Backlash (a Novel)- first chapters

Nice work, I like the style good for the type of story, that is detective. I think you are using some wrong expressions though in some places and of course quite a few typos. Otherwise, very captivating characters. The plot drags at times but I assume this is the beginning. The first part was excellent, with lots of action. Try to follow through on that. Cheers.

I do not worry about plagiarism like you I also have my story here on naira land and on nigeria village square.