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Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #576 on: January 18, 2007, 07:20 PM »

What is life?



Life is a mystery I'm trying to unfold,

Life is that literature I read over and over again but still couldn't fully understand,

life is a journey I've yet to complete,


Life is the songs I sing when the hills fill my heart with the sound of music,

Life is a beauty I admire,

Life is a delicious plate of pounded yam and egusi soup I once ate in Nigeria.

Life is water, quench my thirst,

Life is a pleasurable hand of a lady, warm me up,

Life is the healing rays of the sun, unfreeze me.

somegirl (f)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #577 on: January 19, 2007, 12:36 PM »

Hi Franc, haven't seen you in a while. Where are thou? Hope you're fine. Take care.
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #578 on: January 20, 2007, 02:19 PM »

u make me blush! Embarrassed
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #579 on: January 20, 2007, 02:30 PM »

Quote from: nilla on January 15, 2007, 11:22 PM
Yes he's not alone.

*double hugs*

Thanks, still trying to be me. Sad Wink
Quote from: somegirl on January 19, 2007, 12:36 PM
Hi Franc, haven't seen you in a while. Where are thou? Hope you're fine. Take care.
Never knew u were this lovely!
I'll soon be back, thanks. Smiley Grin
somegirl (f)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #580 on: January 20, 2007, 04:37 PM »

Quote
I'll soon be back ---

Smiley
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #581 on: January 22, 2007, 04:44 PM »

AND I'M BACK!
WHERE IS EVERYONE?
muinat (f)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #582 on: January 23, 2007, 06:38 PM »

Now and Then

When I was younger, I never used 2 cry,

Now every minute tears come down my eye.

Was it because bak in those days,

I didn't kno luv, now I've turned from my ways?



Wat was the reason 4 me not 2 cry?

Was it because there was no one 2 say goodbye?

When I was younger, there was no me and u,

And now, I have all this 2 go thru.



During those years, I was so innocent,

Now I speak a different language, with a new accent.

Now I wear my hair a different way,

And my lips always have sumthing 2 say. *



Now I have an attitude, and I won't grin,

And almost evrything I do, is considered a sin.

Now my face has matured, and my body has too,

And I have grown, maybe a foot or two.



I was confused about this whole thing then,

But now I kno there are ways to separate the boys from the men. *

I learned all guys are dogs, who you have 2 train 2 b a man, *

This is a life lesson, should b evry girls' plan. *



Sumtimes I look @ life bak then, *

And think about how I would like to live it again. *

But life now, is the way it should be, *

Chilling, hanging out, and just being "ME".
Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #583 on: January 23, 2007, 10:28 PM »

What is Love?

Oh, let me not speak eloquently of a thing I know not.
For to me, it is easier to say "I need you" than to say I love you.
I need you for this and I need you for that.

Whatever Love may be,
I know It shouldn't hurt.
I know it shouldn't build one up and then break one down.
I know it shouldn't leave one wanting.
I know it shouldn't betray the ever trusting heart.
Ezenwenyi (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #584 on: January 30, 2007, 01:43 PM »

ALLIN
                                            The beautiful sound of the truth
                                           
                                            Bring justice to the just
                                           
                                           The only reason to trust
                                           
                                           The greatest sagacity
                                           
                                           Judging men with their integrity
                                           
                                           She was in the chosen Generation
                                           
                                           Fighting to give good justification
                                           
                                           In the midst of criticization
                                           
                                           The people and their imagination
                                           
                                           Crying for better administration
                                           
                                           The  greatest judge in the land
                                           
                                           The N of nobility
                                           
                                           The I of integrity
                                           
                                           The L of loyalty
                                           
                                           The L of longevity
                                           
                                           The A of adventure
                                                                                     

franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #585 on: January 30, 2007, 03:24 PM »

NILLA NEEDS TO SE THIS, AND HER COMMENT WILL BE MINE.
HOWEVER, I DON'T THINK SHE'LL LIKE "criticization".
WELCOME TO THE CLUB! Grin
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #586 on: January 30, 2007, 03:54 PM »

' HOME COMING '

LASSITUDE, AN UNEQUIVOCAL SILENCE,
PALE FACES, DEDICATION, A PRAYERFUL MEDITATION,
ROWS OF FAITHFULS, CANDLE LIGHTS, RECITATION, WHISPERS, A SOULFUL INFLUENCE,
DEFEAT, THOUGHTS, HEAD BOWED, A DEEP SOULFUL REGRET, AN ACT OF CONTRITION.

SLOWLY, SADLY, REPENTANTLY TOWARD DESTINY,
' BLESS ME FATHER FOR I HAVE SINNED, THROUGH MY OWN FAULTS,
UNWHOLESOME DESIRES, THOUGHTS, ACTS, EVIL OF ALL SORTS,
FORGIVE ME, AS I REALISE IN TEARS, A HEAVY HEART, AS I HUMBLY KNEE.'
NEW THROUGH HIS INFINITE MERCY, STRONG, FULL OF ASPIRATIONS.
A WALK THROUGH ROWS, FAMILIAR SOLEMN FACES,
MY SOULFUL JOURNEY TO PENANCE, ANOTHER CHANCE, A GODLY VISITATION,
SEEMINGLY READY TO AVOID SIN, ALL OCCASIONS THAT LEAD TO IT, A SPIRITUAL PHASE,
A TEDIOUS HUMAN TREK, A PLEA FOR HIS GRACE,
MY STRENGHT THROUGH TRIBULATIONS.

A NEW DAY, A NEW ME, A LOT OF DIFFERENCE,
PEN, PAPER, BRUSH, PENCIL, COLOURS, A PECULIAR HORIZON,
SUNRISE, BIRDS, FLOWERS; SUNSET, REFLECTIONS; MOONLIGHT, STARS, THE COLD NIGHT BREEZE; A NATURAL SEQUENCE,
SOMEGIRL, NILLA, NAIRALAND, ENOUGH OF A REASON.
macalurs (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #587 on: January 30, 2007, 05:54 PM »

hey awl.
the hero
is backoo
Ezenwenyi (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #588 on: February 01, 2007, 01:28 PM »

                                          SMILING NAIRALANDERS
                                                 
                                              O Great landers
                                              People of wonders
                                              Bringing  joy to the founders
                                              Crying for the words
                                              In the land of Naira
                                              The great talent of the chosen
                                              Far in the east with the stuborn sunset
                                              People of Great thinking
                                              The state of the nation
                                              The crying masses and the future
                                              Oh!Great landers!
                                              Oh!Great poets!
                                              Oh!Great generation
                                              Smiling with the naira!
                                              The smiling landers!
                                              Fly!Fly!Fly, And land in Naira



Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #589 on: February 03, 2007, 03:15 AM »

It was 9.37 on a Thursday evening
When I hit the bed
Dinner was good and
TV didn't suck
As I laid back
Its funny how time flies by
Like an aero plane carrying on home
Where the heart is
Going to a better place,
Home, fantasy.
somegirl (f)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #590 on: February 03, 2007, 12:10 PM »

Hi Franc, just saw your poem. Welcome back!  Smiley
nilla (f)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #591 on: February 03, 2007, 05:19 PM »

@ Muinat
Interesting poem

@ Ezenwenyi
WOW!!
ALLIN . . . .nice name . . . . .lol (never spelt my name backwards before)
I love the poem. (To Franc: I don't have a problem with "criticization"  Grin)
Thanx  Cheesy
You're making me think of coming back to nairaland.

@ Franc
you're homecoming looks like a mix of you and Genial's style (at least what I know as Genial's style)

@ Multitask
Quote
What is Love?

Oh, let me not speaketh eloquently of a thing I knoweth not.
For to me, it is easier to say "I need you" than to say I love you.
I need you for this and I need you for that.

Whatever Love may be,
I know It shouldn't hurt.
I know it is incomplete without money, today.
I know it shouldn't build one up and then break one down.
I know it shouldn't leave one wanting.
I know it shouldn't betray the ever trusting heart
I like this poem, except the line in bold.

Your last poem I'll call it rapoetry (it's like a mix of rap and poetry).
Nice.

Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #592 on: February 03, 2007, 09:43 PM »

@nilla

10q

But I still think that whatever love may be, it is incomplete today, without money and this is why.

A nice crib for you, $500,000.00
A nice car for you, $20,000.00
jeweleries and gifts for you, $2,000.00
Monthly allowance for hair, nails, and beauty maintenance, $500.00
Vacation expenses, $2,000.00
Monthly bills, $1,500.00

Knowing what love should and shouldn't be today, priceful.  Wink

franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #593 on: February 05, 2007, 09:06 PM »

@ Franc
you're homecoming looks like a mix of you and Genial's style (at least what I know as Genial's style)

DAT'S WHAT MAKES HIM MY ,

@SOMEGIRL,
THANKS, I TRIED SENDING U A MAIL, BUT your ID WAS WRONG. I'LL NEED IT IF U DON'T MIND, truelypoetic007@yahoo.com
 Wink
hola2ng (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #594 on: February 07, 2007, 06:12 PM »

There he sat lonely
in need of company

in need of comfort
to take away the hurt

If you see yourself in life's mirror
a reflection of a true hero

ancestors in shackles have set us free
but with freedom who exactly are we ?

from the scars cut deep into my hands
it only reminds -of conflicts & wars

today we give out awards
tomorrow we are all but a corpse

There he sat -no more lonely
angels, greatness and glory
Ezenwenyi (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #595 on: February 08, 2007, 04:08 PM »


          Wicked World (The W square )

O! Wicked being of the universe
Killing the mindset the people
They took them to exile
They murdered them in cold blood
Without any sense of humanity
The cry and the humble serenity
Fighting against prosperity
Great men of integrity
Ah! H-H-He begged for his own life
And yet they denied him of seeing tomorrow
Deceiving the people with their manifestos
They burnt the spirit in them
The people happily accepted the massacre
Rejoicing without joy
Praying for the world to come to end,
Without preparation
Just because of humiliation
In our own generation
O! What a wicked world!
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #596 on: February 08, 2007, 05:00 PM »

@ hola2ng
u r in a class of your own with dis creative piece.
but u shouldn't forget to give your works title.

@Ezenwenyi
u write sense, u gat it flowing, but i think u should take your time to edit and re-edit.
nice piece, i see politicians make u sick! Grin
Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #597 on: February 09, 2007, 04:17 AM »

Money

The key to the good life

What everyone likes

It is understandable

By a reasonable standard

In a system of buying and selling

For the sake of health of mind, body and soul.

Debating this makes my hands as cold as ice

preferring the influence of Spanish fly

To the convincing deceits that blinds the eyes

Let me spread my wings and fly

Like a bird in the blue sky

Far far away from every wanton lie

I said, Let not the good life pass me bye
hola2ng (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #598 on: February 09, 2007, 09:05 AM »

Quote from: franc1982 on February 08, 2007, 05:00 PM
@ hola2ng
you're in a class of your own with this creative piece.
but u shouldn't forget to give your works title.


@ franc1982
Appreciate the love.
Most times, after writing i then start thinking of a title. Maybe i should start doing it the other way round ?
Your advice is duly noted.
Cheers !!
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #599 on: February 12, 2007, 12:41 PM »

it's better done after writing.
giving it a title b4 u start, makes it really difficult.
u can decide to do it how it suits u sha,
for me, it's better after going thru what u've done.
d most important aspect of it is ' never forget to give it one. '
hola2ng (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #600 on: February 13, 2007, 08:48 AM »

Yer. Definitely -i guess almost everything in life needs a title.
It depends though, most times i give titles before actually writing -to guide me.
But other times i just write as the words come to me at that point in time.

But then again -whats a song without a title, right ?
Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #601 on: February 14, 2007, 12:46 AM »

Basket mouth

Like a manufacturing company manufactures tangible products
So does the mouth manufactures lies.
It speaks eloquently,
That which it can not eloquently verify.
I asked, where is my inheritance?
But it refuses to answer.
So I asked again, where are my treasures?
But it declined to respond.
Then finally I asked, where is my money?
But see?, it makes like a Mexican who refuses to speak in English.

odada (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #602 on: February 14, 2007, 02:51 AM »

 Huh Undecided Undecided Undecided Undecided
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #603 on: February 14, 2007, 01:26 PM »

@Multitask
SORRY I DIDN'T COMMENT ON ' MONEY '.
I GOT SO CARRIED AWAY WITH THE LINES, IT'S REALLY NICE.
ANYTHING ON VALENTINE?
Multitask (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #604 on: February 15, 2007, 02:21 AM »

@Franc 1982

Thanks for the complimentary review.


Valentine

Valentine's day is for lovers,

No man wishes to be loner,

Journeying through life like an island

Sleeping alone on a beds' corner,

Yearning for her to join him a little sooner.

Melting for her torch with desire

Like a burning candle melting beneath the heat of its own fire.

Red roses are his token of love for her.

Blue is the color she feels inside of her.

Oh, what a pacifying feeling,

Relieving the heart, mind, body and soul

From stressful needings.

No longer alone, today

Valentine's day is here to stay.
odada (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #605 on: February 15, 2007, 02:23 AM »

whatoh!okay !! Grin Grin Grin
franc1982 (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #606 on: February 16, 2007, 10:13 AM »

@Multitask
i think someone did his assignment, keep it up, nice work!
odada (m)
Re: Poetry Contest
« #607 on: February 16, 2007, 10:17 AM »

@franc1982
sup bro,wheres nilla da judge?
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