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tangent (f)
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come on netcees. spit the flows!!! this thread seems like a ghost town. quit the talks.
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~Sauron~
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come on netcees. spit the flows!!! this thread seems like a ghost town. quit the talks.
Heavenly beams strike my puddle, peers and i huddle in a depressed hunk of rubble No rebuttal, seperated though we try to cuddle transition happens slow and subtle I was in trouble, major, my serenity in approximation of danger as I turned to vapor Whisked to and fro by a stranger, knew I was bound to become something greater I cater to the wishes of nature, heat drives my accent a cycle that i can’t circumvent Again my phase starts to augment, a gathering to cement the next harmonious event Now i just represent a percent, no longer alone in a journey, the tide seems to be turning A home is all i have been yearning, even if its concerning, places with no returning Finally, i have became what i sought, what a crock, just part of the monster and its plot Others are drug in and caught, my aspirations start to rot, this isn’t what I thought But I have not forgot, so i charge the weak spot, others observe and follow my approach Only in unison can we uncloak this hoax, weighting down as we all start to encroach The belly of the beast bursts, freedom it seems has been reimbursed its enriching at first Accelerating back towards home turf, i realized what’s worse. . . . .I'm cursed.  |
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tope2000 (f)
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Heavenly beams strike my puddle, peers and i huddle in a depressed hunk of rubble No rebuttal, seperated though we try to cuddle transition happens slow and subtle I was in trouble, major, my serenity in approximation of danger as I turned to vapor Whisked to and fro by a stranger, knew I was bound to become something greater I cater to the wishes of nature, heat drives my accent a cycle that i can’t circumvent Again my phase starts to augment, a gathering to cement the next harmonious event Now i just represent a percent, no longer alone in a journey, the tide seems to be turning A home is all i have been yearning, even if its concerning, places with no returning Finally, i have became what i sought, what a crock, just part of the monster and its plot Others are drug in and caught, my aspirations start to rot, this isn’t what I thought But I have not forgot, so i charge the weak spot, others observe and follow my approach Only in unison can we uncloak this hoax, weighting down as we all start to encroach The belly of the beast bursts, freedom it seems has been reimbursed its enriching at first Accelerating back towards home turf, i realized what’s worse. . . . .I'm cursed. I rank you 4.2  |
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lil bie (f)
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Heavenly beams strike my puddle, peers and i huddle in a depressed hunk of rubble No rebuttal, seperated though we try to cuddle transition happens slow and subtle I was in trouble, major, my serenity in approximation of danger as I turned to vapor Whisked to and fro by a stranger, knew I was bound to become something greater I cater to the wishes of nature, heat drives my accent a cycle that i can’t circumvent Again my phase starts to augment, a gathering to cement the next harmonious event Now i just represent a percent, no longer alone in a journey, the tide seems to be turning A home is all i have been yearning, even if its concerning, places with no returning Finally, i have became what i sought, what a crock, just part of the monster and its plot Others are drug in and caught, my aspirations start to rot, this isn’t what I thought But I have not forgot, so i charge the weak spot, others observe and follow my approach Only in unison can we uncloak this hoax, weighting down as we all start to encroach The belly of the beast bursts, freedom it seems has been reimbursed its enriching at first Accelerating back towards home turf, i realized what’s worse. . . . .I'm cursed. Mint  World class  U spit da best Din't know u were this good |
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~Sauron~
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I rank you 4.2 You are a meanie!!!! U shouldn't be a lecturer. Mint World class U spit da best I try. . . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ARMAGEDDON-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Persuasion has commenced, this is an illustration of a gift A manifestation of the legit, take a sit, as this situation starts to emit Coming from a skeptic that is convinced civilization will cease to exist The population has condensed to a point at which earth can’t persist As disgusting as it is, humans are the reason the world’s in torment Though it wasn’t our intent, now we know we’re not so intelligent Earth shrieking as its stripped, obvious it’s bleeding in our grips Not thinking of the consequence, shit, we just take what we can get Ripped apart each continent, now at the point where there’s no stopping it Raping our own mother, while we stare into the eyes of big brother Bent on showing up one another, now nature can’t recover If that wasn’t bad enough, these governments thinking they are tough Ready to end the fuss at just a touch, not giving a f'uck about the rest of us From the core to the crust, you can feel all energy giving up I could say repent and trust, GOD will pull us through But let’s be honest when is the last time HE spoke to you?? The end is near: I know this much to be true Now just what the f'uck are you going to do??  --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the plot plays out, here are some things to think about. . . Electricity’s nice, could we have done without How about no transportation to move us about What if you had no goddamn bank account What if there were no streets and signs What if we had no way of perceiving time? What if no one was to believe in the divine? Think of a place that had no crime No wars no bickering, what if no one was listening Dang it, now my story is what you are envisioning The beginning will be the same as the finishing!!! |
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lance_vader (m)
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Una dae try o
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You are a meanie!!!! U shouldn't be a lecturer. I try. . . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ARMAGEDDON-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Persuasion has commenced, this is an illustration of a gift A manifestation of the legit, take a sit, as this situation starts to emit Coming from a skeptic that is convinced civilization will cease to exist The population has condensed to a point at which earth can’t persist As disgusting as it is, humans are the reason the world’s in torment Though it wasn’t our intent, now we know we’re not so intelligent Earth shrieking as its stripped, obvious it’s bleeding in our grips Not thinking of the consequence, shit, we just take what we can get Ripped apart each continent, now at the point where there’s no stopping it Raping our own mother, while we stare into the eyes of big brother Bent on showing up one another, now nature can’t recover If that wasn’t bad enough, these governments thinking they are tough Ready to end the fuss at just a touch, not giving a f'uck about the rest of us From the core to the crust, you can feel all energy giving up I could say repent and trust, GOD will pull us through But let’s be honest when is the last time HE spoke to you?? The end is near: I know this much to be true Now just what the f'uck are you going to do?? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the plot plays out, here are some things to think about. . . Electricity’s nice, could we have done without How about no transportation to move us about What if you had no goddamn bank account What if there were no streets and signs What if we had no way of perceiving time? What if no one was to believe in the divine? Think of a place that had no crime No wars no bickering, what if no one was listening Dang it, now my story is what you are envisioning The beginning will be the same as the finishing!!! You should leave this place and come to the literature section. |
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Tgirl4real (f)
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Yeah, i second that . . . lovely rhymes Sauron |
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Crude (m)
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@The 'R's'
Where 'em retards at? FlowShow and his Retarded clone, read Sauron lines and tell me u aint gon retract your words about dissin him, murking him and shytes,. . . . . . . .Dumb-Head
@Sauron
I dunno wat to say man. . . . . .I just dont know way to say. . . . . . .U're tight
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tangent (f)
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Heavenly beams strike my puddle, peers and i huddle in a depressed hunk of rubble No rebuttal, seperated though we try to cuddle transition happens slow and subtle I was in trouble, major, my serenity in approximation of danger as I turned to vapor Whisked to and fro by a stranger, knew I was bound to become something greater I cater to the wishes of nature, heat drives my accent a cycle that i can’t circumvent Again my phase starts to augment, a gathering to cement the next harmonious event Now i just represent a percent, no longer alone in a journey, the tide seems to be turning A home is all i have been yearning, even if its concerning, places with no returning Finally, i have became what i sought, what a crock, just part of the monster and its plot Others are drug in and caught, my aspirations start to rot, this isn’t what I thought But I have not forgot, so i charge the weak spot, others observe and follow my approach Only in unison can we uncloak this hoax, weighting down as we all start to encroach The belly of the beast bursts, freedom it seems has been reimbursed its enriching at first Accelerating back towards home turf, i realized what’s worse. . . . .I'm cursed. this is why i love u from your scalp to the sole of your feet. nobody does it better. sauron, i love you.  |
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You are a meanie!!!! U shouldn't be a lecturer. I try. . . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ARMAGEDDON-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Persuasion has commenced, this is an illustration of a gift A manifestation of the legit, take a sit, as this situation starts to emit Coming from a skeptic that is convinced civilization will cease to exist The population has condensed to a point at which earth can’t persist As disgusting as it is, humans are the reason the world’s in torment Though it wasn’t our intent, now we know we’re not so intelligent Earth shrieking as its stripped, obvious it’s bleeding in our grips Not thinking of the consequence, shit, we just take what we can get Ripped apart each continent, now at the point where there’s no stopping it Raping our own mother, while we stare into the eyes of big brother Bent on showing up one another, now nature can’t recover If that wasn’t bad enough, these governments thinking they are tough Ready to end the fuss at just a touch, not giving a f'uck about the rest of us From the core to the crust, you can feel all energy giving up I could say repent and trust, GOD will pull us through But let’s be honest when is the last time HE spoke to you?? The end is near: I know this much to be true Now just what the f'uck are you going to do?? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the plot plays out, here are some things to think about. . . Electricity’s nice, could we have done without How about no transportation to move us about What if you had no goddamn bank account What if there were no streets and signs What if we had no way of perceiving time? What if no one was to believe in the divine? Think of a place that had no crime No wars no bickering, what if no one was listening Dang it, now my story is what you are envisioning The beginning will be the same as the finishing!!! you are too good. please marry me.  |
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Tgirl4real (f)
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T . A . N . G . E . N . T 
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~Sauron~
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Pay me $10,000,000,000 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
VAMPIRE
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~Sauron~
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THE ILLUSION
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Gather round, for this strange hour, while i explain a deranged coward
A subject that will always remain sour, man's attempt to gain power
Something that alters all movement, but you can’t put your finger to it
It’s CONTROL that’s the illusion, in silence it will show the proof is prudent
I just have to grit my teeth, when i really listen to what’s been preached
Ever think, what it is that they seek? Manipulation through our religious beliefs
I am not saying that you are evil or weak, they just have you afraid to think
Do you believe that if the divine chose to speak, it would need its own shade of ink
Please take a brief second to reflect, it may just to help lessen the effect
Your intellect is your only weapon in this subject, so here is a lesson to inspect
Look at death, only thing that we haven’t cheated in this book we stress
If this was anyone’s last day left, it wouldn’t change if they passed some test
X this page Do you have control of that? No, because there is no taking it back
I am just stating a fact, you’re powerless even if you are hating this rap.
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tope2000 (f)
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THE ILLUSION
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Gather round, for this strange hour, while i explain a deranged coward
A subject that will always remain sour, man's attempt to gain power
Something that alters all movement, but you can’t put your finger to it
It’s CONTROL that’s the illusion, in silence it will show the proof is prudent
I just have to grit my teeth, when i really listen to what’s been preached
Ever think, what it is that they seek? Manipulation through our religious beliefs
I am not saying that you are evil or weak, they just have you afraid to think
Do you believe that if the divine chose to speak, it would need its own shade of ink
Please take a brief second to reflect, it may just to help lessen the effect
Your intellect is your only weapon in this subject, so here is a lesson to inspect
Look at death, only thing that we haven’t cheated in this book we stress
If this was anyone’s last day left, it wouldn’t change if they passed some test
X this page Do you have control of that? No, because there is no taking it back
I am just stating a fact, you’re powerless even if you are hating this rap.
u r just too much jor |
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superstan (m)
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Persuasion has commenced, this is an illustration of a gift
A manifestation of the legit, take a sit, as this situation starts to emit
Coming from a skeptic that is convinced civilization will cease to exist
The population has condensed to a point at which earth can’t persist
brilliant piece. you have a rare gift. |
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Tgirl4real (f)
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where are the flows, i want to rank jo
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Tgirl4real (f)
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THE ILLUSION
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Gather round, for this strange hour, while i explain a deranged coward
A subject that will always remain sour, man's attempt to gain power
Something that alters all movement, but you can’t put your finger to it
It’s CONTROL that’s the illusion, in silence it will show the proof is prudent
I just have to grit my teeth, when i really listen to what’s been preached
Ever think, what it is that they seek? Manipulation through our religious beliefs
I am not saying that you are evil or weak, they just have you afraid to think
Do you believe that if the divine chose to speak, it would need its own shade of ink
Please take a brief second to reflect, it may just to help lessen the effect
Your intellect is your only weapon in this subject, so here is a lesson to inspect
Look at death, only thing that we haven’t cheated in this book we stress
If this was anyone’s last day left, it wouldn’t change if they passed some test
X this page Do you have control of that? No, because there is no taking it back
I am just stating a fact, you’re powerless even if you are hating this rap.
My best so far This is . . . . meen i can't shout |
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lalaboi (m)
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They call me LALA, Local Agbero of London association
This aint no comedy, but its funny, so u keep loling (lol)
Am back again, the Elite Netcees are the kings right now
Watch this space! one day, i know am gon be the don,so keep my crown.
Am still powering up, still operating on an average velocity
On nairaland city, lots of netcees comparing themselves to mini me
Right Now, am feeling like a gigolo
It dont mean when i see your grandma i'll say hello.
Am all about funny lyrics, dont mean i aint tight
I could be anytin i wanna be, without gettn into any fight
Got involved in Rap only a month ago
Now am writing sick(rubbish) lines, dnt wanna show too much ego
Dont expect peeps to feel this one, cos am only doing it for fun
haters take turns, get burnt, go back and plan for a return!
Am a future analyst, time to listen carefully and Note some sturvs
Yous a panelist, like or hate me, u still gon be the one to judge
This is another freestyle, no time to revise
dont read twice, its cursed, u just might turn into a mice
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Tgirl4real (f)
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naa lala Yesterday's was much better. I won't rank this yet Let's see what you got next |
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D1KeleVra (m)
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Ahead Of All
When I snap, you crack, b!otch, 'cause i pop your top
I kick back in your bed, with your girl on top
I feel so. . . comfy here, yea, go preach this word
I feel i.m Usain Bolt, this is nothing but sport
I see you gaspin for air, but you can.t reach me now
I see youre short of breath, you goin need C.P.R
Hola, La Generale! In this battle for ranks
In this major genera, I.m the Major General
I don.t take the top spot, I fill the entire slots
Bosses boss, not King of Kings, Jesus holds that spot
So I pay homage mehn!, at the Holy Sepulchre
Strangle you weaklings, get cleansed at the altar
I.d alter you D.N.A, reconfig. your body.s spleen
Make it store all your fear, like Knox, I'd make you squeal
Since I earned the top spot, Five Mics! GOLD! i.m squeaky-clean
making shrill noises son, you ain.t never rhyme clean
Reconfigin' torsos, the ranks, i.m called The Head
Ventriloquist, insight, time-traveler, Ahead of All. BLAM!!!
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~Sauron~
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The Light
Behold this globe,
life and energy bestowed;
how will this chronicle unfold
Mold an utopia for these souls,
the goal is for each to play their role
Not to behave as told,
change and grow,
through joy and pain,
surpass the mundane
Explain and think,
to forget and sleep,
to admit defeat,
conquer droughts and rain
Go against the grain,
each life in friction,
giving and gaining wisdom
To be heard and to listen,
conviction,
to make love an addiction
Precision to the point of invisibility,
but still illuminating your every ability
From scum to nobility,
I will light the path for each of you willingly
Although you do have responsibility,
shine for yourself and for your neighbors
Adopt positive behaviors,
believe in your savior,
come to me in your prayers
Avoid the nay-sayers,
who will contend if I exist,
I insist
Not convinced,
then you are at risk
of becoming like this.
TO BE CONTINUED. . . . . . . . . |
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Tgirl4real (f)
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The Light
Behold this globe,
life and energy bestowed;
how will this chronicle unfold
Mold an utopia for these souls,
the goal is for each to play their role
Not to behave as told,
change and grow,
through joy and pain,
surpass the mundane
Explain and think,
to forget and sleep,
to admit defeat,
conquer droughts and rain
Go against the grain,
each life in friction,
giving and gaining wisdom
To be heard and to listen,
conviction,
to make love an addiction
Precision to the point of invisibility,
but still illuminating your every ability
From scum to nobility,
I will light the path for each of you willingly
Although you do have responsibility,
shine for yourself and for your neighbors
Adopt positive behaviors,
believe in your savior,
come to me in your prayers
Avoid the nay-sayers,
who will contend if I exist,
I insist
Not convinced,
then you are at risk
of becoming like this. |
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showbobo (m)
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@Tgirl Did you even interview Sauron at all |
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~Sauron~
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. . . . . .A Perfect World. . . . . .. . .my perception of heaven is better than sex. . . . . .with perfection in blessings & never distress. . . . . .to settle ya steps, next, ya handed ya rights. . . . . .to better ya death wit second chances in life. . . . . .you can stand in the light or fly wit ya wings. . . . . .at the hands of Christ with ya wildest dreams. . . . . .smile and think, and I picture a perfect place. . . . . .no fire, no steam, difference in words or race. . . . . .no murders, no hate, no war, and no violence. . . . . .no further disgrace and no point for the silence. . . . . .no more of the cryin for family you've missed. . . . . .ya boys are all smilin as they stand in the mist. . . . . .dance with ya chick as ya glide through the sky. . . . . .hands on her hips and ya mind on her eyes. . . . . .not blinded by lies, all that we see is the facts. . . . . .and time really flies with no need to keep track. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- . . .but peace is no task, just try stopping in church. . . . . .could preach to the mass bout' God and his worth. . . . . .but it's not gonna work, we just better give up. . . . . .coz hell is probably Earth. . . .and the devil's in us. . . . 
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tope2000 (f)
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. . . . . .A Perfect World. . . . . .. . .my perception of heaven is better than sex. . . . . .with perfection in blessings & never distress. . . . . .to settle ya steps, next, ya handed ya rights. . . . . .to better ya death wit second chances in life. . . . . .you can stand in the light or fly wit ya wings. . . . . .at the hands of Christ with ya wildest dreams. . . . . .smile and think, and I picture a perfect place. . . . . .no fire, no steam, difference in words or race. . . . . .no murders, no hate, no war, and no violence. . . . . .no further discrace and no point for the silence. . . . . .no more of the cryin for family you've missed. . . . . .ya boys are all smilin as they stand in the mist. . . . . .dance with ya chick as ya glide through the sky. . . . . .hands on her hips and ya mind on her eyes. . . . . .not blinded by lies, all that we see is the facts. . . . . .and time really flies with no need to keep track. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- . . .but peace is no task, just try stopping in church. . . . . .could preach to the mass bout' God and his worth. . . . . .but it's not gonna work, we just better give up. . . . . .coz hell is probably Earth. . . .and the devil's in us. . . . Im loving this Rank - 4.8/5 |
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mailmalc (m)
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. . and the devil's in us, dwelling in these thoughts/ nd the majority is mis-informed livin a life in distort/ we praying like a bad slave, maybe we're obliged to do wrong/ been trying to right our past-ways so the future could move on/ the mind conspires wit the body fightin against the spirit/ eatin deep into societal morals, wat an un-amazin finish/ love is being refrained so stormy hatred prevails . . / we bathed wit disgrace therefor fo' many years we sail/ u often get drowned in your thoughts or lost in your world/ hopin to only remember God's blessings so the curse be forgot/ some gets a larger share of shame, others bite the harder part on pain/ but stil self confidence is a better act of fame/ i'm hurr assembling lyrics to giv the soul it's fitting/ determination holds the secrets so let go these critics/ |
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~Sauron~
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. . . . . . . .determination holds the secrets so let go these critics
Are we on the same page? I can't turn you
Finger tips uppin' in flames, my hands burn you
Last time we met, in depth, my mind crashed
But I dropped back with that and stepped, so time passed
Now its '09. . . .I move, remain calm
'007 was a game. . .but not James Bond
At the plate, check my stats, they great, I trained Bonds
Those I take on. . .high pitchin' like Akon
I pray on and on. . . .a brain phenomenon
He may wonder on. . . .or take on a bomb!
BOOM. Forgive how I'm speakin' to you
My vision ZOOM, it's weakness that I'm seein' in you
Why am i talking to myself? I need help
I'm deeper then the sea itself, the breeze felt
Cold. But I woke up in church, my knees knelt
I'm prayin' at my own wake. . .for my own sake.
Wait!! Did I just say i'm prayin at my own wake?
No way. . .it can't be. . .I died out
Cant believe what I'm seein' through the eyes i spy out
Rememberin' the times of my prime rhymes now. . .
But if the room is quiet inside it, why shout??
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lalaboi (m)
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We should rename this thread "THE SAURON NOTEBOOK" |
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