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diddy4 (m)
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he didnt write the poem oooo. he only posted it for all to see. make una no carry another person glory give am.
nna nawa for una. onwere ka unu si eme mgbe ufodu.
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Gomer
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he didnt write the poem oooo. he only posted it for all to see. make una no carry another person glory give am.
nna nawa for una. onwere ka unu si eme mgbe ufodu.
your own too much sef. just they hail am for posting it wetin 
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Nutter (m)
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@All,
Hey, thanks for all the kind words. I was raised to respect women so I guess it figures. Glad it did for you all what it did for me. Do pass it on - blokes need to be told reminded!
@Obim,
Hey, sweety!
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blackest (m)
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This is group is fantastic. But the problem is that we are not talking poetry with poetry. Please let us try as much as possible to speak in poetic tone.
Thanks.
Aderemi Adegbite
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blackest (m)
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Hallucination[font=Lucida Sans Unicode][/font]
I don't know who he was So I'm scared of his shadow Along the lengthy lightless street I screamed when he came closer But he stood still behind my shadow. I saw traces of muscular movement Towards the lonely path I tread, At a point I heard massive sound In batches of muggy muscular troops Trodden towards my lonely path All in trance of shattered shadows, I mellow down on my roaring race And suddenly stood still on a spot Then I felt a fierce grip Of the faceless shadow firmly On my fragile shoulder's hill Intermittently, breathless slowly I turned To view the huge aghast figure Though once even prior death But in realization I met Not fierce figure neither any mug Nor am I on any lightless street, Though my rum mind set Amidst my comic and art library.
AdeRemi AdeGbite
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blackest (m)
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Seun, are you in any way refering to my poem or the general responses in the tread?
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Sayoh (f)
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thats a cool one n i feel the passion behind that poem. Thumbs up for whoever wrote it
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Nutter (m)
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. . . and for whoever posted it?
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Nutter (m)
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Thank you, Jesus lover.
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Sista (f)
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@ to allDamn, that poem said it all. Strong black woman here  As a matter a fact, I come from a long lineage of strong black women, I am so proud of that and noe one can take taht away from me 
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