A Wish

hmmmmmmmmm, i can smell some traces

got no rift with no one

and who's that your friend??

who is this girl, wole so u fighting over a girl while am here.

@ pheonixman
hope u not the one cause i trust u, u wont do that. lol

@ samson

whats up, u left me hanging on the other day, i need my food.

i love this thread alot, Christina, hope u still remember about me? check the first page of this thread, want to guys to check my poems as well, and let me know how it's. I guess this thread is a lovely one, i have some little romantic poem, life poem and pain poems, if anyone want to context. lol

That was how i felt as well when i read this thread so lovely and interesting

that is lovely Sam, so do u want it to be reality poems, romance or anyone, just let me know

Feel me on this Sam



AM IN LOVE WITH UNLOVABLE,

Why is it that nature does his things this way?

Maybe it’s meant to be this way,

Or it’s destined to be this way but it will only be possible if it’s destined to be,

Why is it that I have deep feeling for unlovable?

Maybe is because we have something in common and because she is sweet and decent,

I don’t know what others think of her but she is totally a different being to me,

She always captured me and catches my attention, whenever we meet coincidentally,

Why is it that the feelings cannot be wiped away?

Even though I tried all my possible best to forget about her,

The feelings is just getting deep and a lot deeper each time I see her,

And she is becoming irresistible,

To the extent that I always want to see her each and every moment,

And with the pretty smile on her face,

Why can’t she be someone else?

Why can’t I have same feelings and same affection, and happiness I always feel for her with someone else?

Why did nature get me closer to her even when she is unlovable?

Maybe that is how we destined to meet,

How did I even get to the situation that make her unlovable?

How I wish she were lovable to me, so that I will be able to express my feelings,

I don’t even know how she will take it when I express my feelings for her,

I don’t know how she will take it,

Whether she will be happy or feel so disappoint about me,
How I wish I could have same feelings for someone who’s is lovable and as sweet as she’s,

I wish the unlovable might as well think about me as well,

But the connection is somehow wrong,

I hope and I wish I could forget about her,

Or for God to make miracle happen sometimes,

Anyway it may happen to make her feel same way about me,

Or to let me have her for myself,

And I hope and I wish she could be mine for the rest of my life,

Am sure it will be a dream comes true for both of us.




31st December 2006
Composed by: Adetona Yusuf
Inspired by a friend

LIVING JUST FOR You


She always watched you from afar,
with all her feelings kept inside.
Though she never did admit it,
she'D die just to be at your side.

Wondered how she fell for you,
she was won over by your charms.
Needed to feel your warm embrace,
she'D die to be inside your arms.

Dreamed of you every night,
she loved that more than anything.
Fantasizing of your love,
she'D die to be your everything.

Wanted at times to feel your lips,
hoping that soon you'D grant her this.
Only to have you close to her,
she'D die to give into your kiss.

Wished each day this love would last,
that you'D always be together.
To hear your soft and loving words,
she'D die to know you mean forever.

And when she finally got her wish,
she realized that this love was true.
Before, she'D die to have your love,
but now she's living just for you.

 [sub][/sub]clears throat.

any judge around

chiegemba, u are welcome as our judge, so tell us the rules of we the contestants are to follow and i hope there would be some juicy juicy for the winner. lol

Leaving footprints on the sand,


Hand in hand u walked with me,
As the Sun slowly faded
Into the gentle blue sea,


I'D pictured this moment,
A thousand times before,
In my most precious dream,
I know I couldnt love anyone more,


It was at that instant,
In my heart I knew,
There was nothing in this world,
I wouldn't do for you,

Trying to find a comparison ,
To my love and devotion, 
Would be as helpless and tiring,
As counting the raindrops in the ocean,

I always wonder if God,
Send us each a true love, 
He proved it to me with u,
His messenger from above,

For in u I see my future,
And everything that is real,
How could I possibly ,
Put into words wht I feel,

If tomorrow there is no Sun,
My words fail to rhyme,
My Love would still be yours, 
Until the end of time,

i will love to know u
because i see the spirit of a
great woman in your thoughts

PAIN

Their is alot in the word as it is

It can be pain of love sometime

It can also be pain of rejection

It can as well be pain of suffering from illness

The most awful one is the pain of love

It goes through every nook and cranny in your body

It affect you physically and mentally

It take everything away from you

The pain can turn a successful man to being nothing because of the feelings of being nothing without the present of his partner

The pain of love is the strongest pain that cannot be shared by another person except the person that feels the pain

Pain of love can turn the greatest to nothing

And an intelligent man to a person of no brain

It cannot be cured by any professional or native doctor

The only cure is only with the person with the pain

By taking his mind away from the person that cause the pain


Adetona Yusuf

@ Yusufadeto, Nice piece, 

@ Yusufadeto, I like your poem.Its a very nice one and your last entry was so nice , You got Great talents though! Keep it up.
@ Saintsam, your poem was good too. Am actually having a hard time being a judge here. You write really good. {Wish i could write that way} .

Now! Una 2 did a very good job here. D prob. come b say how una go spilt d juicy stuff without d juice pourin away .

"Keep up d good work;'you to' And reach 4 d sky" No go jam sun sha oooo 

Thanx alot for that comment Chiegemba, i guess it should be hard, but i think it a good thing that i have someone that appreciate my creativity