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sirwebs (m)
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VILLAGE MONARCH
Yesterday he was a trader
A fairly successful dealer;
Today he is a ruler
The monarch of our village
They say we are now autonomous
Granted freedom to form a new kingdom;
Old Uncle Joe was made a monarch
King over ten hamlets.
Inspired by the granting of autonomous status to my small community
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Genial (m)
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I like your poem. It paints a coherent picture and is easy to follow and understand.
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Ehijie
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I do declare, this poem is awesome, its almost sublime. I read it more than 15 times. I love your use of metre, rythm and the simple but profound story. Keep it up man
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