The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.

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Scofield007 (m)
Re: The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.
« #128 on: October 09, 2009, 07:52 AM »

Man, now i know its out easy.
Atreus (m)
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« #129 on: October 13, 2009, 11:03 PM »

Okay,here's the next scene:
"You told her?",Eghosa asked. "I'm sorry. It just. . . I'm sorry. I didn't mean to drag you into this",he replied. "She's my sister. She may be mad at me now,but she'll get over it. Now you,i'm not so sure of". "She can't keep doing this to me,Eghosa. She can't keep punishing me for a crime i know nothing of. It's not fair",he said,sounding anguished. Eghosa saw,and recognised what he was-a man torn between his love for a woman and the pain she was causing him. Eghosa reached out to him an squeezed his arm in a gesture of comfort. "One thing i'm absolutely sure of is that Claire cares about you. A lot. For what it's worth,i think you guys are gonna work things out",she said. "Thanks",he replied. "You said something about her punishing you? Did you learn anything new?",she asked seconds later. "Not a helluva lot. Just that,apparently,there's a method to her madness. She broke up with me through a text",he said and was interrupted by Eghosa who said with a gasp;"A text?". "Yeah",he replied,and continued;"Anyway,tonight i figured out that she's mad at me for something i did. The last thing she said was that i was the one who threw our relationship away,not her". "So what did you do?",Eghosa asked. "That's just it. I have no idea". "Figures",Eghosa said with a shrug and continued;"I'll talk to her. I'm not promising anything,but i'll try to find out what's going on in her head". "Thank you",he said gratefully. "Don't thank me yet. It might be days before i find out anything useful. Stick around". "I will. At first i was just angry at her for being so cruel-that's why i stayed away for so long,and maybe my pride had something to do with it,but after tonight,i know something's up,and i'm not going anywhere until i find out what it is". "That's the spirit. Gotta run. Oh snap! I almost forgot i've gotta pay the bill". "Don't worry. I got it",he said. "Thanks",she said and continued;"Bye!". "Bye",he replied as she left Chez Rouge.
Atreus (m)
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« #130 on: October 14, 2009, 07:39 AM »

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Miriam and her sisters had just gotten home. Claire greeted their parents and headed straight to her room. Eghosa followed her after a rushed greeting amd Miriam went to her room after doing the same. Claire was sitting on her bed. "Claire. . . ? Claire we've gotta talk about this". "I'd rather we didn't. Eghosa,i'm pissed off. At you. At Owen. At the whole friggin' world. You knew i didn't want to see him,and yet,you went right ahead and set tonight up",Claire said,trying to take of her heels and attacking them with a ferocity that showed how angry she was. "Claire? I'm sorry. You didn't let me in. You didn't tell me what was going on". "Oh so this is my fault?",Claire cut in. "I didn't say that. Look i'm sorry,okay,but did you expect me to just sit there and do nothing? I mean,a few weeks ago you two were all lovey-dovey,and now you don't even wanna talk about the guy?",she asked. "I'm never lovey-dovey",Claire said crossly. "Okay,so maybe not lovey-dovey. But you were happy with him,and then,all of a sudden,boom! It's over. You break up with him in a text?",Eghosa asked,incredulement creeping into her voice. "That's cruel,Claire. A text? How could you do that to him?" "So now i'm the bad guy,huh? You're my sister. You're supposed to be on my side",Claire said. "This is not about taking sides Claire. It's about you. I love you to pieces. I want you to be happy. You're happy with him,he's crazy about you. . " "Yeah? Well apparently,he's not as crazy about me as i thought",Claire said quietly. "Whaddya mean?",Eghosa asked. It doesn't matter anymore",Claire replied with a resigned sigh. "See this is what i mean Claire. You don't wanna let me in". "It hurts to admit it to myself. I don't think i can handle admitting it to someone else"Claire replied softly. Eghosa came to her,sat down beside her and held her hand. "Did he. . . Did he cheat?",shd asked just as softly. "He might as well have. Infact,this was much worse. I mean if he cheated,you could say it was just sex,right? But this was. . . .
Atreus (m)
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« #131 on: October 14, 2009, 07:50 AM »

"What happened?",Eghosa asked. "I can't talk about it Eghe. God. . . I so didn't want this. When he came around,i didn't wanna get into a relationship with him. I knew his type. I knew it wasn't gonna last. I knew",she said,tears rolling down her cheeks. Eghose put an arm around her and said;"I'm so sorry". "I just wish this had happened sooner. If i didn't love him as much as i do,then this wouldn't hurt as bad as it does". "And he had the nerve to act like he was completely  innocent. Why didn't you tell me sooner? I'd have shown him a thing or two",Eghosa said. Claire smiled through her tears-that was classic Eghosa,fiercely protective,always ready to rip the head off anyone who hurt her family or the people she cared about. "It doesn't matter anymore Eghosa. I love him,but i'll get over it",Claire said and continued;"I have to".
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semid4lyfe (m)
Re: The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.
« #132 on: October 14, 2009, 08:57 AM »

Atreus, I'm glad u're back.
Turiano (m)
Re: The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.
« #133 on: October 14, 2009, 03:54 PM »

@poster good piece kip on gvn us the hintch.dnt black out.
phraoh (m)
Re: The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.
« #134 on: October 14, 2009, 08:30 PM »

Atrues,

  wat did d guy do to her.
Atreus (m)
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« #135 on: October 14, 2009, 10:54 PM »

You'll soon find out. Prolly tommorow when i post the next few scenes.
phraoh (m)
Re: The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.
« #136 on: October 19, 2009, 02:36 PM »

I belv ua 2moro has becum 1 week.Can u write up and upload dem 1ce.
adebayo201 (m)
Re: The Beginning Of A Teenage Love Affair.
« #137 on: October 19, 2009, 08:16 PM »

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