As i walk along the cold distant shores i feel a warm sensation flow rite under me could it be wind could it be water could it be the spirit i can't tell when it has gone but i knoe smthing stirred up inside me. , lol
inspite of what fellow nairalnders might have said , i think your poem's pretty good , makes sense and a whole lot of folks can relate to it , not too deep but there's a lot 2 read between the lines. only minus is some of your choice of words and incorrect spellings that could completely take the context out of your cipher! otherwise, nice work man , u can only get better!
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