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tangent (f)
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i noticed there are many good text mcs on this zone. i think it's high time netcees flow for rank to know the rap king of nairaland. netcees should drop their flows and get graded. 5 star ranking=gold, 4 star=silver, 3 star=bronze, 2 star=plastic. 1 star=wood.  lets go! |
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~Sauron~
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DA CYPHA
Hold the mic with a grip when i'm regularly ciphering scripts
Got no ice on da wrist,but i possess a lyrical license to spit
Ma mighty wisdom will tell u 'life is a gift' and 'death is a curse'
You are proud of being the greatest when u are the best of the worst
I smoke a pound of cess and my enemy n foes say I'm wreckless
While my adversaries stay at da bottom like pros playin tetris
Calling ma name is breathless, this culture is a race of the rappers
To master all of the elements of hip hop and i'm acting it faster
If you are fake and an actor, i ma demolish you in a place of disaster
You couldn't be on top of "the game" if u was dating the rapper
Rivals are facin a master, i'm a living legend like Christ in his time
All civillians wait to get in heaven so i put my 'life on the line'
I'm nice wit da rhymes, the last of a dying breed as a top alliance
Ma inspirational work inspire da audience to stop the violence
Without da cops suppliance, a solo force disposing with no heart
I ma dominate with more written classics than Bethoven n Mozart.
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arramyjay
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OK i will rank.
First rapper 2.5
Reason
lines don't rhyme.
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tangent (f)
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DA CYPHA
Hold the mic with a grip when i'm regularly ciphering scripts
Got no ice on da wrist,but i possess a lyrical license to spit
Ma mighty wisdom will tell u 'life is a gift' and 'death is a curse'
You are proud of being the greatest when u are the best of the worst
I smoke a pound of cess and my enemy n foes say I'm wreckless
While my adversaries stay at da bottom like pros playin tetris
Calling ma name is breathless, this culture is a race of the rappers
To master all of the elements of hip hop and I'm acing it faster
If you aer fake and an actor, i ma demolish you in a place of disaster
You couldnt be on 'top of the game' if u was dating da rapper
Rivals are facin a master, I'm a living legend like Christ in his time
All civillians wait to get in heaven so i put my 'life on the line'
I'm nice wit da rhymes, da last of a dying breed as a top alliance
Ma inspirational work inspire da audience to stop the violence
Without da cops suppliance, a solo force disposing with no heart
I ma dominate with more written classics than Bethoven n Mozart.
nice flow, you were consistent all the way throughout. transitions were on point and delivery was okay. i will like to see a battle tho. final rank: gold.  |
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gamertag
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@shegirl71
How u doing, gurl? want'd to say u're in no position to be judging rap lines, coz' u don't know the basics. Those words don't really rhyme, but i give it up to Sauron, coz' they're wat i call SLANT RHYMES, NEAR RHYMES or PARTIAL RHYMES. e,g.
ORANGE rhymes with LOZENGE, FOREIGN,
They don't really sound well, but as a rapper who knows his onions, you've gotta change your intonation and make them' sound like real rhymes. That's the job!
Peace!
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chamotex (m)
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I'm not too sure whether to drop my bars on this thread.
It's been a while but the talent's always been there.
Peace y'all
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chamotex (m)
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'sup b?
I'm feeling like dropping a couple rhymes
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smurf (f)
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LOLZ, sure go for it, dear  |
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chamotex (m)
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let me drop something. I'm feeling tempted
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chamotex (m)
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I'm a bit rusty y'all . . . . but check this out
Wish you never got me started
Chamotex, yeah he's cold hearted
The next great, check mate, I take ya chest piece
I flex great, while you have no tricks like sex free
Terrorizing Nairalanders like Osama Bin Laden
Spits so fast like Mr. Patel but I aint speaking Punjabi
Chaos time, and flow cataclysmic,
Smile in my face when I talk pessimistic
My flow 'so sick' even Ne-yo couldn't con-test it
All you dudes are size zeros, y'all look anorexic
I bring flames to the game, y'all staring and surprised
Get the message wit my AIM like American online
Haters need to go back to the flipping circus
Get your outfits and start running round in circles
I hunt down preys but never been a hunter
The swagga's mine cuzz I never left it on the corner
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tope2000 (f)
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I'm a bit rusty y'all . . . . but check this out
Wish you never got me started
Chamotex, yeah he's cold hearted
The next great, check mate, I take ya chest piece
I flex great, while you have no tricks like sex free
Terrorizing Nairalanders like Osama Bin Laden
Spits so fast like Mr. Patel but I aint speaking Punjabi
Chaos time, and flow cataclysmic,
Smile in my face when I talk pessimistic
My flow 'so sick' even Ne-yo couldn't con-test it
All you dudes are size zeros, y'all look anorexic
I bring flames to the game, y'all staring and surprised
Get the message wit my AIM like American online
Haters need to go back to the flipping circus
Get your outfits and start running round in circles
I hunt down preys but never been a hunter
The swagga's mine cuzz I never left it on the corner
Lmao I like tho  3.5/5  |
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arramyjay
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I'm a bit rusty y'all . . . . but check this out
Wish you never got me started
Chamotex, yeah he's cold hearted
The next great, check mate, I take ya chest piece
I flex great, while you have no tricks like sex free
Terrorizing Nairalanders like Osama Bin Laden
Spits so fast like Mr. Patel but I aint speaking Punjabi
Chaos time, and flow cataclysmic,
Smile in my face when I talk pessimistic
My flow 'so sick' even Ne-yo couldn't con-test it
All you dudes are size zeros, y'all look anorexic
I bring flames to the game, y'all staring and surprised
Get the message wit my AIM like American online
Haters need to go back to the flipping circus
Get your outfits and start running round in circles
I hunt down preys but never been a hunter
The swagga's mine cuzz I never left it on the corner
Now this is nice,and truely makes sense. I rank 3. |
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chamotex (m)
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Lmao I like tho 3.5/5 3.5/5 . . . .that's not bad Thanks jare, at least someone appreciates the effort.  I'm feeling in the mood now o |
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~Sauron~
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I'm a bit rusty y'all . . . . but check this out
Wish you never got me started
Chamotex, yeah he's cold hearted
The next great, check mate, I take ya chest piece
I flex great, while you have no tricks like sex free
Terrorizing Nairalanders like Osama Bin Laden
Spits so fast like Mr. Patel but I aint speaking Punjabi
Chaos time, and flow cataclysmic,
Smile in my face when I talk pessimistic
My flow 'so sick' even Ne-yo couldn't con-test it
All you dudes are size zeros, y'all look anorexic
I bring flames to the game, y'all staring and surprised
Get the message wit my AIM like American online
Haters need to go back to the flipping circus
Get your outfits and start running round in circles
I hunt down preys but never been a hunter
The swagga's mine cuzz I never left it on the corner
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . . .Chamotex spitting bars. Punjabi and Laden?? U would be shot in India if u spit that. |
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chamotex (m)
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Now this is nice,and truely makes sense.
I rank 3.
Thanks jare I guess I need to improve Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . . .Chamotex spitting bars. Punjabi and Laden?? U would be shot in India if u spit that. LMAO It's been a while Sauron, I aint done this since college dayz. |
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chamotex (m)
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@ Sauron & Shegirl
It's okay now . . . .
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Tgirl4real (f)
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@ Sauron & Shegirl
It's okay now . . . .
They could be d new love on d block Chamo cool I rank 3 |
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arramyjay
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They could be d new love on d block Chamo cool I rank 3Oh no,I am ok with jaybee. |
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Crude (m)
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Hey it's okay y'all, what's the hubbub all about? Ranking or Flowing, it's ok with that, put a brake in it and stop
@Arramyjay
Rhymin in the rap-world aint got nuffin doin with writen stuffs, it's all about your way pronounciation, . . .i think that's wat i know
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arramyjay
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Hey it's okay y'all, what's the hubbub all about? Ranking or Flowing, it's ok with that, put a brake in it and stop
@Arramyjay
Rhymin in the rap-world aint got nuffin doin with writen stuffs, it's all about your way pronounciation, . . .i think that's what i know
Really? but at least it should make sense. |
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Crude (m)
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Yeah! More sense than the "Dunno's" critics
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arramyjay
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Yeah it should make sense.
And I am yet to see your flow.Drop something i wil rank.I have being called a ranker.
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Crude (m)
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Yeah it should make sense.
And I am yet to see your flow.Drop something i wil rank.I have being called a ranker.
I dont think so, u're too low to rank ma flow. . . . . . . . |
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arramyjay
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I don't think so, u're too low to rank ma flow. . . . . . . . Gosh you must spit alot.But i will be here any time you write a line i will rank it,Did you read that well,I will be here.And it better be good. |
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Crude (m)
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Aiight aiight Madame
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~Sauron~
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Gosh you must spit alot.But i will be here any time you write a line i will rank it,Did you read that well,I will be here.And it better be good.
Arramyjay. . . . . . .U don't even know what to grade, do u?? |
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