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laide o (f)
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heaven on earth
a paradise i hadnt experienced yet
hard hands on my naked skin
swimming in a sea of blankets
exploring each other like new terrain
a little bit of pleasure and pain
naked bodies entwined
souls met
left in a state of bliss
and all things sweet
your adventurous lips
planting soft kisses
the creaking of the bed
drowned by loud moans
not of one in great pain
but of intense pleasure
our first time
not a cheap sensual thrill
but the physical expression
of the love we deeply feel,
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hot-angel (f)
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Another good one. If only everyone's first time was like that.
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somegirl (f)
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Beautifull! Do you mind if I print it and put it at my wall?  |
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laide o (f)
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no problem!!!!!!!!!!
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jinny542 (m)
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My first time was better than that.
"You didnt add the pounding and creaking of the bed"
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G-reycells (m)
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 Who made u judge over her, Genie 542! She didnt do it wit u anyway! so no pounding and creaking because she did it on a kingsize,
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G-reycells (m)
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No! Me thinks he did it more on Bob Marley's lyrical single bed Dt explains d creakingsssssssssssssssssss! |
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jinny542 (m)
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how do u noe if i'm a virgin or not. I'm not saying the poem isnt nice i'm onlye saying she would have added that efizy. Chill comment on d poem and not me.  |
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teno (f)
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whats all the hulaballo about?it's just a first time.it could be worse
or just stinking awful.anyhow, it's well written and you prattlers
where is your own WRITTEN EXPERIENCE?!!!!!!!!!! AMEBOS
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G-reycells (m)
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whats all the hulaballo about?it's just a first time.it could be worse
or just stinking awful.anyhow, it's well written and you prattlers
where is your own WRITTEN EXPERIENCE?!!!!!!!!!! AMEBOS
Wey your own account? ITK |
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laide o (f)
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this is my own account of what happened, and i dnt need to put effizi(as u put it) to please u or anyone, if urs was better good for u, carry am go collect money from bank now,
thanx to everyone else who gave me some feedback, one love!
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boladonas (m)
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My first time was 85% fear 15% adventure
Afraid i may be caught,
It was in a friends room in the university
between 2 inexperience "kids"
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RuuDie (m)
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Laide ,
this poem is an absolute beau , just ain't got words 2 describe it , keep it up girl! got any more from where that came?
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micklplus (m)
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Nice one!!!!
cheers
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