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somegirl (f)
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Franc, have you written a new poem? Please, do share! 
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denex
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Look, it is high time you people start scrutinizing poems before you hail them. People cannot continue to copy poems from elsewhere and dump them here yet true artists'll be showering praises on them.
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franc1982 (m)
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Franc, have you written a new poem? Please, do share!  many of them. good to know u still come in once in a while. I'll do that later. Look, it is high time you people start scrutinizing poems before you hail them. People cannot continue to copy poems from elsewhere and dump them here yet true artists'll be showering praises on them.
how do u mean? u could help us catch those thieves. lets have the site address n we'll send the out.
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denex
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@franc182 I noticed your second poem ever posted on this thread was taken from the website www.consumating.comthe others are made up of lines individually littering every where. So I know you developed e unique technique of assembling poems. All the same sha, that very next poem you submitted after toni, it was from someone else's blog. So personally, I'm afraid of posting my poem here against the danger of it being dismantled and reassembled on some other website as another person's work.
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franc1982 (m)
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You make me sick. Who posted it there? If u know how to read, u'll c it's me. What's your stress. I don't do such, if I do, what will I benefit? I belong to other sites and post my poems there. Next time u see my works, just take time out to check if truelypoetic007, Francis Attah Egu, myhomeis, 4ran6, or Achonu make up the addy! Careful, this is defamation, just in case u don't know.
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ACAN (m)
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MY CONFESSION
Everyday i blame myself i had someone as precious as you a diamond i cannot trade but it seems i don't care much am sorry its not that i didn't care about you i have wanted to call a million times to apologize for not keeping my love right with you sometimes i stood alone i picture how beautiful the world is i despise it because you are not her with me you are right if you hate me i can't imagine myself forgiven you had you treated me this same way but my heart tells me you still love me and i know you do
You have taken a piece of me so precious that if i loose it my life will never be the same again please i am guilty of all charges find somewhere in your heart and consider my appeal i still want to be part of your life to share in your pain, sorrow and joy to be beside you to hold you when you fall my life will be incomplete if one day i wake up and don't find you by my side i love you more than you think i do
acandav
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franc1982 (m)
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what do i say now?
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hansibone (m)
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hello people, i'm kind of new here and would love to join in the contest, but would want to be true and straight. please lets do our stuff and not dump someone else stuff here and receive the praise for something u did not do  . i pray i'm not too blunt, just being real 
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hansibone (m)
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hello peps, is there any Nigerian Poetry Contest available. at least we should praise ourselves, then selling or stuff to them white sticks,  holla back if there is any, would love to participate. thanks 
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lilian777 (f)
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Oh my Gosh!!!!!
Where have i been?! "away miss, asking why poetry put youths to sleep" while some dudes and dudettes are here having a ball. But did anybody get to read my "let friendship prevail?!" Nobody told me if it's good stuff.Its already added on lovingyou.com, though.
You can put yours there too,if it's good stuff you could win.
Give way now, all o' ya ,will ya? the poetry dutchess is on the way,
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lilian777 (f)
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Behold the lake
sleek as silver fish out of silence i settle rest against the sickle tree to catch a glimpse of it once again to behold the lake
there's gleam of gold and green and scarlet as the light fell amongst the leaves and trailing orchids what a wonderful view, so terrific the cloying sweetness of it all the profusion and privacy it affords from the streets hustle and burstle like a sanctuary, where i lay my thoughts bare,against the sun and moon
like a lily flower i toss my head up humn,the soft damp air heavy with the scent of ginger flowers sleekly fishes jump in and out sailing spread like a sea bird's wing running before the night wind
now the sky black and starless the still waters,now dark the moon that will rise today , a dying moon. one day,when it rises new and young with stars so bright there i'll come in early light to catch a glimpse of it once more to behold the lake!
Poem written after visiting the Nike Lake resort in Enugu
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hola2ng (m)
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PORTRAIT
A gaze far into nothingness your leaving has left me in loneliness sometimes I'm high memories of you bring me down
It's hard to just live for the moment when thoughts of you seem so ancient yesterday's past drifting into the present a look, a smile is all on this portrait
A tune, a sound is all in this song so many hours and minutes sometimes we stare but we see nothing bracing against challenges coming
silence makes no sound this portrait i have found I'm free to view the world through another's eyes
@lilian777 - I thought Behold the lake was breathtaking.
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lilian777 (f)
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@hola2ng Thanks a lot.  I think yours is good too. Give us some more!
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lilian777 (f)
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My Very Own Video
Just like a video machine, I rewind, and replay… All the magical moments spent with you, All the deadpan humor of once in a while, All the wild and crazy things done with you I wish, I just keep wishing, I can keep them as clear as crystal Or tucked safe somewhere in my heart.
Can I lock these memories in a bottle, and set them flying calmly-wild like a butterfly, Or peacefully free as the dove, anytime I lay my head to sleep? Oh yes I can…my very own video Then safely tuck them back in Only to rewind and replay it over and again In my dreams, love In my sweet dreams.
Lilian 2007
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lilian777 (f)
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Mountains of Viva calls (1)
Sitting on her soul for yet another time Bound by the fiery shackle of sweet-hatred For love, they did love her she believed And bound, they did bound her, bound by that filthy love Which endears them yet flares their passion, Passion to understand her cowardly courage, to break away. Die to live was her passion or live, live, Viva in death. To bend her will was their resolve.
Trust worthy she is, they eloquently cried for her presence, her presence! Viva! For Viva she cried. Viva Zapata, Father’s final words invariably, is final, She craved for sweet recklessness…Viva What would it be like to be lost, lost in your bare mountains? anger and fear, ignition key to determination
Time to do her own thing, stars shone in her eyes, enough to see through the dark diamond mine of Solomon The wooing sound of the wind calls her by name Faraway in the bare mountains With a perpetual smile she answered Viewing the world from an adult’s eye yet with the innocence of a child
How much I’ve longed for you. Viva Viva! Viva!! Viva!!! I taste your rain on my tongue, Your sun on my back. Ha, freedom is life No roof, no staff of bread, but only now Just her faith in her fate is enough Unbound from the fiery shackle of sweet –sorrow Freedom is to live. She lives! Now her soul is in her soul, in its place.
Story of a young girl craving to live her life and be free from parental domination
Lilian 2007
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hansibone (m)
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Men, those poems are cool, please guys check mine and rate me please, Beautiful One 
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lilian777 (f)
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@ hansibone
still waiting to read your stuff
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hansibone (m)
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lillian777 check this out, BEAUTIFUL ONE
Beautiful one, where at thou Lovely one, here i bow Body and soul we avow Distance apart, we afar
In my mind, you abide In my soul, there resides Beautiful thoughts of our time worth while Stolen glances at you all worth while
Mona Lisa, you i call Da Vincis' greatest amongst them all Complexion,nor compared to like a god Reflection falling on me like the sun god
The Holy Grail, non never understood Templars fought and died for its good Revealing such a history to you Describes how much the chalice lies in you
A bosom compared to Aphrodite's alone Please grant my soul, and be its home Zeus almighty would forgive us, even for this sin My immortal, you my heart is longing to see,
06/19/2007 (Damon Hill)
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lilian777 (f)
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@hansibone
its good. But,i'd like to read what you've done on nature. Then, what/who's Damon Hill? you?
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hansibone (m)
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@Lillian777 hansibone is Damon Hill. hansibone is my log in name here while Damon Hill is my acronym (Robinson O'Woma is my real name),  Will get u something on nature soon, brb
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me-zainab (f)
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@ hansibone
ok. I wait
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ACAN (m)
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My Faith I have been walking two thousand miles but no one know where i am when i was thirsty i never found water to drink when i was hungry no one gave me food to eat when i was weary and looking for shelter i never found any whats going to become of me? am i still going to be wondering all the rest of my life without aid and nothing to cling to and die off with this misery? or will i be optimistic if life will turn around where at the end i can be sober expecting aid where i will cling to and be at peace?
acandav/ poetry.com Copyright ©2007
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lilian777 (f)
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@ hansibone
i'm waiting,where r u?
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hola2ng (m)
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FALLING TO THE GROUND
On the ground i sit on dead leaves coloured brown camouflage upon my skin my days, so many this race, so tiring
sun penetrates through the innocence of me the silence of you the many sunsets we see
Listen quietly birds engage in a calm ritual Caged or surrounded which one ?
wish i could fly away for ever and ever eyes wide open timelessness everyday emptiness
falling to the ground without a sound gradually seeing the spectrum of light around On the ground i sit on dead leaves coloured brown
@lilian777 Mountains of Viva calls (1). Great writing.
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denex
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@ACAN
stop sending your poems to poetry.com, they are rogues. I've actually reported their issue to the EFCC
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franc1982 (m)
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' EMOTIONS '
IF I ASK YOUR EYES CLOSED MISTRESS, I SEEK NOTHING CLOSE TO YOUR DRESS, A STRONGER FEELING THAN WORDS, US OUT OF OUR HEADS, A SENSATION LIKE ICE, ONLY WHEN I CLOSE YOUR EYES. Will soon be back, until then however, impressive is the word! 777? Nice lines.
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ACAN (m)
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thanks denex for your concent
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moonday
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it funny you know, speaking from the heart gives you freedom.it opens the human heart and satisfies. i used to think it'll make one look weak for bringing out those inner most feelings but i have been proved wrong .it brings out those things that has been hiding.poetry is life,it makes your heart younger
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hola2ng (m)
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I'm not crazy i only ask that you forgive me
I'm not the man i used to be i only changed with the weather
I'm not the best but i strive to be better
I'm not gold or diamonds but my type is always rare
You are not the rainbow but you put colours inside my world
I'm not crazy but you and I can run away
I am but a dreamer dreams do come true someday
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wealthyman (m)
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As a gentle touch, you came down to me. As a smooth caress you made my soul cry for more. Like a glimmering elder you came down on me - you became the darkness, You may ask yourself - is this an illusion? The path between reality and madness are now blocked. Insane or not, what is for real and what is not? Walking the line, strolling the fine line between pagan and christian - reality or madness, does it really matter? Maybe it´s the same thing - all in the thick web of illusions? Who am I and who are you? Will we remain as what we are and will we live to see another day? We were not the beginning and we nor shall be the end. Our fate is sealed and all is everlasting. In the shadows you can always find "The friend" and in the darkest shadow of them all, my home will forever be
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denex
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You all should contact Seun if you would like to see nairaland participate in the National Poetry Competition to be sponsored by First Bank Nigeria.
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