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ANDSTEL (m)
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men! i love your peom for my man Tpac, inshort i will like u to try a song on it (if u sing). Its good. carry on  |
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whiteboy (m)
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Thanks man!
Andstel, a lot of my peeps have been trying to get me into singing but I just love writing and doing nothing else. Maybe someday i'll make some tracks but at the moment I have no intentions of singing.
I guess you're a fan of PAC. I'm also a BIG FAN of TUPAC. He's just everything about music.
Welcome to the zone anyway. I hope to get more posts from you.
Peace
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Scorpio (f)
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I guess you're a fan of PAC. I'm also a BIG FAN of TUPAC. He's just everything about music.
yay! i love TUPAC too, what do u think about his last album(d one eminem released), n what song's your fav? |
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whiteboy (m)
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Scorpio,
You love PAC too? Thats cool! Anyway, the album u think is he's last isn't his last album. Which album are you really talking about?
RESURRECTION' from 2003 or 'LOYAL TO THE GAME' from 2004. Let me know!
I love every track from Pac so I can't really tell u which one in particular I really do like. 2Pac has dropped two more after 'LOYAL TO THE GAME'. They are: 2PAC AND FRIENDS and NOTHING TO LOSE(mixtape)'
Go and get them if you really dig Pac.
Holla back!
Peace out girl
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whiteboy (m)
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Guys!
This is not turning out to what I thought it would be. Where is Wale, somegirl and my cutie 'Kutecolor'? someone should please tell me. I need more posts and new poems.
Scorpio, help me out!
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Scorpio (f)
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Loyal to d game's one of my fav i love all d songs on d album. where did u get those mixtapes tho? as per Wale, i'll search for him  , but iono where d others are  |
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whiteboy (m)
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Alright Girl!
Thats cool, I love LOYAL TO THE GAME also. I got the mixtape from mega plaza. Do you really dig PAC? let me know how much and others albums you've heard from PAC.
I love anyone who loves PAC!
Peace!
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kkutecolo (f)
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am rigth here guys. but where are d others? scrpio, hw u going to fix wale? here's d finishing part of the poem 'devils vice. u think its so long? tell me what u think.
……………………………. doom!
The fire flaring up to frighten me more
This reminded me of hell
Where I was sure I was going
For killing my sister and trying to commit suicide
What will God do to me, I wondered.
Smack me and ground me like my parents would have done?
That would only be if He would agree to see me.
That reminded me
What would my parents be doing?
At this moment am being held hostage
By some smelly creatures
Probably been hungry for three days
They would have reported to the cops
To be on the look out for my sister and I
Missing children would be the headline of the news
What irony, I thought
I dozed off
I saw my sister all dressed in white
Beckoning me to come
I couldn’t get to her as much as I tried
Till the breeze wheezed her off and I was left standing
Then she came again
This time with a whip looking angry indeed
As she moved towards me owning a wicked smirk
I shouted as she reached for me
Which must have stirred my captors too
Because they all stared and groaned at me
Then I think they remembered
I was suppose to be their meal
Because they all sprang up
Then one moved towards me
Taking the knife I had earlier chosen
As the others watched losing patience
Then the knife began to descend with the raised hand
As I watched, my eyes popping out off their socket
Sweating my gland out
Agrhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…grh…grh
Just then I opened my eyes and heard the tapping of rain
Probably the water above
As I awaited the blood to gush out of my throat
Then I felt a soft spot under me, which made me turn
I felt a skin beside me
I jumped up thinking it was the monster
Oh no! It couldn’t be……… a ghost?
Alas! it was the body of my sister
Breathing in fact!
Then it struck me she was alive.
I looked up and saw the familiar ceilings
Breathing in the familiar scent.
Then it dawned on me.
I have been dreaming!!!
Oh what a dream!
I felt my throat for the feel of blood to reassure myself
Not there after all
Wow! That was a narrow escape, I thought
As I went back to sleep wrapping my sister around me
It’s going to be a long night, I thought
Only to hear my mum’s voice calling
“Arvee, it’s time to wake up”,
OH NO, NOT THAT!
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Scorpio (f)
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i love it Kkutecolo, big up's girl |
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whiteboy (m)
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Hey Kutie,
Its cool but just too long. Nice one girl!
Holla back!
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kkutecolo (f)
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i thot that too whiteboy, too long.but it wudnt be comprehended if its shortened so i guess i just leave it that way. thanx scorpio, am glad u love it. thanx all, u are pillars of encouragement.u guys are not hitting in poems, wats up?and where d heck is wale gone to?scorpio i thot u were going to fix that
c this
When i realize how he has suffered
When i realize what he has passed through
Even acknowledging what was at stake
He still died for my sins
Oh! how i have flawed
And made myself ungrateful
Even nailing him on the cross a second time
With my numerous shortcomings
He still calls me to repentance
And opens wide His arms to cuddle me
And accepts me into His fold
Whenever i overcome my transgressions
its free verse.watdya think?
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whiteboy (m)
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Hey y'all,
Just writing to say hi. Bye!
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whiteboy (m)
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Here's just another I dug out from my archive. I hope y'all will like it. It was written specially for my kid brother when he turned 9 in '99.
WORDS TO A LAD
Be a kid and take the lead
lace your boot and lead your troop
go to school and have a tool
hold your head, don't be a nerd
Stay in school and play the rules
be a youth and know your route
walk the route and get a job
Use your head, don't be misled
Be a man and have a plan
take a dive and grab a wife
lay your bed and rest your head
then have some kids and live your life
Peace y'all
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Scorpio (f)
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@Whiteboi, aww @ Thread, i think Wale's a little ill, i hope he gets better soon still  |
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whiteboy (m)
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Hey Scorpio,
Are u serious? I also hope he gets well soon. How about u? How r u doin'? Let me know whats up with you. Hit me up with another poem girl!
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Scorpio (f)
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Hey Scorpio,
Are u serious? I also hope he gets well soon. How about u? How r u doin'? Let me know whats up with you. Hit me up with another poem girl! I'm good, thanks for askin how r u doin tho? lol, u're supposed to hit me with a poem, u kno i can't write. but don't make it all lovey dovey tho, a little mystery, blood n that stuff does it for me thank ya  |
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whiteboy (m)
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Alright girl,
I'll drop one for you soon. Maybe in my next post but right now I have to go, I'll drop it later.
Bye
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kkutecolo (f)
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i hope wale gets well soon. besides, somegirl is no were to be found too.
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somegirl (f)
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Kkutecolo, I'm at Nairaland just not in every thread!  How are you doing? |
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whiteboy (m)
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Hey y'all,
I see you're all still around. How r u doing Kutie? and how about u somegirl? I hope to hear from Wale soon.
Peace y'all
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kkutecolo (f)
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i can now relax. hw u all? am cool whiteboy. scorpio tell wale to get well soon plz, because we are all missin him. arent we, guys?
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somegirl (f)
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Hi Whiteboy, I'm feeling fine now.  And you? |
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whiteboy (m)
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Hey somegirl,
I'm doing good too. Hit me up with a poem.
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somegirl (f)
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Hi, sorry, but I'm not in the mood to write a poem right now.  |
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Wale_99
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Well gotta start by saying happy b-day 2 me I was pretty sick and now im back I like all the poemz that u guys are producing |
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whiteboy (m)
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Happy birthday to you bro.,
I hope you'll start dropping more poems soon.
I wish you all the best!
Peace
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kkutecolo (f)
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happy birthday wale, when was that? its good u are back.
hello evry1
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Scorpio (f)
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Happy Birthday Wale |
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Wale_99
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Novemeber 15 was my b-day thank all for the well wishing, |
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Wale_99
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Envision this prison I live in
Decisions were giving, this mission for living previsions
Of bone and flesh, this fragile body, so prone of death
A Life, tailor made, stitched and sown of stress
Soul tolled at whole, a cold hold that sold
Every ounce of strength
Death so close that I even count my breaths
The elliptical moon shines sot on this literal tomb
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