildo/ Just a filler bar, nothing WOW!ingsimilar to prank calls, i called your bluff off/ cremated u to sawdust//get used to a fuse when u get plugged off/ Dope metaphorstrick, this ain't some english-speaking contest/ more like a d!€k drillin, in your chick seed spillin slugfest/ Filler bar to meget a cue like an 8 ball, why resist when u done deceased?/ last but not the least. . . u're the last and much the least/ Second line Could have hit harderthis fcuk's dismissedthat's what u get when u war wit 'Smith/ HANNIBALHannisis Chapter One. . . . let me start this off by completely pulling off WordSmith's gruff This ain't no bluff so stop jerking off about 1st round because enough is enough. If flipping was allowed, I'd give you one for that. It's a OKAY opener - nuthin muchThe satanic lyrics i spew, float with the buoyancy of a boat With the potency of a black mamba's bite on your throat. Inferences are tight on the metaphors - but this is self-glamourization, it's not necessary in a battleI am Nairaland's undisputed 1st class spitter Painting graphic pictures with words for intelligent listeners. Same with aboveWordsmith's begging for a time-out because his life is being timed out The side effects of battling Hannibal would make u gassed out. Ditto above. No punches, just metaphorsSymptoms include pinkeye, nausea and drymouth The antidote is concentrating on what ma poetry is really about. Damn - again? No punchlines, dood.This ain't no contest because i am getting your ass gashed Practisin subliminal lyrical witchcraft on your ranting bitch-ass I'm tired of saying this - Where's ya punch?Fucking with me, you'll catch a free plane trip to the morgue Leave your fibres shunted like a malfunctioning cyborg. Coulda hit harder if you worded this bar properlyWordsmith, your rhymes are average, u need nordic track to boost your lyrical leverage Vintage rhythmic high intensity of a Taliban bomb carnage makes me a fucking savage. DAng! This closer was nice, I wish the other bars were as tight.
My verdict
Punchlines - Wordsmith
Metaphors - Both
Wordplays - None
Rhymes - Wordsmith by a bit
Vocabs - Hannibal
Multies - None
Creativity - Wordsmith
My final vote = Wordsmith
To be honest, this is far below ma expectation from y'all vets. You guys just focused on metaphors and some few punchlines. Where are the multis, the wordplays, the nameplays, in-rhymes, the complex punches? Where are the main metaphorical inferences? What happened to the cracking openers and smashing closers? Left for me, I'd say y'all have a third round.
Peace!
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chiogo (f)
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Ugghhh, making long posts is tedious with my phone. But I'll try my best breaking it down.
Hannibal
let me start this off by completely pulling off WordSmith's gruff
This ain't no bluff so stop jerking off about 1st round because enough is enough.
Umm, ok, I guess.
The satanic lyrics i spew, float with the buoyancy of a boat
With the potency of a black mamba's bite on your throat.
This is ill
I am Nairaland's undisputed 1st class spitter
Painting graphic pictures with words for intelligent listeners.
Aiight
Wordsmith's begging for a time-out because his life is being timed out
The side effects of battling Hannibal would make u gassed out.
Nice metaphor in the first line. . Second line. .uhh, just ok
Symptoms include pinkeye, nausea and drymouth
The antidote is concentrating on what ma poetry is really about.
Haha, ok this ain't biology class
This ain't no contest because i am getting your ass gashed
Practisin subliminal lyrical witchcraft on your ranting bitch-ass
Ok. .No punches though
Fucking with me, you'll catch a free plane trip to the morgue
Leave your fibres shunted like a malfunctioning cyborg.
Ohh, scary but that's not a category in rap battles or is it??
Wordsmith, your rhymes are average, u need nordic track to boost your lyrical leverage
Vintage rhythmic high intensity of a Taliban bomb carnage makes me a fucking savage.
man, all these big words are killin me. . Nice punch lines though
WORDSMITH
THE EULOGY. . .
See, i stays grounded like roadblocks/
on toppa that, the show stops when i blow hot/
metas? Lol, only time u +Worked at a Punch+ is
when u give blowjobs/
Nice. .
why rush for a bloodbath when your guts i'm spilling it/
your rhymes are like coma patients, son, i ain't feeling it/
nice punches in the first line . . second line. .ok
flip sick verses and watch the crowd cheer [chair] like tables/
trick, i'm the truth, u's nothing but a made up fable/
Umm, don't really get the wordsplay but I know there's one, somebody??
The Warcraft? Yeah, i know my role and your's is on em poles/
you see ho, u swing low, then finally dip low on a dildo/
Haha, funny
similar to prank calls, i called your bluff off/
cremated u to sawdust//get used to a fuse when u get plugged off/
Tight
trick, this ain't some english-speaking contest/
more like a d!€k drillin, in your chick seed spillin slugfest/
Well, you're right on the 1st line, don't know bout the 2nd line
get a cue like an 8 ball, why resist when u done deceased?/
last but not the least. . . u're the last and much the least/
this fcuk's dismissed that's what u get when u war wit 'Smith/
Don't get the 1st line, 2nd line . . .tight and funny, nice ending but no punches
Metaphor - Hannibal
Punches - Wordsmith
Wordsplay - Wordsmith
Humor - Wordsmith
Rhymes - both
Vocabs - Hannibal
Consistency(aka being on point) - Wordsmith
There ain't no delivery, it's internet, people. L0lz
Ok, the winner is Wordsmith.
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edosioo (f)
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lol a chiogo signature, shaz this thread shouldnt enjoy top slot anymore , the battle is over yo, and wordsmith won !.
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A-40 (m)
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Hmm you guys did very good didnt know we had so many peeps that could Bust-A-Rhyme here least of all Hanibal
Delivery - Wordsmith killed it
Sting - Wordsmith again
Metaphor- Hannibal and Wordsmith are tied
Vocab - Hannibal dropped bombs
Rhymes - Wordsmith flipped it
So by a margin slimmer than Nicole Ritchie i would award this to Wordsmith
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kaydee (m)
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WORDSMITH
flip sick verses and watch the crowd cheer [chair] like tables/
trick, i'm the truth, u's nothing but a made up fable/
'cheer like tables' was dope. . i wasnt feeling the second line, it could have hit harder
Woah! Shaz,i think the second line hits harder than the 1st,,i'm not feeling the wordplay because i don't understand it. No time to break it down but Wordsmith takes this,Hannibal's got too much personals. O.k i'ma break it down multies=I can't see em,Where they @?
Flow= Wordsmith
metaphors/Simile=Tie
creativity=Wordsmith
consistency=Wordsmith
wordplay=Wordsmith
complexity=Hannibal
personals=Hannibal
Punches= Wordsmith
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Wordsmith
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No offence, but i'm beginning to believe you cats don't really know what multies are. Read every verse i spat on this thread, there were loads upon loads of 'em. Do i really have to break it down to y'all?
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nuggard (m)
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morons,
why can't you peeps and homos hommies speak english like everyone else who is past 18 years.
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kaydee (m)
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No offence, but i'm beginning to believe you cats don't really know what multies are. Read every verse i spat on this thread, there were loads upon loads of 'em. Do i really have to break it down to y'all?
Lol!!! Here U go again!!!!!!!! Those ain't multies man,check Lupe Fiasco's "Superstar" if u confused or go to UE where u don't win battles without multies. Aight!!! break it down and let me see em! |
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Wordsmith
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ROFLMAO!! Of all people and of all songs to use to describe multies - Lupe Fiasco ! dude, son was spittin' aight but there were little or no multi-syllabic rhyming in that song, Jeez! Pity i'm on a phone. When i get on a PC, i'll point them out. |
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Shaz (f)
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@Smith,
you're missing stuff. . Multies ain't multies when you gotta point them out.
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kaydee (m)
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ROFLMAO!! Of all people and of all songs to use to describe multies - Lupe Fiasco ! dude, son was spittin' aight but there were little or no multi-syllabic rhyming in that song, Jeez! Pity i'm on a phone. When i get on a PC, i'll point them out. OMG  Check verse 1 trying to catch his microphone check 2, 1, 2want to believe my own hype but it's too untrueThe world brought me to my knees, what have you brung you?Did you improve on the design? Did you do somethin' new?Well your name ain't on the guest list, who brung you?You! The more famous person you come throughAnd the sexy lady next to you, you come tooAnd then it hit me Standin' outside of heaven waitin' for god to come and get me I'm too uncouthUnschooled to the rules and too gum shoeToo much of a new comer and too un-coolLike Shadow and Lavelle, I battle with it well Tho I need holiday like lady who sung "Blue"Go back, whatever you did you undoHeavy as heaven The devil on me, two ton's tooMan! Dude was showin off with em multies! Actually,i saw some doubles in ur stuff but that's not acceptable especially from U,Hannibal coulda won with a little more effort.Don't battle much cause i hate losing(Arsenal is not helping matters). |
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edosioo (f)
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its surprising that the kid does not know what multis are !
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makavele (m)
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too bad! u guys are just concentratin' on multis. According to Shaz, what happed to flows, delivery n' originality?
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HYBRID-X (m)
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*********************************ATTENTION ALL NETCEES****************************
YO!! ITS GOING DOWN AGAIN . . . THE BRIDS COMING UP WITH ANOTHER BATTLE TOURNEY . . . YES INDEED . . .YOU'LL SHOULD LOOK OUT FOR "STAR WARZ THE PRO-ELITE VERSION"
COMING TO A THREAD NEXT TO YOU
DATE : 1ST WEEK OF OCTOBER 2008
VENUE : THE RAP BATTLE THREAD
MUCH RESPECT
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Mc Brave (m)
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Hey guys I'm actually new on this thread, although not that new. I've been following the thread and the rap battles, I want to say I'm rily impress. Kip up the good work netcees. Much REPECT to Wordsmith and Hannibal. I want to say Wordsmith's lines and bars are the word we call KILLING. You (Wordsmith) rily slauthered Hannibal.  Nice one! MUCH RESPECT! |
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dyabman (m)
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i'll be there Hybrid-X
its been a while .
Hannibal is just wack , Wordsmith far better of
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