Till Dawn Do Us Part. . .

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Dojo (m)

Till Dawn Do Us Part. . .

« on: August 31, 2006, 12:23 PM »

Eyes meet,
Thoughts transferred,
Big smiles.
Happy inside,
Love shines,
Hands touching,
Senses awakened,
Pulse racing.
Pupils dilating,
Lips touching,
Sweet taste.
Whispers softly,
Loving words,
Pulls closer.
Feels excitement,
Our clothing
Falls away,
Each caressing
Hands stroking,
Exploring,
Slow pleasuring.
Sensuous movements,
We make love till dawn do us part,

FactorChic (f)

Re: Till Dawn Do Us Part. . .

« #1 on: May 15, 2007, 06:57 PM »

One word, BEAUTIFUL

that poem was really nice
good job Cheesy

prof ade (m)

Re: Till Dawn Do Us Part. . .

« #2 on: May 16, 2007, 07:18 AM »

Hi Dojo,

It sounds like twas written in the heat of the moment; breathlessly.

Like the words and the arrangement.

Nice.

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