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whiteboy (m)
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Hey Scorpio, you don't have to like love poems just feel them. Dig this? Let me know!
HEART TO HEART ( Circa '03 )
Heart to heart, you and I A soulmate I need and a true friend indeed yours and mine together as one, United we'll stand but divided we'll fall
Heart to heart is a plan that works Talking with you and sharing real thoughts Feeling alone? You should call on my phone Never again will you be on your own
Your heart for my heart, what about that? Walk on my path and I won't break your heart Heart to heart we should live just as one Sincere soulmates and not just bedmates
How about that Scorpio? Peace
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Scorpio (f)
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@Whiteboi, i try, but i only seem to ''feel'' a little; your latest looks good tho. do you guys compile all this or y'all just let it go to waste?
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lauryn (f)
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Ms Instigator Them ask You 
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Scorpio (f)
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sharrap dia jor! 
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whiteboy (m)
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Thanks Kutecolor! Scorpio, all these are works from my archive so I guess you know i've got a compilation of whatever I post here. In my head and in my files, lol  I'll drop another soon but right now I have to go peace!
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Wale_99
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I let them go 2 watse  but i have some i wrote
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Scorpio (f)
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uh huh!  your case is another game entirely
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Wale_99
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lol scorp i wouldn't be me if i didn;t act the way i act
Listen to the song cry, I'm given you a long bye. I'm trying to show you the love you've giving me, was giving to the wrong guy. Time apart, just to find our heats. Another fight isn't right, I'm not try to start. They say love lasts forever, when you love laugh together. I alway thought me and u, would share one path forever. Torn apart, as soon as we formed our hearts. It felt like it ended as soon we form a start. We persist to try now we face the kiss goodbye. I sometimes feel you should never have been with the guy. "But I still love you" the mrs replys. But the mrs denies, that this is a lie. So he walks up to her and kisses her bye.
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Wale_99
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Not feeling you, absorbing you, sing "morning" to the morning dew cause my sunshine just keeps on pouring through Crimson lips, precision hips, for you I'll do the time, if the prison fits Eyes, wise two pools of the sky, to cool but surprised, for you I would lie Whisper of voice, my sista choice, so I went up 2 da girl, and gave the sista a choice Like choose me abuse me but I refuse thy to lose me, cause truly your my duty
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whiteboy (m)
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Nice one Wale, I dig the second one.
Peace!!
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whiteboy (m)
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Here's one for y'all who don't want to spend your next birthday close to Africa's steaming sun.
AFRICAN SUN
African sun my African sun Pouring down your intense heat on my head you show no mercy and on my skin you show no pity
You make the ground look baked and as I walk the street I feel the heat eating its way through my shoe and into my feet
African sun my African sun Seducing me to stay and play till my grey day, that okay but i'll rather celebrate my next birthday far away from you my African sun
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Scorpio (f)
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lol wale, it's all good. just keep 'em comin 
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Wale_99
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Ahh I wish i can spend my birthday under the african sun
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Wale_99
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seem like everyone is a fan of love poetry  oh well let keep em going Instantely she's into me, thinks of me instintively. Smiles at me visously, closes her eyes when she kisses me. When I'm gone she misses me, when we play around she disses me. And when I come home late, she looks at me suspicously. She loves me to death, were one lovely duet. For money or debt know honey were set. Your my honey bunny, no matter how much money we get.
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Scorpio (f)
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honey bunny ko  can you please post some of your ''mystery'' stuff? thank you 
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Wale_99
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haha yeah hunny bunny, not one of my most fav lines ok why not mystery
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Wale_99
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His sanity's anatomy, gradually, turns colamity Burns insanity, Words, "examine me". Were spoken, he's hoping, he's coping. He's burning, he's soaking, he's freezing, he's choking. He's shaking, He's nervous, he needs 2 be smoking. He's talking, he's screaming, he needs 2 be open.
It's day, it's night, the sun, the moon "the way it's brite". The weight, the fight, to hate the light? my chest, my throat, the way it's tight". Rain, pain "plz maintain" The road is slippery "plz change lanes". He's swerving, he's yearning, he dead, he's determined. The burden, concerning, his eyes keeps on burning. For peace, diciest "at least its some sleep". At least it will keep, a feast for the deep,
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kkutecolo (f)
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She was sleeping peacefully in her room Oblivious of what awaits her I walked in to check on her And it just came over me It gripped me like scarlet fever
There was a train track Just some feet away from our backyard This evil thought became so strong I sprung into action
I lifted her up Not a stir from her I walked out of the room Not a murmur Then towards the railway Not a shout still I got excited
I laid her quietly on the tracks And retreated to await the result I heard a deafening sound And knew the hour had come
I opened my eyes just in time To see her wriggle her small body On the rails and under the train As the train walked on her The air became still So still all life could die And the sun disappeared
no ryhmes, guys. more like imagination we need a change for a while though those ryhmes are great wadya think?
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Wale_99
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that free verse was really good 
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Scorpio (f)
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@ Kkutecolo, my kind of poem 
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somegirl (f)
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@Kkutecolo: Somehow, I like it but it scares me at the same time! 
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whiteboy (m)
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Guys! I'm back again and it feels real good to be back. Y'all have been dropping nice verses and I love them all.
Peace!
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kkutecolo (f)
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thanx
@ somegirl, u man there's a little bit of scare in that?
scorpio, what kind of poem do u like? whiteboy, u are welcome back.
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somegirl (f)
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Yes, because I can put myself either in the victim's place or the murderer's place and it is scary, either the thought of having my trust being misused like that or of letting one of my inner demons influence my doing in such a horrible way.
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whiteboy (m)
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Thanks Kutecolor, Thats nice! real cool verses. I see nothin scary about that and I wonder why somegirl thinks it is. Its cool, hit me with another, Here's one tho, it was composed yesterday for someone but here it is for y'all cuties who really worth a 'soulja' like me WHAT SHE WORTHS I searched and she was found then a relationship became bound I esteem her more than sceptres and thrones and compare her to none of those I now see riches as nothin because with her I know i've got somethin I reckon no priceless stone to be her peer for compared with her, gold seems to be old and silver ranks no good I adore her more than health or beauty and prefer her voice to the sounds of the 60's I love her more than daylight and even a peaceful night because her radiance never sleeps; even at night On her shoulder she gets a kiss from me because in her company all good things come to me On my shoulder she rests whenever she's stressed because i'm a 'soulja' ver willing to hold her Peace! 
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kkutecolo (f)
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hey evry1, here's d continuation, what do u think? its titled devil's vice
I turned white and began to crumble
Waking up to a faint sound from afar
I realized what I had done
I had sent my only sister to her early grave!
It dawned on me suddenly
Then an idea struck me like gold
I ought to do same thing to my self
I moved towards the track and slept on it
Another train was moving closer
I felt strong but jumped off the track
When it almost got to me
Then I remembered the main road
I opted for that and walked there
I stood still in the middle eyes closed
But to my terror and surprise
The car stopped,
Blaring its horn at me
I was disappointed as I walked home
Then I came near the river
Just before I got home
I brightened up and went towards it,
I suddenly found myself at the bottom
Not knowing how I jumped in
I looked around to see I was surrounded
By savage-looking monsters
Looking keenly at me hungrily
I felt sick and dizzy
Watching with terror as I saw one of them
Point at something,
My heart immediately jumped into my mouth
There were sharp murdering knives
Arranged in all sizes
I was asked to choose
My own messenger of death
I was then tied to a slate
Shivering as I watched them smack their
Bloodstained mouths hungry for my flesh
I was sure my capture was a blessing to them
To be celebrated after my eventual death
My sister’s death was nobler than my
Impending death, I thought wryly in fright
As I watched them make the fire
To roast my pale flesh
Waiting for my nasty death and doom!
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kkutecolo (f)
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oh mine!!! thats so cooool whiteboy its really splendid. i love it @somegirl, i get what u mean. it can get that way. but its just imagination, never really happened. get some grip. where's wale99 gone, can't c his recent posts. scorpio, wer are u too? want u guys back on track now!!!!!!!!!!! 
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somegirl (f)
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Hehe, I thought that it is actually one of the strengths of your poem, that it is such gripping. 
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whiteboy (m)
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Thanks Kutie, Nice one you've also got there. It cool and I love it too. I also wonder where Wale has gone. I hope to hear from you soon.
ciao
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Scorpio (f)
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u guys are really good ei! kkcutecolo, finish up your poem please  @whiteboi, welcome back,,good stuff too 
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whiteboy (m)
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Thanks Scorpio, How r u doing? Glad to have you back. I wonder where Wale has gone.
Kutie, hit me up with another one of those your poems! I love them.
Peace y'all
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