There She Lay

Well, well. You did a good job for a 'hesitant'  murderer.Lol.
Good job.

But you fell into a trap. Bluespice said, she didn't want her killed with a 'secular weapon.'
In my opinion, 'Knife', crude or not. Is a 'secular weapon.' Or, ?

lol. That's the life of a poet. It was a trick by bluespice, trying to make us 'be' her.
Every poet has his style. Trying to match another person's style will stiffen your creativity.

Your is good, so was my attempt (with modesty of course  ) . Bluespice's stood out, because it was original - the original. She hold's the key and plot of her death. . She was there when she died (mentally at least)  We won't hear the full and gory detail of her death, unless she spills it
Thats my take.

see more of my poems at

http://extramantra.blogspot.com

peace!

You are welcome. bluespice!