Sponsorship Letter Format

hello room pls take a look at this sponsor letter and tell me what u think should be or not be in it. thanks








The Director,
Entry Clearance ,
British High Commission,
Walter Carrington Street,
Victoria Island lagos


Sir

   SPONSORSHIP LETTER FOR MR peter anthoni
COURSE OF STUDY:Bsc(hons) Electronics Engineering-level 3 top-up(final year entry). one(1) year duration,

I,Mr paul ererrea ,the brother of Mrs jane anthoni (formerly know as miss jane   errerrea before marriage )is a business man(chairman/ceo of mako Services Limited) by occupation residing at no 8 visah sreet.

I am the uncle of Mr peter antoni who is seeking entry clearance visa into the united kingdom for his studies.

Mr peter anthoni is the second out of two children in his family. He works with ITC GLOBAL SYSTEMS at no 9 airport road opposite our ladies college, as a systems engineer/instructor and he has been granted a 1(one) year study leave for the duration of his course.
He has been offered a place at Southampton solent university to  study Bsc(hons) Electronic Engineering (final year entry) that should last for a period of one year. This program will enable him have a good graps of electronic circuitry , maintenance , production and repairs which would be  acquired from higly qualified professionals in UK.

I would be responsible for his tuition,accommodation and maintenance through out the duration of his program.This responsibility is borne out of strong commitment and compassion to his progress over the years.I have lived with Mr peter anthoni  for years and im willing to give him a sound future by funding his studies abroad.

Please note that  as the chairman /ceo of  mako e service limited the entire boby of the company is awear of my action to sponsor Mr Harrison okonma.

I have currently made the full payment of his tuition and accommodation fees at Southampton solent university(evidence attached).
Tuition=8200 pounds(1000 pounds scholarship)
Accommodation= 2575 pounds


The maintenance of Mr peter anthoni in united kingdom will be met from the following sourses:
My company account from FCMB BANK& AFRIC BANK.
I have attached the company bank statement of FCMB BANK &AFRIC BANK .

I have also attached to following to show the source of my income
1.certification of incorporation
2.memorandom and article of association
3.tax clearance
4.letter of confirmation as the CHAIRMAN /CEO OF mako SERVICES LIMITED.


Plesase do not hesitate to call me on this number +234                    on ny issue regarding the conclusion of his application.