Review My Short Poem

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lindalee (f)

Review My Short Poem

« on: October 31, 2008, 06:13 PM »

Though so powerful
Yet unseen
Great heights through it achieved
Great fall through it received
Its creative,effective and productive
Yet deceptive,destructive and manipulative
The mind s the epitome of who you are
WATCH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

odzgem

Re: Review My Short Poem

« #1 on: November 10, 2008, 09:22 PM »

The essence of poetry,i think, is to convey beautiful thoughts to the reader but in creating beauty with words we must also pass a message across.

Your poem conveys beauty.

YOU can review mine below:

WE ARE BRETHREN BY FATE
LEFT TO US,OUR LUSTFUL TASTE
WE RATHER WANDER SEPARATE WAYS
BE LOST IN THE WILDERNESS OF DAYS

odzgem

Re: Review My Short Poem

« #2 on: November 10, 2008, 09:39 PM »

@linda

Your poem is simple yet deep, like the words of an elder, it provokes thought.

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