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debest1 (m)
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Hurled uo together at the back of Emre's car, C'girl and Akin were united at last, my mum Akin please help me get her she pleaded repeatedly. Just then a beeping sound appeared on Akin's laptop, he had taken it away with him from the crime scene as he was rescued; the message " You have 60 seconds to confirm this transaction" flashed across the screen, Akin pressed the enter key intending to cancel the transaction, but then he was asked to confirm recipient's account details. He proceeded to do so and confirmed the name as Mr. A Jones; and a few minutes later a message confirming the sum of $2bn had been transferred to his account in Monaco. ____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________ As they landed at JFK the next day, C'girl had briefed Akin on the plight of Lucy, he knew the chief would be prepared to put all their differences aside to rescue his golden girl. He was soon met at the airport by the Chief and was promptly ushered into his car, I should have you in jail Akin, but i've heard of the good job you did in thwarting the multi-billion dollar fraud in europe and am sorry about your mom, the Chief said as they lead the convoy to what they believe to be where Lucy is held. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________ Sparky's curiosity about the hidden dungeon kept growing by the day, and so was his fondness for fondling Lucy's breasts every morning; as he approached her cell for his daily fix, he was soon distracted by a cal on his phone. Lucy as primed for her daily ordeal but was suprised to find the cell door open and sparky no where in sight, she peed through the door, and seeing noone she sneaked out grabbing a few objects as she returned back. Sparky returned to the cell and as he approached her with his usual wry smile, he was stabbed in the groin repeatedly by Lucy, who then escaped with his gun and phone. She immediately sent a txt message to the Chief detailing where she thought she was held
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Scrambling through the dingy room seeking any decent cloth to protect her decency, she managed to find an old fur coat, but just she was putting it on one of the guards had noticed the dying sparky and sneaked in on her. Grabbing her by the throat with a gun to her head Lucy’s reprieve was short-lived. Soon after the sound of siren surrounding the building offered her a renewed hope. The mob knew that they had no chance against the hoards of police and FBI agents circling the perimeter, hence they intended to use Lucy as a get out of jail card. They threatened to kill her if they are not allowed free run out of the building, but with the police not in any negotiation mood, FBI agents stormed the building. Two hours later, the lifeless body of Lucy was being carried into the ambulance; the medical crew had tried to save her after she was accidentally shot by the police while attempting to save her. C’girl was however relieved to be reunited with her mother as both ladies were driven back home by Akin
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debest1 (m)
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The short journey to Long Island was made all the more pleasurable by the news that Debest had been killed by the russians while attempting to retrieve the $2bn he siphoned to his personal account under the name of Mr. Jones, his killers themselves killed while trying to escape from the Turkish police. The smile on Akin's face was palpable enough for C'girl to ask, what it honey? Well maybe we should go on holiday, akin replied somehwere exotic Monaco?
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debest1 (m)
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The official burial of Lucy was as sombre as could be expected, she had given her all in an attempt to be taken seriously as an agent, and the Chief's speech reflected just how much the agency regarded her.
Akin spent the afternoon in the company of C'girl and her parents before jetting off to London with her for his mum's burial. The official reading of Sola's last will made for interesting reading as she left her entire estate to Akin, and as expected the $100m he had cleverly made the mob pay into her account was eventually transfered to him without anyone ever tracing the money back to him.
A few hours later he was proposing to her at the Eiffel Tower in paris before jetting off to Monaco; and with $100m burning a hole in his pocket, he was never going to return to the agency, why should I he asked his wife as they sun-bathed on their latest acquisition - the Eclipse (Yatch) conveniently forgetting the trials and travails of the past month or so,
*************************************THE END*******************************© 2009
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AccoPen (m)
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@ debest,
Don't you think this is a good point to put a final full stop or the conventional "THE END" and wait for feedbacks from readers? Also, suggestions for story title are welcome from readers.
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patwhizkid (f)
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Re:
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Whao!
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debest1 (m)
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@ debest,
Don't you think this is a good point to put a final full stop or the conventional "THE END" and wait for feedbacks from readers? Also, suggestions for story title are welcome from readers.
Yes Accorn, this is indeed a good place to draw the curtain,,,,shame the initiator of the story has gone AWOL,
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AccoPen (m)
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debest, my e-mail is now visible. Pls send me your e-mail ad. We need to talk.
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adebayo201 (m)
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ouch 
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AccoPen (m)
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For God's sake, where is countrygrl?
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debest1 (m)
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For God's sake, where is countrygrl?
lol i tire for the girl ooooooo Maybe Debest really did kidnap her Accopen, how u dey?
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AccoPen (m)
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debest, i'm kool. I took a journey to you mail box earlier today and i dropped something there. What?
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AccoPen (m)
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adebayo, are u starting anoda stopy?
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adebayo201 (m)
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adebayo, are u starting anoda stopy?
4 where 
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