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whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #32 on: October 15, 2006, 06:15 PM »

Hey Scorpio, you don't have to like love poems just feel them.
Dig this? Let me know!

HEART TO HEART ( Circa '03 )

Heart to heart, you and I
A soulmate I need and a true friend indeed
yours and mine together as one,
United we'll stand but divided we'll fall

Heart to heart is a plan that works
Talking with you and sharing real thoughts
Feeling alone? You should call on my phone
Never again will you be on your own

Your heart for my heart, what about that?
Walk on my path and I won't break your heart
Heart to heart we should live just as one
Sincere soulmates and not just bedmates

How about that Scorpio?
Peace
Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #33 on: October 16, 2006, 12:05 AM »

@Whiteboi, i try, but i only seem to ''feel'' a little; your latest looks good tho. do you guys compile all this or y'all just let it go to waste?
lauryn (f)
Re: My Poem
« #34 on: October 16, 2006, 12:48 AM »

Ms Instigator
Them ask You Grin
Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #35 on: October 16, 2006, 05:06 PM »

sharrap dia jor! Grin
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #36 on: October 16, 2006, 07:28 PM »

Thanks Kutecolor! Scorpio, all these are works from my archive so I guess you know i've got a compilation of whatever I post here. In my head and in my files, lol Grin

I'll drop another soon but right now I have to go
peace!

Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #37 on: October 17, 2006, 01:35 AM »

I let them go 2 watse Shocked but i have some i wrote
Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #38 on: October 17, 2006, 01:53 AM »

uh huh!  Grin your case is another game entirely
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #39 on: October 17, 2006, 05:45 AM »

lol scorp i wouldn't be me if i didn;t act the way i act

Listen to the song cry, I'm given you a long bye. I'm trying to show you the love you've giving me, was giving to the wrong guy. Time apart, just to find our heats. Another fight isn't right, I'm not try to start. They say love lasts forever, when you love laugh together. I alway thought me and u, would share one path forever. Torn apart, as soon as we formed our hearts. It felt like it ended as soon we form a start. We persist to try now we face the kiss goodbye. I sometimes feel you should  never  have been with the guy. "But I still love you" the mrs replys. But the mrs denies, that this is a lie. So he walks up to her and kisses her bye.
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #40 on: October 17, 2006, 06:32 AM »

Not feeling you, absorbing you, sing "morning" to the morning dew
cause my sunshine just keeps on pouring through
Crimson lips, precision hips, for you I'll do the time, if the prison fits
Eyes, wise two pools of the sky, to cool but surprised, for you I would lie
Whisper of voice, my sista choice, so I went up 2 da girl, and gave the sista a choice
Like choose me abuse me but I refuse thy to lose me, cause truly your my duty
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #41 on: October 17, 2006, 03:07 PM »

Nice one Wale, I dig the second one.

Peace!!
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #42 on: October 17, 2006, 03:15 PM »

Here's one for y'all who don't want to spend your next birthday close to Africa's steaming sun.

AFRICAN SUN

African sun my African sun
Pouring down your intense heat
on my head you show no mercy
and on my skin you show no pity

You make the ground look baked
and as I walk the street I feel the heat
eating its way through my shoe
and into my feet

African sun my African sun
Seducing me to stay and play
till my grey day, that okay
but i'll rather celebrate my next birthday
far away from you my African sun

Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #43 on: October 17, 2006, 07:04 PM »

lol wale, it's all good. just keep 'em comin Grin
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #44 on: October 17, 2006, 09:48 PM »

Ahh I wish i can spend my birthday under the african sun
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #45 on: October 17, 2006, 10:06 PM »

seem like everyone is a fan of love poetry   Grin oh well let keep em going

Instantely she's into me, thinks of me instintively. Smiles at me visously, closes her eyes when she kisses me.
When I'm gone she misses me, when we play around she disses me. And when I come home late, she looks
at me suspicously. She loves me to death, were one lovely duet. For money or debt know honey were set.
Your my honey bunny, no matter how much money we get.
Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #46 on: October 17, 2006, 10:08 PM »

honey bunny ko  Grin can you please post some of your ''mystery'' stuff? thank you Cool
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #47 on: October 17, 2006, 10:16 PM »

haha yeah hunny bunny,  not one of my most fav lines ok why not mystery
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #48 on: October 18, 2006, 12:03 AM »

His sanity's anatomy, gradually, turns colamity
Burns insanity, Words, "examine me".
Were spoken, he's hoping, he's coping.
He's burning, he's soaking, he's freezing, he's choking.
He's shaking, He's nervous, he needs 2 be smoking.
He's talking, he's screaming, he needs 2 be open.

It's day, it's night, the sun, the moon "the way it's brite".
The weight, the fight, to hate the light? my chest, my throat, the way it's tight".
Rain, pain "plz maintain" The road is slippery "plz change lanes".
He's swerving, he's yearning, he dead, he's determined.
The burden, concerning, his eyes keeps on burning.
For peace, diciest "at least  its some sleep".
At least it will keep, a feast for the deep,
kkutecolo (f)
Re: My Poem
« #49 on: October 18, 2006, 01:04 PM »

She was sleeping peacefully in her room
Oblivious of what awaits her
I walked in to check on her
And it just came over me
It gripped me like scarlet fever

There was a train track
Just some feet away from our backyard
This evil thought became so strong
I sprung into action

I lifted her up
Not a stir from her
I walked out of the room
Not a murmur
Then towards the railway
Not a shout still
I got excited

I laid her quietly on the tracks
And retreated to await the result
I heard a deafening sound
And knew the hour had come

I opened my eyes just in time
To see her wriggle her small body
On the rails and under the train
As the train walked on her
The air became still
So still all life could die
And the sun disappeared


no ryhmes, guys. more like imagination
we need a change for a while though those ryhmes are great
wadya think?
somegirl (f)
Re: My Poem
« #50 on: October 18, 2006, 04:08 PM »

 Shocked
Wale_99
Re: My Poem
« #51 on: October 18, 2006, 11:01 PM »

that free verse was really good  Grin
Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #52 on: October 20, 2006, 04:26 AM »

@ Kkutecolo, my kind of poem Grin
somegirl (f)
Re: My Poem
« #53 on: October 20, 2006, 11:19 PM »

@Kkutecolo: Somehow, I like it but it scares me at the same time!  Shocked
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #54 on: October 21, 2006, 11:16 AM »

Guys!
  I'm back again and it feels real good to be back. Y'all have been dropping nice verses and I love them all.

Peace!
kkutecolo (f)
Re: My Poem
« #55 on: October 23, 2006, 03:58 PM »

thanx

@ somegirl, u man there's a little bit of scare in that?

scorpio, what kind of poem do u like?
 
whiteboy, u are welcome back.
somegirl (f)
Re: My Poem
« #56 on: October 23, 2006, 05:55 PM »

Yes, because I can put myself either in the victim's place or the murderer's place and it is scary, either the thought of having my trust being misused like that or of letting one of my inner demons influence my doing in such a horrible way.
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #57 on: October 24, 2006, 11:41 AM »

Thanks Kutecolor,
  Thats nice! real cool verses. I see nothin scary about that and I wonder why somegirl thinks it is. Its cool, hit me with another,

Here's one tho, it was composed yesterday for someone but here it is for y'all cuties who really worth a 'soulja' like me

WHAT SHE WORTHS

I searched and she was found
then a relationship became bound
I esteem her more than sceptres and thrones
and compare her to none of those
I now see riches as nothin
because with her I know i've got somethin

I reckon no priceless stone to be her peer
for compared with her, gold seems to be old
and silver ranks no good
I adore her more than health or beauty
and prefer her voice to the sounds of the 60's

I love her more than daylight
and even a peaceful night
because her radiance never sleeps; even at night
On her shoulder she gets a kiss from me
because in her company all good things come to me
On my shoulder she rests whenever she's stressed
because i'm a 'soulja' ver willing to hold her


Peace! Grin
kkutecolo (f)
Re: My Poem
« #58 on: October 24, 2006, 04:38 PM »

hey evry1, here's d continuation, what do u think? its titled devil's vice


I turned white and began to crumble

Waking up to a faint sound from afar

I realized what I had done

I had sent my only sister to her early grave!

It dawned on me suddenly

Then an idea struck me like gold

I ought to do same thing to my self


I moved towards the track and slept on it

Another train was moving closer

I felt strong but jumped off the track

When it almost got to me


Then I remembered the main road

I opted for that and walked there

I stood still in the middle eyes closed

But to my terror and surprise

The car stopped,

Blaring its horn at me

I was disappointed as I walked home


Then I came near the river

Just before I got home

I brightened up and went towards it,


I suddenly found myself at the bottom

Not knowing how I jumped in

I looked around to see I was surrounded

By savage-looking monsters

Looking keenly at me hungrily

I felt sick and dizzy


Watching with terror as I saw one of them

Point at something,

My heart immediately jumped into my mouth


There were sharp murdering knives

Arranged in all sizes

I was asked to choose

My own messenger of death

I was then tied to a slate

Shivering as I watched them smack their

Bloodstained mouths hungry for my flesh


I was sure my capture was a blessing to them

To be celebrated after my eventual death


My sister’s death was nobler than my

Impending death, I thought wryly in fright

As I watched them make the fire

To roast my pale flesh

Waiting for my nasty death and doom!
kkutecolo (f)
Re: My Poem
« #59 on: October 24, 2006, 04:44 PM »

oh mine!!!
thats so cooool whiteboy
its really splendid. i love it

@somegirl, i get what u mean. it can get that way. but its just imagination, never really happened. get some grip.

where's wale99 gone, can't c his recent posts.
scorpio, wer are u too?
want u guys back on track now!!!!!!!!!!!  Grin
somegirl (f)
Re: My Poem
« #60 on: October 24, 2006, 04:54 PM »

Hehe, I thought that it is actually one of the strengths of your poem, that it is such gripping.  Grin
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #61 on: October 24, 2006, 05:24 PM »

Thanks Kutie,
   Nice one you've also got there.  It cool and I love it too. I also wonder where Wale has gone. I hope to hear from you soon.

ciao
Scorpio (f)
Re: My Poem
« #62 on: October 24, 2006, 10:16 PM »

u guys are really good ei! kkcutecolo, finish up your poem please  Grin @whiteboi, welcome back,,good stuff too Cheesy
whiteboy (m)
Re: My Poem
« #63 on: October 25, 2006, 09:22 AM »

Thanks Scorpio,
  How r u doing?  Glad to have you back. I wonder where Wale has gone.

Kutie, hit me up with another one of those your poems! I love them.

Peace y'all
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